Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

thank you!

Reviewer: Ness (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2011 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great first try! It would be easier to read if you left more white space between paragraphs and made some of the paragraphs shorter. When the text is this dense, it makes it difficult to read. This is just a format issue, not a criticism of the story itself.

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