Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 05:26 PM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

I really liked reading this story, I love happy ends. This is one of my favorite stories.

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 10:16 AM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

There I was, reading along, caught up in the romantic ending and then that last line of Justin asking Brian to the prom.  Chills went down my spine.  LOL.

Very enjoyable read!

All the best!

Author's Response:

Thank you, really, thanks! It was my first story and seing people still caught in it, it makes me very aware of the fact I still have promises to keep, and finish my second one.

Love, Raine

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Day 0

thanks for sharing

 

Author's Response:

thanks for reading it :)

Reviewer: Nik (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2012 09:54 PM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

Enjoyed it very much! Hope to read another story soon :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Catherine (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2012 04:04 PM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

I just loved your story so much, thank you.

 

Its reassuring to know that there are still lots of QAF fans , just like me.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it. There are lot of us out there, although the show ended long time ago. I consider myself a newby :) since I've known it for only like 6 months, but it was love at first sight :)

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2012 10:03 AM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

You are evil! What an ending - could not stop smiling. I am looking forward to your next story! Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)) It may be a while, I gotta figure out what to write about. People here have such an imagination, it's hard to find something that someone didn't already cover. But I guess every fan of QaF has its own version of ending of season 5...so who knows. Thank you again for liking my story

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2012 05:42 AM · On: FINALE PART 2: Tell Me Now

i loved it so start writting ur next one cann't wait to read it     kim

Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim. It was a pleasure reading your comments!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 12:39 AM · On: FINALE PART 1 : A proposition

You sure know how to build tension. Great chapter. I don't want to see this story end.
Lori

Author's Response:

That's one hell of a compliment. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2012 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 23: Bring Down The Hurt

Daphne to the rescue. I loved her interpretation of her feelings toward Brian's and Justin's relationship. She knows Justin would be better off with the other guy but his heart would always be with Brian. That she went to Michael to help make things right again, shows how much she cares for Justin and how mature she is.

Author's Response:

:) As always, you managed to see what I tried to portray. Thanks again for your lovely words!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Bring Down The Hurt

I've been dying to know what #11 was about. This chapter sure set the stage for a big event, the tension is too much. I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
Lori

Author's Response:

In that case, I hope you like how I described the painting  :) And you're right, the next chapter is where all goes down.

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 22: Next time

Great chapter. can't wait to see what happens at the gallery.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot :)) oh, yes, the gallery is my grand finale :)) actually looking foward to write it :)

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Showdown

Don't leave it there!!!!!

Author's Response:

Don't worry, I wont :))

I was a little busy this week to continue writing, but the weekend is here...

 

Thank you for reading it.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 21: Showdown

That last sentence has me in a quandry. 

Please update soon!

Author's Response:

:)

I'll try. thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: March 20, 2012 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 21: Showdown

love  it  great chapter  kim

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: Take Care

I think ya'll are being too hard on Brian.  Justin knew the deal when they met and this Nicky is a prick too.  I might have to wait to the end to read this cuz I'm not sure where this is going.  I agree with the other review, you should put Justin/Other if there will be so much emphasis on the other relationship.

Author's Response:

Hmmm, yes, I'm not sure how to respond here. If you wanna read it, thank you in advance, if not, you don't. I might be a little bit confused about there rules of writing, since it's my first time writing and being in this fandom.

But I said it very clearly it's a brian and justin story, and to me a good story (as I try to write it) has supporting characters. They have to be here, to keep the plot, to give the story muscles and to help see our main characters in interaction with them, otherwise it's just a himn to certain two characters. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with writing specific fics, dealing only with the two of them, but if you read only 3 chapters of my story, you could see I'm trying to make it different. Like reading a novel. I don't wanna put Justin/Others 'cause to me, when I search for a story, that means Justin replaced Brian with someone. And here, that's not the case. He may sleap with others, and spend time with others but I'll never be him AND others, if you know what I mean.

Cheers

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 20: Take Care

awww.......this was so sweet of Brian. I hope he continues...

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 20: Take Care

Good work!!! I always thought that Brian needed some real competition, not from "rat Ethan", but from a man as successful and handsome as him. Basically his total opposite who will try to make Justin happy!After all he put Justin trough, in the first season, he desserves to lose some of his arrogance (even if I like him that way) !!! So go Nicky!!! make Brian see what he is loosing by his selfish and destructive Behaviour. He can have Sunshine but he has to desserve him! Damn!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Yep, I totally saw what you saw. And Brian having to fight, in his own way.

