Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

What a jerk Ben is for dating his boyfriend's friend.  This could  drive a wedge between Michael and Ben,  between Michael and Justin,  between Ben and Justin when it ends, and between Brian and Ben. Ben is actually more than a jerk,  he is stupid.



Author's Response:

I still like Ben. Asking Justin out might be a bad idea, but I don't think that makes him a bad person.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2014 04:59 PM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

You know, before this chapter, I didn't realize actually just how much Brian hurt Justin with his offer. I know myself how horrible it is to love someone, but have an open relationship. You're starting to like some of other people, too, and you feel confused and even desperate. Poor Justin... and poor Brian for doing it to himself. To their relationship. I feel like he broke something, and now it will be hard to mend it. Very hard. Thank you for the great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Brian is breaking something for sure and hurting Justin in ways he never anticipated. But as Brian shows us every day, broken things can still be beautiful...and they are almost always stronger. B/J are going to come out of this stronger and more beautiful for sure. But getting through to the end without losing too much of themselves or of each other, well, that will be a challenge.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2014 04:28 PM · On: ----- and ----- Sitting in a Tree...

Ouch, that was painful, but so hot and great! I LOVE Brian's jealousy, that's my absolutely favorite thing. Wonderful chapter, thank you, I just love how yo described everything! My joy at your coming back doesn't seem to dicrease, it's still overwhelming! 



Author's Response:

Awwww...you're giving me the warm and fuzzies. Honestly, being back has been pretty amazing for me, too. I'm writing every day, longer updates, and I think better than ever...It's made me really happy.

My joy at your reviews is only increasing with each one. Every time I see your screen name, I get excited :-) 

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2014 04:22 PM · On: F***ed and F***ed

Oh-oh-oh, I LOVED this chapter! Wow! I sort of understand where Brian's coming from, but Christ, will he be even able to tolerate his own conditions?! He is sooo jealous already! But I love Ben and Justin, too - they were always my secret kick, I think they look beautiful together. Not as much as Brian and Justin, of course. 

Thanks! And double wow, again! Fantastic idea!



Author's Response:

If Brian didn't exist, perish the thought, I think I might be down for some Ben/Justin. I've been feeling all naughty and bad writing them together, but a good naughty and bad. 

Brian's actions, as they often are, are rooted in a good thought and a real concern, but his execution is almost always flawed. Truth be told, given his concern, there was really no right way to allay it. Just hoping and being flexible, open. Not Brian's strong suit. Even more, this "solution" allows him to put a little distance between him and Justin, which he feels he needs, but deep, deep down doesn't really want. Loving Justin from afar was safe. He could feel close, feel intimacy, without having so much to lose. Without feeling exposed. The last three months have had him feeling amazing, but off-kilter. At the end of the day, what he really wants is for Justin to look around and still choose him.

If for no other reason, Ben is the perfect first non-Brian option for Justin because he and Brian differ so very much. We saw that in their first kiss, in the way Ben immediately said what he wanted, allowed himself to be vulnerable, to risk rejection. This experience, as hard as it is for many B/J fans to watch, is necessary for both Brian and Justin. Justin has to be offered an easier choice, someone strong, sexy, and smart without all the baggage Brian carries so that he can see just how much he loves Brian, not in spite of the ways he's broken, but in some weird way because of them. Brian is who he is because of his life experiences, among other things, and Brian needs to know that Justin likes/loves/adores THAT person. 

Reviewer: ferris (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2014 09:02 AM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

Ben and Justin?  This sounds like a horrible idea.  If it comes to sex,  how will they all sit together.   The awkwardness would be horrible.  Ben, Michael  and Brian might been able to get past it in canon,  but this is different.



Author's Response:

Keep in mind Michael and Ben met only a month or so ago, and Ben freely admitted it was probably a terrible idea asking Justin out.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2014 06:12 PM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

I realize this is an AU fic, but the characters are still the characters even if they are a different age.  And in the show I don't recall Michael or Ben ever being remotely attracted to Justin. Color me confused.  



Author's Response:

I'm not sure we would necessarily have known about such attractions (yet they could still have existed)...Ben was a lot older than Justin on the show. So was Mikey. A lot of people thought it was wrong for Brian to be attracted to someone so much younger...I think age does actually play a role in who we allow ourselves to pursue and show attraction for. 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 05:22 PM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

This is a real mess, I honestly think that Brian should have taken Brandon's advice and called the whole mishoganah thing off. It clearly hurts him to see Justin with someone else so why not stop the pain before it gets too deep.

