Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2012 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

enjoyed it!

Author's Response:
thank you

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2012 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

patrick sings it in the move could have less song and more story kim

Author's Response:
thank you i will think about it and try and work in more story

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am so sorry about your brother; I know your pain to well! You have done him proud with this story of our wonderful boys. MORE soon please! thank you so much.

Author's Response:
Thank you i will be trying to add chapter's while working on some other stories.

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

I like this story. I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I too lost one of my brothers to suicide last April and although we weren't as close as you seem to have been with your brother, it hit me pretty hard and I still have troubles with it and my writing helps me with it all. Great chapter! <3

Author's Response:
I am sorry for your loss it is a hard thing to get past. Thank you i will be trying to add chapter's while working on some other stories.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

i can not wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story

Author's Response:
Thank you i will be trying to add chapter's while working on some other stories.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

First let me say I'm so sorry for your loss. I know your brother knows you love to write and inspires you.

I think your idea to use the song to express Brian's feelings for Justin was a good way to go.
Lori

Author's Response:
Thank you i will be trying to add chapter's while working on some other stories.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

perfect song - nice chapter - thanks

Charle

Author's Response:
Thank you i will be trying to add chapter's while working on some other stories. If you have any ideas please let me know i am new at this.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

a beautiful chapter...........looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Glad to see an update. Each chapter get better.
Lori

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

nice - I can just picture the last scene - gotta' love a tender Brian!!!

Charle

Reviewer: 087blue (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2012 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

sweet dancing moment

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

i like up date soon kim

Reviewer: damondepp (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 4

Your story has a good beginning. I can't wait see what happenes next with Brian and Justin

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

Beautiful chapter. Needed tissues when he whispered to Justin.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2012 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

Your story has a good beginning. Let the tech people help you, You will do better as you go on. I will be waiting for more of this story as it looks to be very interesting.

Reviewer: Andriana (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, I saw that its a brian/justin/other that usually means its a threesome where they all have sex together so I suggest you put brian/justin and justin/other :) and keep going with the story :)

Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

I know this is your first but perhaps it would be better to post everthing as one shot instead. 300-400 words is really short for a chapter and don't get any flow when you read it.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

That was a great way to get them back together.

Lori

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you for sharing your writing here. It's always nice to read about Brian and Justin. Of course I've always known what a rat Ethan was and I hope you have plans to make him suffer for treating Justin in such a horrible manner.

Lori

Author's Response:
Hi I have always hated Ethan too. With out giving to much away I do have plans for him . It should always be Brian and Justin I am just sorry that in the show they did not get married. Thank you for reading my story and if you have any ideas I am open to them .

Amanda

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2012 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 2

because I've seem the show and kown what really happen I can't sorry if it was a justin and other i could get into it .....good luck

Author's Response:
Thank You and I hope you will like the upcomming chapters !

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 2

A couple of paragraphs doesn't make a chapter unless it's a dribble, and a dribble isn't a chaptered story.

For the record in chapter 2, who is she?

Also you're probably using an Apple Word program and it puts lots of crazy HTML code at the top of your chapter. If you go into the HTML feature of the tinyMCE editor (second line, right of ? mark option) you can remove it. Your chapter text will begin with:

<p> Your first sentence.....

Author's Response:
Thank you i will look into that . This is my first story so i am trying to figure things out I hope to make them longer and into more of chapters .

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Is this going to be a Brian/Justin/Other or just a Justin/Other? There's a huge difference. Thank you for posting your work on Whispers.

Author's Response:
It is Brian/Justin and other meaning Ethan along with some other people from the show .

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