Thanks again for following the story!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2012 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 19: I Win, You Lose

oh, Brian will help alright.........

Author's Response:

The next chapter will definitely be fun to write :)))

 

Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2012 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 19: I Win, You Lose

I don't like Nicky anymore. If there's someone who has the right to not think of himself like shit, it's Brian and nobody else. Justin is so useless. It's frustrating. I would love something good that happened to Brian and make Nicky AND Justin jealous. So much jealous that Daphne would feel guilty because Justin would see (or think) Brian "happy" without him.

I don't really like to see Brian sad or hurt. I love it when he's arrogant and the best of the game. Go Brian ! Go Brian !

Author's Response:

Brian is who he is but arrogance will only get him so far, and after that, if he wants Justin, or the idea of having someone like him in his life, he'll have to adapt. And he did, in the show I mean, remember season 3 when they got back together? That wasn't arrogant Brian, that was, "I made mistake, you made mistake, I miss you Brian".

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 18: Are You Mine?

love it ur making brian work 4 it good update soon     kim

Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian needs to work for it :))

thanks again for reading

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 18: Are You Mine?

*sniffs* Brian needs to make a move, a gesture, something or else.........*sniff,sniff* so heartbreaking........

 

Author's Response:

He better... :)

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Karlina1983 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 18: Are You Mine?

I would like to know if this is going to be a Brian and Justin story? If it's not, I kinda think you should at least put a Justin/other warning. So people who are just now stumbling onto this story won't confuse it for a Brian/Justin story. That's all, I just wanted to make that suggestion. :)

Author's Response:

In my summary, on the main page it says: "It's a B/J story with overcoming obstacles for both characters"

But I will put full names, so there isn't any confusion.

Thanks for your suggestion.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 16: An Old Friend

I love that things are back on track with Justin. The whole concept of Justin not falling apart when Brian leaves him for the job in NY is interesting. I love what you have done with it here.

Author's Response:

Thank you :) My only wish was for my story to be interesting and convincing :) I'm so glad to read your reviews!

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: A New Foe

ur good i love it update soon    kim

Author's Response:

Thank you ;))

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 17: A New Foe

Surprise Brian!!! can't wait to see how Brian deal or don't deal as the case maybe..............

Author's Response:

It was a suprise! Brian needed that slap in the face. Now, it's time for him to wake up, hopefully :))

thank you for your review! :))

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2012 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: A New Foe

Wow! I totally love this story. I'm sitting here and thinking - more, more, more, please more! Thank you for writing and I hope you keep writing - Regards!

Author's Response:

Oh, gosh, thank you :) there is more, just need to settle everything in it's place :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2012 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 16: An Old Friend

surprise, surprise....Nicky Paul. I wonder if Brian would like this surprise?

Author's Response:

Do you think Brian likes suprises? I'm not sure about this one... :))

Reviewer: Cristina (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 16: An Old Friend

I really like the fact that you're building the story slowly instead of rushing things forward in ways that wouldn't seem realistic. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you! That the main goal I set to myself: make the words sound real. Thanks for noticing :))

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: Going Home

“I thought, and still think, you want to believe the best in people. And find in every opportunity the most positive sign. And I don’t think that’s the case with Brian returning to Pittsburg."

Daphne is very insightful here. Justin was too dependent on Brian and need time to clear his head. I like this Daphne. Usually Brian could do no wrong.

I see the Nicky thing is not over. Hmm...

Author's Response:

I like Daphne not being just one dimensional character, so thank you for noticing :))

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Going Home

daph is rite  brian said no looking back and tha what justin did   thaks kim

Author's Response:

You're right!

Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: The New And Improved Justin

super belle histoire attend la suite

Author's Response:

I will :))

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 13: The New And Improved Justin

 Like she thought he wasn’t able to take care of him. 

True. Justin was an adult. He should have been allowed to make that decsion.

It is sad that Justin feels Brian only called him because he didn't get the job and it seems true.

Author's Response:

It does seem true. Will Brian admit he's acting like a fool and start paying attention, 'cause sooner then later Justin would be gone for good?

