Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2019 05:44 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2019 12:47 PM · On: Love Will Always Win

Love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2019 11:15 AM · On: Love Will Always Win

fucking Lindsey, stop paying her money

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2019 01:50 AM · On: Love Will Always Win

fucking Michael, drop him Brian

Reviewer: bec2224 (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

I know I read this years ago but I just got to say that I was very disappointed in this story reading it again, it just seemed to me that everyone grew up, hell, even Michael grew up and learned to act like an adult, (I don't count Lindsay she wasn't in over half the story)  but Justin didn't grow at all, he stayed exactly the same from beginning of pt 1 til the end of pt 2.  At the start he was hiding everything from everyone, till the very end of the story he was still hiding things.  He got hurt, he ran off or distanced himself from everyone, he got mad, he ran off or distanced himself from everyone. Brian learned how to be open and share with his partner and Justin didn't.  Justin started out this story hiding his illness and exhaustion from his partner and ended it by hiding his mental pain from his partner and family.

And I'm a huge Justin fan, but I didn't care for this selfish only thinking about himself everytime a problem cropped up Justin.  He has a child, a son that he should think about how Gus would make of Papa running away all the time.  

Plus, I spoke of this earlier, I suffer from fibroid tumors and they do not lead to cancer, they are always benign, always.  If you have uterine cancer they can cause it to spread faster but fibroids on their own are never cancerous.  I wouldn't want to have a fan read this, have a diagnosis of fibroid tumors and panic.  One should always research when writing a medical condition.

Author's Response: First of, if you were so disappointed, why did you read it again ? Everyone grew up ... even Justin, All people deal with loss differently ... Justin tries to deal with his problems alone, without asking for help, instead of depending on Brian. As for the fibroid tumors, you really think I wrote without checking my facts, read the warning, personal issues ... You have fibroid tumors, you are being checked out every year aren't you ? So you have it under control. Sadly some Fibroid are cancerous, most are benign, some aren't. For your information I don't write without checking my facts. Don't like the story the first time around, then don't read it again ! Have a nice day

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2016 01:23 PM · On: Love Will Always Win

A beautiful angst filled story. I know the  sequel will be even better. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2016 06:40 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

What an absolutely awesome series. I loved the direction you took our favourite characters in and thought you were spot on with recognising Lindsay's selfish and manipulative ways. I will miss this universe of happy families and friends:-)

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 11:39 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Great Story!

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Hey!
I loved the story. Thank you for writing and poating it.
Sasha

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Love Will Always Win

I have been reading this story all day.  It is difficult to put it down.  I don't know why it doesn't have a ribbon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Love Will Always Win

thanks for sharing. wonderful story

 

Reviewer: LovelessSouls (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Loved both stories from begining to end. Awesome job. I look forward to reading your other works.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

I just read the entire series and it was one of the best stories I have read!

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2008 07:25 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

An excellent story comes to an end and will look forward to more of your work. Shayna is just too adorable for her own good not to mention curious. I'm also happy that everyone got what they all wanted in life to be happy we could do with that.

 

Going to miss this story sob.

 

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2008 10:08 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Shayna is my hebrew name.  Beautiful chapter.  Glad everyone is okay.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2008 06:32 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

how emotional. first i'm crying because of gus. poor little boy to have lindsay for a mother. justin loves him, and he knows justin well. knew he's find him at britin. i think gus calling justin "daddy" threw him.

then you have the shayna (my yiddish name too). how wonderful. she'll have so many people around to love her. none more than her father(s), especially her big brother.

should craig know? NO. he doesn't deserve the title or the respect.

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

I figured Justin would go to the cemetary b/c of some form of guilt. Talking through all of this has made everyone stronger and yeah Brian is right Justin would have made all the excuses in the world to delay the pregnancy. Here's to happy beginnings.

 

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 01:26 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Wow Lindsay is really something else damn. I am glad Brian got custody and Gus is such a well adjusted and aware young boy. I am sorry Justin is going through all of this again and with Daphne pregnant it just may get worst, it seems almost like PTSD over everything that is going on in his life (bashing, dependence on drugs, the drastic changes in his life) I think he needs some serious downtime.

 

Excellent Chapter and yeah Daph is pregnant again hopefully this one takes and sticks b/c I don't think any of them could take another still birth or miscarriage.

 

Reviewer: Tess (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 09:34 AM · On: Consequences, Finality and Life Choices

Im sure daphne thought she was doing them afavour like so they didnt have to get their hopes up each time they tried to get pregnant, I hope justin will be ok