Author's Response:

I agree. But Brian is worried. He thinks Justin needs more experience before settling down. And ... he's a little freaked out. This is fairly typical Brian behavior...Justin gets too close, he shuts down, acts kind of jerk-y, and hurts as a result.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 10:52 AM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

Oh dear I do not se how this helps either of our boys

Author's Response:

You're in good company :-)

Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 08:52 AM · On: Scenes from a Mall, Part 1

Well that's rubbish challenge. How can you put the person you love in such situation as to date kiss n Fuck another??  Well Brian better get a taste of his own medicine. He better beg for forgiveness from Justin. And I hope he later realize that it was a shitty challenge. 



Author's Response:

Brian is worried about being the only person Justin has ever been with. He's scared to let himself be happy. He's not exactly happy about Justin's dating other people, but if Justin does and still chooses Brian that would be good...and if he doesn't, Brian thinks it's better that it happens now. Rather than later.

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2014 01:00 PM · On: ----- and ----- Sitting in a Tree...

Have I mentioned I love this. It's warm and funny but it has an edge that stops it from being schmaltzy and the storyline has so much potential. Am loving Justin's secret too. Any chance you might find the time to revisit some of your older fics ? Have always had a soft spot for HSII  .. :)



Author's Response:

What a wonderful compliment! Be careful...your making it hard for me to get through doorways (head too big now).

Yes, indeed. I'm finishing Pieces II, Justin's Secret, and Friendship or Foreplay now. In September, I'll start finishing Taylor, Buttercup and Enigma, and Fawn.Armani or How Sweet It Is.

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2014 06:01 AM · On: ----- and ----- Sitting in a Tree...

I'm so glad you are back! I don't know where you were but don't ever leave again please :) I've read your stories so many times I love where this story is going but please mire buttercup and enigma!!!



Author's Response:

Awww...you're giving me a serious case of the warm and fuzzies :-)

It was work mostly...also had a bad breakup...didn't think I could write hopefully about love.

I have no intention of going anywhere :-) I've been writing every day and it feels awesome (come heck or high water, I don't want to stop that trend). I wish I had pushed myself to keep going...probably would have made me feel better (instead of worse). 

B&E is on the docket for September :-) I'm really excited. I love that fic.

Right now I'm doing Friendship or Foreplay, Justin's Secret, and Pieces II.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 04:39 AM · On: ----- and ----- Sitting in a Tree...

I think someone is starting to regret their decision. It's kinda sad in a way that they are essentially using their friends as pawns in this little experiment. I can't wait to see how they survive through it all.

Author's Response:

I kind of see it the other way...their friends are using their current discord to get a little :-D :-D :-D

In any case, they are all going into this with eyes wide open...

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2014 02:52 AM · On: ----- and ----- Sitting in a Tree...

Why do I have "methinks he doth protest too much" going thru my head after the coffee cup shatters?

Great story!  Cant wait or more.

Sandy



Author's Response:

Yes...Brian is an enigma, wrapped in a riddle, shrouded in hotness. NOT. :-)

I'm so glad you are enjoying this fic! Especially now when things have taken a bad turn.

Reviewer: Magda (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 11:59 PM · On: F***ed and F***ed

This situation really is fucked. And I'm not sure if I like it... Well, we will see, can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Mos def :-)

I'm so happy you are eager for what comes next!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 02:13 PM · On: F***ed and F***ed

Okay...Justin and Ben...i don't know how to feel about that. What I really don't get, is why Brian would suggest that they see other people after waiting for so long to be together and doing it the very next day after taking Justin's virginity...no disrespect intended but it just seems wrong.

Author's Response:

It's actually very Brian of him. He's freaking out a little. Things have been too good. Justin has gotten too close. He's not used to being happy, being loved the way Justin loves him, and he's scared to lose it in another way (Justin leaving later). He's worried about Justin only ever having been with him. What he said to Justin was honest. Just not completely.

