Just discovered your little gems of fairy tales redoux, and couldn't tear myself away frm them !!!

Loved all the chapters, they were as imaginative as they were funny :))

Thanks for sharing.. now off to read your other fics :))

Author's Response:

I just saw this. Thanks for reviewing  so much. I know I'm a bit ...long-winded (I know yuk yuk, bad joke) but can't help it all these details just keep coming out. Glad you liked it.

I'm not too cool with dragging a kid along in that situation.

Author's Response:

Belie4ve me i had grave reservations myself and I was writing it! LOL Trust me, he turns into quite an important part of the story tho.

I should have seen that goblin coming - LOL!  A fate worse than death for dear Craig - BTW, when the Ice King mentioned "a new meaning of punshment," I had a sudden flashback to Jabba's sand barge when Threepio mentioned the sarlacc pit - ha!  Thanks for the cute story, my friend - can't wait to see the next little tale your vivid imagination dreams up!:)

Author's Response:

Oh, that's where I'd heard that! Yes I guess Star Wars references abound in this story! BTW there  was one more in Journey's end. Did you catch it?

Love and thx 4 reviewing

Jon

Finally got a chance to read the last part of this - what a cute, imaginative story!  Loved the mother-in-law joke about the long, thick, neck and the round, fat bottom (I can sympathesize with her - LOL!).  Sure you don't have a mother-in-law of your own - ha!  And of COURSE they would have "fairy dust" at the loft - what other type of dust would you have?  I'll be looking forward to your epilogue and seeing what "fairytale" you tackle next!:)

Why do I feel an evil laugh coming out of the Ice King at the end.....at least NOW I know why there's been so much snow and blizzard in the US this year - it's the work of that pesky Ice King.  I knew there was a non-scientific explanation for it - LOL!  BTW - there you again with the SW references - both of these pompous blowhards (emphasis on "blow" here!) seem to have a fetish for blue beams coming out of their fingertips - ha! 

I like doing jigsaw puzzles BTW - Brian should have called me - I could have saved him some major freezer burn - LOL!  Thanks for the enjoyable chapter - can't wait to see where you go with this (but it still frightens me, too....!).

Author's Response:

Hint: Let's just say iut won't exactly be a evil laugh.... don t be scared, it s almost all over now...

Well, that was quite an ending there!  And all those snowmobiling lessons for nothing - LOL!  Loved the bit with the frying pan and Mrs. Behr - you go, girl!  The first part was a hoot - kind of reminded me of Dudley Do-Right and the Evil Banker tying the girl to the railroad tracks!

Author's Response:

thank you for commentsing on the frying pan! I loved that part! When I heard it in my head the noise echoed!  and it was  ery Dudley Do-Right wasn't it? I also love writing bondage peril stories

What a take on "Beauty and the Beast!" - ha!  And I never realized it, but you're right - the screeching coming from the trash compactor DOES bear (or should I say "Behr") an amazing resemblance to Mel's ranting and raving! 

Okay, my friend - I am finally (sheepishly) making an attempt to get caught up on reading this story (ducks under desk); sorry I haven't had a chance up until now to do that (I think it's called story writing overload - LOL!).  I have to stop, though, and comment on this particular chapter.  You have a, shall we say, eccentric sense of humor.  This chapter's like a cross between Harry Potter and Alice in Wonderland.  I had to laugh at the comment by Mrs. Kemp that they just thought Jason "was especially happy."  (Well, maybe he was in his own way..!).  You have an amazing imagination - I don't know whether to be impressed, scared, or both - LOL!  I will now continue on to see what else your warped brain came up with.....!

Author's Response:

no need to duck at all.. why is this chapter like Harry potter? (Altrho any comparison to JK is a real honor) Thank you for your great comment...I like d Mrs. Kemp'as comment too

couldn't givethem one chapter of compete happiness could you.? i was thinking thatall's well now in their town and then something like this happens. how will they ever get to brian?

Author's Response:

Complete happiness? Come on! Now where's the fun in that? Bwa Ha Ha!  As for what's gonna happen, ndon't worry, leave that to me, I've gotten you this far right?

 Otherwise, how are you enjoying the ride? Did you enjoy Sweet Dreams? How about the 3 Behrs storyline? Sorry bout that I just couldn't STOP!  How about when they became Jason's "bodyguards" (I'm really proud of that scene myself. The white living room?  Anything?

Oh no, something tells me that all is not well in town of Spitzburghen.

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Terrific last couple of chapters.  That was so clever having the

caretaker of the Endless Summer’s name to be Ian.  Then – to top is

all, he uses a violin to mesmerize Justin.

 

In this last chapter Justin compares what it happening to the Twilight

Zone.  No way –  this is waaaay beyond the Twilight Zone.   

 

I so enjoyed the way you have Gus and Justin “plop” or worse in the

snow by the North Wind. Real cute! 

 

There is so much good to comment on, but just know that I think this

is a terrific story, and I so enjoy reading it.

 

 Thanks again,

     DavidR

Thank you for the story. 

 

I know there is another chapter, but I just had to stop and say hello,

and tell you what a wonderful writing style you have.  One sentence

flows into the next.  One thought smoothly become another.  This is

fun reading.

 

I can see that this is just not going to be a good story, but one of those

terrific stories.  It looks like this is going to be a Justin and

Gus Excellent Adventure, trying to find and bring back Brian.

 

I know there is another chapter waiting for me to read, so without

anymore words, I am moving on to chapter 3.

 

Thanks again, this is going to be fun.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Wow. Like WOW! Thank you so much for that. This is the kind of review I have been waiting for to see if I m boriung or repetitive or not descriptive enough. I know you guys are into a lot of introspection and angst and stuff but I can't do that. So it comes out in good old narrative, which I wasn't sure if anybody on here likes. (well as a majority anyway) I'm so glad you and others are enjoying it. And to everyone...I see you reading (wink) so leave a message!

Darn that Ian.  His home may be beautiful and he may be lonely, but Justin and Gus are taken!!!  Thank goodness Justin and Gus managed to snap out of it.  Hopefully they don't get sidetracked again.  Good job.

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This is amazing, I love it! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

No complaints, burst of horror, or outrage.  Plenty of comments though.  At least there is hope that Brian will recover.  He even scared me with his outburst at Gus.  I'm glad that Justin is looking out for Gus, but what will his mothers say when they find out he and Justin are gone?  How do they get to Brian?  When do we get another chapter?  Questions, questions and hopefully answers soon.

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Author's Response:

that WAS a scary scene, wasn't it? I even scared myself!  One of the reasons I was expecting outrage etc was the idea to bring Gus along. I was so charmed with the idea i couldn t resist but another ratioinal part of me was screaming  CHILD ENDANGERMENT! CHILD ENDANGERMENT!  Fortunately, this story has nothing to do witrh rational thought!  LOL

Please tell me there is a cure!!!!

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OH THIS CHAPTER WAS VERY NICE COUNTINU PLEASE