PS: That first time must have been pretty awesome (sending him into a tail spin like that--a lot of pressure on me later to write it. But I think I'm up to the challenge)

Reviewer: Susie (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 10:30 AM · On: F***ed and F***ed

Ooh, at first I thought Brian's idea was very stupid. But now I'm almost sure it was a good decision, seeing how soon and easily Justin is attracted to another man. Hm... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Justin has always been attracted to other men. He just never acted on it. Right now, he's hurt and angry. Brian rejected him at a point where he was very vulnerable. Ben's wanting Justin is making that hurt a little less bad.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:49 PM · On: Prom: Conclusion

And all this was before they realized that the other really cared.  So what happened afterwards with Mikey and Tom?



Author's Response:

They knew the other loved them...question is in what way? normal friend stuff...they are afraid to read the signs wrong and ruin their friendship. We are like "duh"...but we know they are the endgame already, so...it doesn't count

You will learn what happened with Mikey and Tom :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:34 PM · On: Prom: Penultimate Part

Which proves the point no good deed goes unpunished and I guess that includes bad deeds.  Scheme three sounds promising though.



Author's Response:

It was a lot of fun writing Brian's schemes' backfiring. And so completely :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:18 PM · On: My Own Private Hell...and My Release

What have you planned.  Surely Brian can't be assured that all is forgiven.



Author's Response:

indeed not :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 04:30 PM · On: The Prom continued

Who knew Brian was so devious.  Well Duh!



Author's Response:

grinning

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:55 AM · On: Defining Moments, Part 2: Prom

Hmmm, interesting look at their prom.



Author's Response:

This was fun to think about...what would they have done if they were the same age

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:23 AM · On: Someday, Part 5

So they both got the ultimate in Christmas gifts.  I like how Brandon wasn't making fun and Em was trying not to tell what was being said. Who knows what will happen next?



Author's Response:

(nodding)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:18 AM · On: Someday, Part 4

I think the dedication was perfect timing.



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:13 AM · On: Someday, Part 3

Now what does Brian have planned that he needs Justin sober?



Author's Response:

What indeed? Good catch :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:04 AM · On: Someday, Part 2

Well, when do we get to find out everyone's reaction to the leather clad Justin?



Author's Response:

I almost always satisfy curiosity right away...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:00 AM · On: Someday, Part 1

Sounds like Justin really got lucky.  I never knew all that happened in 1959.  Of course I wasn't born yet either.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you Interwebs!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:56 AM · On: First Snow, Part 3

Justin's first blow job was a doozy.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:26 AM · On: First Snow, Part 2

Sounds like it's Brian who's gonna be happy.



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:16 AM · On: First Snow, Part 1

Oh, come on.  There must be some way to find out what happened to Justin's family.  It is nice to see that Brian is happy and they haven't even got down to it yet.



Author's Response:

That will come back into play soon

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:10 AM · On: Haunted

Those two need to talk.  I'm wondering about the little girl who might be Justin's sister too.  When do we find out?



Author's Response:

Soon

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:08 AM · On: Defining Moments, Part 1: Our Real First Kiss

Even way back then, they had something going.



Author's Response:

Yeah :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 06:06 AM · On: Denial, Part 2

Okay, he hasn't looked into it yet.  At the rate they are going it is good one of them is experience.



Author's Response:

I kind of like the idea of their going slow...if you jump right to sex, you miss a lot

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 05:57 AM · On: Denial, Part 1

Brian wanting to talk.  Shocking.  Him wanting to do something rather then just brood.  Typical Brian, in a good way.  I assume he found out something.



Author's Response:

Indeed...although one of the many other Brians would probably argue that sex is sometimes talking :-) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 05:49 AM · On: The Pisces Full Moon

I'm glad to see they are taking it slow, so that every new experience is amazing.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 04:36 AM · On: How We Met Ben

Well I can guess that's gonna be a done deal.  Great going, Daphne!



Author's Response:

She's awesome!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2014 11:26 PM · On: Prom: Conclusion

I love this. 



Author's Response:

That's wonderful to hear!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 09:39 PM · On: How We Met Daphne

What a way to meet.  All out war.  I'm glad I didn't know her when I was growing up, gathering up doggie poo is not my thing.



Author's Response:

That was a fun chapter to write :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Interlude: First Date

Wow.  What a surprise.  The candy bouquet was a wonderful choice, no allergies.  The carnival was great too, but running into Craig and finding out that Justin has a sister, now that's a shocker.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked their date. I think Brian did pretty well, too. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 08:31 PM · On: How We Met Mikey

What a twist.  Mikey lusting after Justin!



Author's Response:

that was a lot of fun for me to write...especially Brian's reaction.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 07:36 PM · On: Interlude: Fondling Brian in the Law Library

LOL.  So that was Justin's very first blow job.  Funny.  I'll never be able to go to a library again and not giggle.



Author's Response:

It's nice to know my stories are having an impact on people :-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 07:00 PM · On: How We Met Brandon (sort of)

Nicely put thoughts on why Brandon and Justin aren't friends.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 06:39 PM · On: Interlude: Walking Justin to Class

This may be short, but it was so cute.



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 06:33 PM · On: How We Met Ted

So Brandon knew early on that Brian loved Justin.  And we get to learn how Ted comes into the story.



Author's Response:

Brandon knows all....

:-D :-D :-D

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 05:27 AM · On: Our Morning Routine, the Revised Edition

At least they live together, but why does Brandon think they'll wait three months?



Author's Response:

He is wise :-)

The sex issue is weird for this incarnation of B/J (for a few reasons).

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 04:09 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

After all that time they finally admitted they loved each other!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 01:28 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 3

Keeping this is Brian, I thought it went over pretty well. 



Author's Response:

I agree :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 11:56 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 2

And to think all he did was leave him with hickies and it pushed him over the edge.



Author's Response:

I've really enjoyed the challenge of writing sex scenes for them without actual sex. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 08:24 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 1

Is Justin afraid that once they do it Brian will go back to his old ways?  Justin should be tickled pink that Brian's practically admitted he loves him.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is. Yes, he should be.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 07:24 PM · On: Terms

It's obvious that Brian has picked up a lot of knowledge working in a law office.  He can work a deal like nobodies business.



Author's Response:

Yes, indeed!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 06:55 PM · On: Maybe Not

Is there hope that they will come together?  What will happen when Brian reverts to his sleeping around ways?



Author's Response:

that would definitely put the kibosh on their budding relationship...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 06:18 PM · On: The Boy Is Mine

Brian has staked his claim.  Now what's he going to do about it?



Author's Response:

Indeed he has. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 05:33 PM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 2

It appears Brian cares more for Justin than he is willing to admit.



Author's Response:

yup

Reviewer: nata (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2014 02:14 PM · On: Prom: Conclusion

i was reading this story all day, it’s so great! i love that brian finally reacted when he saw ethan approach Justin, he should have claimed justin years ago. the last chapter you posted was great! i'm happy to read it! the prom was very beautiful, and i love that brian is very possessive and loving but in canon. i never like michael, but i like that brian is jealous of him, he even came up with a big great plan to keep him busy - that was genius. i'm glad the prom didn't end up badly, like in real justin's life. i want more! thanks!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I tell you...I have spent countless hours finding ways to impose my will on Brian (keep him Brian but get him to do what I want---In other stories, I've tortured --and I mean tortured-- Justin for this reason--this one was a little easier because they are younger and started as best friends.) I'm always worried about taking Brian too far outside of himself. So it's a relief that you think I'm doing pretty good on that front.

I had soooo much fun scheming with Brian. 

I'm especially glad you liked the prom...I hurt my brain figuring out how things should go :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 1

What an interesting story line.  Look forward to reading where you've taken them.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the premise :-)

I really wanted to take a crack at Brian's childhood/adolescence...and I wondered how having Justin in his life earlier would have affected him.

Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 06:56 PM · On: Prom: Conclusion

I loved this chapter, I can’t tell you how much I enjoy the fact that you’re really back, giving us all these wonderful updates. Will you update on fanfiction.net too, by the way?

Oh, Brian is *so* jealous! I try to imagine what their life with Justin will be in the future, considering how he thinks of basically everyone as of threat. But I’m crazy about possessive Brian. Poor Michael – he will have his heart broken if he realizes that Brian set everything up. And Justin? I doubt he’ll be happy.

I loved the moment when Justin misunderstood what Brian meant :) He can be so naïve sometimes, and it’s so sweet.

I can’t believe what Brian confessed! That was a beautiful moment – I loved it, both he and Justin are just glowing with happiness!

Thank you! I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

 



Author's Response:

I'm also really really happy I'm back :-)

Very soon, Brian and Justin are going to have to deal with their insecurities (the childhood abuse and hustling messed with Brian's head...and Justin is still struggling with Brian's years of tricking). PS: I know it can't last, but I also kind of adore possessive!Brian.

Justin's relative innocence is also fun to write. That, also, can't last, but Brian and I are enjoying it while it does :-)

I'm glad you thought the end of the prom was beautiful. I really wanted it to be special (but believable--that's always the challenge).

PS: Thanks so much for the feedback. I can't tell you how helpful it is :-)

Reviewer: nena (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 08:44 AM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 1

All your stories are amazing and I'm really absolutely and completely estatic that you're back!!!!!!

Thank you for the updates!



Author's Response:

You are too sweet :-)

I'm also really really happy I'm back. Can't tell you how much I missed all this.

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2012 10:25 PM · On: My Own Private Hell...and My Release

This is the best fanfic I've ever read! Marvelous! Awesome! Sensational! Brilliant! Is there a chance that you have finished writing this story? Please, please, please, pretty please!!!

Author's Response:

Reading this comment gives me the warm and fuzzies :-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 10:56 PM · On: My Own Private Hell...and My Release

This was a very amusing and cleverly written chapter.  i can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

I don't know if you're still around (it has been a million years), but I'm updating again. This fic should be done by the end of summer. 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 12:01 AM · On: Terms

I loved this chapter!  The negotiations were the cutiest thing I ever read.



Author's Response:

The lawyer stuff comes back into play later, much to Justin's chagrin. Brian is evil enough without lawyering skills :-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 12:00 AM · On: The Boy Is Mine

Way to go, Brian!



Author's Response:

If only canon Brian could have acted like that more often in response to his jealousy ... which he hates to admit but is nevertheless quite true

Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 02:03 AM · On: The Prom continued

Can't wait to read next chapter, update soon, please!! =)



Author's Response:

It's only been 15 million years, but I am back and updating this one. Should be all finished by summer's end.

Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2010 11:17 PM · On: The Prom continued

I keep love this story more and more!



Author's Response:

That's so wonderful to hear!

Reviewer: shimayo (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:47 PM · On: The Prom continued

I think I told you once that you have a great sense of humour? then I confirm it again...

Cute story, the" nine ideas of trying to get Mikey out of the way" is priceless. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Awww...thanks for the compliment!

I'm so happy you liked this part (particularly the list)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Someday, Part 5

Yes, VERY evil but in the best kind of way! :)



Author's Response:

Awww...

Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Someday, Part 5

Nooo!!!
You are soooooo not my favorite person today ^_^*

LOve
Jill



Author's Response:

Conceded (I'm exceptionally evil)

:) :) :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Someday, Part 5

glad they got it all straightened out and loved the results of all that. finally.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're happy :) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Someday, Part 4

Awww... saved by the DJ :D

 

I hear you with the work situation - it was the same for me this week! I have so much to do next week it's not even funny... I even contemplated going in this morning to get stuff done... for like a half a second ;D

 



Author's Response:

Ha ha

 

Well...it's been a billion years, but I'm back and updating like crazy. Friendship or Foreplay, Pieces II, and Justin's Secret will be done by summer's end. Then in September, I'll turn to Taylor, B&E, and one other...

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Someday, Part 4

oh good g_d what gossips won't talk about.

will they dance, sit there, or leave?



Author's Response:

gossips suck for sure.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Someday, Part 3

og i love him like this.

sprinkles all over. what a queen. "Look there’s one right there, under the coffee table. Purple. Fucking Christ. Come summer, we’re gonna get ants."



Author's Response:

"og i love him like this"

I'm so happy to hear that!

He really is a queen :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Someday, Part 3

Oooh! I feel like I just found Justin's lucky penny... 3 awesome updates in a row and promise of a possible fourth! :D

Looks like Brandon wins the bet on how long it would take Brian & Justin to finally have sex... which means only 11 days to go (their time) right? ;-D

Just enjoyed the most *wonderful* warm weather (88!) which is truly marvelous after almost a full month (or so it seemed) of rain & flooding!



Author's Response:

naw...I think (I hope) I worked out the math right so that day Christmas night is day 90. Two weeks before Christmas was day 76 :)

"I feel like I just found Justin's lucky penny"

Awww...

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Someday, Part 2

justin's queen outs are adorable.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more :) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:58 PM · On: First Snow, Part 3

Why are you so desperate to write my story for me?

So many answers, so little time... Work and RL have been rather shitty lately; in addition to the whole Christmas fiasco, and finding out that my bro-in-law got my sister NOTHING for Christmas or her birthday (12/27), this Monday I learned my best friend's mom has cancer.

I'm a problem-solver/peace maker by nature so I guess my brain has decided to help you and your stories while I'm sleeping instead of dwelling on my own crap. Sorry! :D

Your stories are a delight to read and always bring a smile to my face (and I'm sure MANY, MANY others!) so write when you are inspired, post when you can and know that your fans adore you :)



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry that work and RL have been so bad for you :( :( :(

I can definitely understand your being a problem solver/peace maker...I tend to be in RL, too.

However...without conflict, my stories would be a little boring...

 

Awww...that's sweet of you to say :) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 07:44 PM · On: First Snow, Part 3

Definitely, definitely, worth the two-month wait.

I second that!! :D

I think Brian may have created a monster by admitting to Justin he's never been restrained/blindfolded before, but I'm glad it gave Justin the confidence boost he needed to further their relationship.

A question popped into my brain WAY too early this morning- didn't Daphne live on Justin's street (or in his neighborhood) ??  Would her parents know anything about Justins'? Also, if they got divorced, remarried and/or Jennifer changed her name- there should be legal documents somewhere... maybe Mel could help Brian find them (or point him in the right direction).

BTW- my early morning insanity is a *good* sign (for you anyway). Your stories keep me thinking, guessing, and always wanting more! :D  :D  :D



Author's Response:

They did live on Justin's street for a few years, but they moved before Justin ran away.

So, no, they wouldn't. Why are you so desperate to write my story for me?

I'm really glad you liked Justin's forward progress :)

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 08:04 AM · On: First Snow, Part 2

awwww!! that was so sweet. Brian totally wants to make his Sunshine happy! :) love it! update again soon please! :) :) :)

-Alyse



Author's Response:

He really does :) I'm so happy you found this part sweet!

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 07:16 AM · On: First Snow, Part 2

Frozen molasses, hmmm?

Go make yourself nice, extra large cup of hot chocolate (or coffee), curl up under a blanket, close your eyes and repeat after Justin:

I like dick. I wanna get fucked by dick. I wanna suck dick. I like sucking dick, and I'm good at it too.

:D



Author's Response:

cute :) :) :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 12:05 AM · On: First Snow, Part 1

Who's backseat driving? I'm riding shotgun! :)

OK, so maybe I'm in the trunk. But still....  ;-D



Author's Response:

:D :D :D

You'll actually be happy to learn that Justin is going to exhibit some forward progress in the update I'm working on now...but I had already decided that he would before I read your review. It's still going to be a while before they 'go all the way.' I'm like making them wait (in this story anyway). Don't ask me why...I just do :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:47 AM · On: First Snow, Part 1

OK.... somethings gotta give! So who's the lucky one who gets to kick the boys in the butt and get the sexual progression back on track? ;-)

*pick me, pick me!*

And someone must know *something* about Justin's parents...maybe his mom has a favorite store? Or Justin will have a show that draws her attention? Maybe she's been looking for him too but didn't have a way of finding him? Oooh I know - Justin could post "Have you seen this woman?" flyers! ;-D

 

 



Author's Response:

no backseat driving, please :) :) :)

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:05 PM · On: First Snow, Part 1

Yes MORE please



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked this part :) :) :)

I'll update very soon.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Haunted

Wow. This is brilliant; I'm actually in awe over how much I love this story.

Everything just felt unfinished. Like there were holes. Holes I needed to fill somehow and soon. Fall was turning into winter. Winter just made everything ache worse.

This is exactly how I have been feeling lately. Good thing one form of your "pain management" - your writing- matches one of mine, reading fantastic fic! :D



Author's Response:

Awww....

:D :D :D

Your comment put the brightest smile on my face!

 

 

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Haunted

I hope Justin finds out who the little girl is and gets things squared away with his mother.

I love the Christmas story! Its obvious Brian and Justin loved each other even then.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked the Christmas story...Now that the evil holidays are over, I'm actually going to try to 'make it all better.'

:) :) :)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Denial, Part 1

Hate that Justin's family turned their back on him!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, that does happen a lot :-(

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:09 PM · On: How We Met Ben

I love Jealous!Brian :) He's so cute when he's jealous and possesive of Justin.



Author's Response:

Me, too and three and four :-) You'll see more of that in the new chapters

Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Denial, Part 2

I love very few story this one is a  keeper …keep it going It's time for them to make love



Author's Response:

"this one is a  keeper "

 

Awww...that's sweet of you to say!

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Denial, Part 1

Aww, I love that Brian wants it to be special with Justin, and that he wants to help him with the problem with his parents.

I feel for Brian when he thinks that Justin percieves him as a slut, that gotta sting.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:50 PM · On: How We Met Ben

great update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:44 PM · On: How We Met Daphne

Love my Daphne!! Started an all out war and won! LOL!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed young Daphne!

:D :D :D

Reviewer: Asha (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:09 PM · On: How We Met Daphne

Love it.



Author's Response:

Yay!

Reviewer: inkedkelt (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:17 AM · On: How We Met Daphne

This chapter is so cute! I can totally picture Justin, Brian and Daphne as kids pelting each other with dog poo!! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad this one was so vivid for you...It was lots of fun to write :-)

Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Interlude: First Date

cant wait for more. i just love all your stories.



Author's Response:

You're so sweet...I don't know if you've been reading the new stuff...but I've been updating FoF, Justin's Secret, and Pieces II the last couple of weeks. They'll all be done by summer's end. In September, I'll start finishing Taylor, B&E, and one other one.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Interlude: First Date

Very sweet first date!! Glad Craig didn't kill the moment for them.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy you thought so :-)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:16 AM · On: How We Met Mikey

Too funny about Brian cock blocking Mickey!! LOL!!



Author's Response:

(giggling) yeah :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Interlude: First Date

that was real sweet and neat for Brian to get that teddy for Justin

Hope you update soon!

Feroza



Author's Response:

A million years later, I'm finally finishing this one...should be done by summer's end.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Interlude: First Date

such a sweet update :-)) rose



Author's Response:

Awww....thanks!

Reviewer: Beware_Of_Weeping_Angels (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:07 AM · On: How We Met Mikey

:)  Love it!  Great job.  And I'm gonna say that Justin knew exactly what he was doing when he and Mickey went to work on the comic book!  Love all your stories, great job!



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin is an evil genius!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:14 AM · On: How We Met Mikey

Cute!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2009 09:54 PM · On: How We Met Mikey

leave it to mikie.... funny chapter



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was a lark to write :-)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Interlude: Fondling Brian in the Law Library

Another hot chapter. I love how they are together. I can't wait to read more of this story. I'm loving it!

Love ya!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

They could be holding hands and it would be hot :-)

most amazing chemistry

Reviewer: jemy (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 1

I want more!!! I love this story- I like all your stories! I'm waiting for more of Pieces... ,The dark side... ,Justin's secret, Fools in love. Plese :) jemy



Author's Response:

This month and next I'm working on finishing Justin's Secret, this one, and Pieces II.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:16 PM · On: How We Met Brandon (sort of)

I think it is time that brian and justin had a really good talk... and please.... I don´t like that shy and insecure about sex justin... :-)) rose

Author's Response:

That will change...

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:46 PM · On: How We Met Brandon (sort of)

Interesting!

Author's Response:

:-) You are funny...you either write one word or 50 :-)

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:42 PM · On: How We Met Brandon (sort of)

just so you know, I love this story and want more soon!

Author's Response:

That's the kind of news I LOVE to hear :-)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Interlude: Walking Justin to Class

Love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're excited about the next part :D :D :D

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:39 AM · On: How We Met Ted

Could I love Brian more in this chapter? I don't think so.  Oh the things he's sacraficed for Justin!  And Ted! Loved him in this chapter too.  This one really pulled at my heart strings. Great job.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to hear that...I was actually a bit teary while writing.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:53 AM · On: How We Met Ted

I loved this part, but it was so sad! I hope the next part if happier. Keep up the great work! I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

I just read the whole thing to prepare for finishing it...and I realize I do that...I alternate between sad-sad-sad and happy-happy-happy and lots of smut of course.

Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:23 AM · On: How We Met Ted

I love how much Brian in love with Justin. I always love reading your stories. I love the way you capture Brian's feelings.

Author's Response:

That is the best compliment! 

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Our Morning Routine, the Revised Edition

That was just too much fun to catch up on and I loved it. So very hot considereing they havn't done it yet.

Author's Response:

Yes, that's been a fun challenge!

Reviewer: qafcrazy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

amazing

Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Our Morning Routine, the Revised Edition

Hot! MORE MORE MORE. Brandon is a jerk. I hope they stay together for a long time. I eagerly look forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response:

He wasn't saying they'd only be together 3 months...the gang was betting on how long before they had sex.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this part!

Reviewer: bjfanatic (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

I really like this story and all the fooling around before the final event. I wouldn't mind reading chapter upon chapter of foreplay until Justin loses his virginity. This is very hot, their slow burn.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad to hear that. I'm digging their taking it slow. Been a fun challenge for me. well and Brian.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

Maybe not too many chapters. I was afraid you might take three books like Mrs. Myers did before Edward and Bella got it on. This was an excellent visual chapter. You give great smut. Looking for to your update.



Author's Response:

I'd never make you all wait that long...but longer than in every other story of mine for sure.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 3

The question is how many chapters until Brian gets the virgin puddy?

Author's Response:

a few ... many ...whatever :-D :-D :-D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 2

Blueberry are my favorites. Delivious chapter!

Author's Response:

Still love your coining of words :-)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 1

angsty time for the plot line.

Author's Response:

(nodding)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Terms

Virgin scared Justin is so adorable!

Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more :-)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Maybe Not

Go Brian...Go Brian....Go Brian!

Author's Response:

Awww...he has a cheerleader!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:16 PM · On: The Boy Is Mine

Stupid Brian over anulizing the situations. (I did not miss-spell that). Good chapter; got my woopie going.

Author's Response:

Love the play in language :-)

Yeah, he can really be a lunkhead sometimes. 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 2

Love to see a jealous Brian come to the rescue. Have to see how you do this now.

Author's Response:

Jealous!Brian...my favorite...in the current updates he will be returning. 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 1

Great starting chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Sunshine (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

I love this story so much....  please write more

Author's Response:

I'm finally finishing this one. Should be done by summer's end.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

Awwww... hot sexy and romantic! Loved it!

Author's Response:

Yay!!!! 

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

This chapter was so hot and cute! MORE MORE MORE MORE SOON SOON SOON! Please!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: Olinz (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 4

HELLO VIO!! I've read & continue to read all of your AWESOME fictions from this, KoLA, Little Ray of Sunshine, The Forbidden till the others. Your fics are AMAZING!!

I don't know were you get all those ideas to produces such GREAT stories, maybe you are like one of those super talented writers with great muses by your sides ^_^

Well i'm just a dreamers who feed by your fics, who become very addictive by ;D

But truelly your fics is PERFECT, if not at least near it (for me it is). I just love the plots & the way you make the characters: how they feeling about, the emotions & so many other things.

Keep on ROCKIN' ON. Will be waiting here for more to come =]

Your the BEST!!

 



Author's Response:

Wow. Just wow. You're giving me the warm and fuzzies and making it impossible for me to get through doorways (my head's too big now).

I'm finaly finishing Friendship or Foreplay as well as Justin's Secret and Pieces II (should all be done by summer's end). In September, I'll be updating and finishing Taylor, B&E, and one other one. 

Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Our Morning Routine, Part 1

wow beautiful! i want more

Author's Response:

Awww...thanks!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 3

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!

SOON SOON SOON!!!!!!!!!!

Love ya!

XOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: You won't need to wait too long :)

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 2

HOT HOT HOT can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: That's great to hear! I'm happy you enjoyed this part :)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 2

In the words of Brian, "That was fuckin hot!" Only Brian and Justin can make grinding against eachother and cuming hot! Phew! You write such good chapters! I always look forward to reading more of your stories. I look forward to reading more later on tonight.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great compliments! They put a huge smile on my face!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Secrets and Confessions, Part 1

evil makingus wait.... is J a vir?



Author's Response:

yes...I'm evil (cue maniacal laughter)

You'll find out in the next part, which I will post in a few hours

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