I need to figure that one :))

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 12: Guard Down

Brian’s hands were by his side, his shoulders relaxed and his eyes seemed warmer and brighter. There was no one else with them.  And he was happy.

Hopefully, Brian will take advantage of the situation.

Author's Response:

Hopefully :)

Reviewer: jules2009 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 12: Guard Down

Love it. Waiting for the update when Brian and Justin will meet again. I�m wondering how does Justin knows that Brian is staying in the Pitts?

Author's Response:

Thank you :) The next chapter will give you an answer to your question :))

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: Guard Down

Ah! The end of the chapter was really cute! I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Light

Uh oh ... Brian KINNEY? does not sound good. I realize Nick is trying ... but I guess I'll always hope for a reunification of B/J

Author's Response:

Hope? you and me both!! It's always Justin AND Brian to me (and Randy AND Gale but don't tell those "realists" who doesn't believe in them) :))

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Light

Yes... guilty as charged. I don't review every time. But this story is really getting to me :)
great idea. I actually started suspecting at the time Nicky mentioned he went to Penn State that he knew Brian... and Now I must wait for the next update :/
can't wait
Can't wait
CAN'T WAIT!!!

Author's Response:

Well, thank you for reviewing me :)) as a genuine Taurus I like to be pampered and enjoy beautiful things that give me pleasure - so, QaF all the way, baby :D

But seriously folks, thank you. This is my first time writing, and I'm a severe critic, to myself AND others. This works ok im my mind, but to actually write it - you help me see if it all fits in its right place.

Reviewer: aslo (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Light

Ha, ha, I knew it, that you will make some kind of connection between Nicky and Brian. THIS will make Brian soo HAPPY not. And there will be more drama and more angst. I love it. Clever, very clever.

Type faster, pretty please :))

Author's Response:

Thanks! :) I'll try

Reviewer: ScorpioDream (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Light

Did you seriously have to stop right there? Agh! You're killing me! Lol! Great chapter though.

Author's Response:

I'm a sucker for drama, what can I say. :)) Normally, a cliffhanger like that makes me crazy too :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Light

OMG! Don't tell me Nicky slept with Brian too?

Please update soon!

Author's Response:

In all fairness, there aren't many hot guys who hadn't slept with Brian :)

Reviewer: aslo (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Dark

To be honest right now I find Brian really annoying. I even like Michael more than Brian. LOL  Brian is angry, but for what? I think it´s mostly at himself. Because before he knew he had Justin, his undivided attention and love, but now he doesn´t know anymore where he stands with Justin. And this is what drives him crazy; it´s something he has no control over. At least I think so.

Thank you for another great written chapter.

Best wishes from Slovenia.

Author's Response:

Thank you Slovenia :) You've cracked the code :) Yeah, Brian has some sort of a duble standard; like likes the unpredictable single's life but at the same time he dreads from it when it involves his feelings, which reveals him as insecure - deadly sin in his book :))

Reviewer: Dioramanya (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Dark

I can't help it but I'm so angry with Daphne. She has not right to do this to Justin and Brian. She knows Justin loves Brian and he's the one he wants. Will she tell him that Brian is in the Pitts before they go back home ? Friendship or not it was wrong. She didn't help him by hiding things as important as a "declaration of love". Yeah, "I miss you" coming from Brian is an "I love you". If I was Justin, I couldn't forgive her. Even if she had good intent she used his trust againts him. Justin can't forgot Brian and his feelings for him by spending 1 or 2 weeks with Nicky. I don't want to think of Nicky's feelings yet. He seems nice and I don't really want to see him hurt too. :'(

Justin's friend or not, I hope that Brian will make her regrets what she did. Because Brian knows how to mess up other's life.

If there's one thing I respect about Justin : he always fought for Brian when someone was in his way. And now it seems it's Daphne.

I said it, I don't like her very much right now.

Author's Response:

Like the fire in you :) Yeah, your're right. But from where she's standing, it seeded to her like a right move. It' s always like that, with stories, arguments having multiple sides. Will she tell Justin before they fly home?

I have a feeling someone else will do that :))

Love, Raine

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crying Your Heart Out

I didn't think Brian was going to call and when he did, Daphne deletes the message. She should not be making the choice for him.

Justin is still not over Brian and it is sad that Nicky reminds him of Brian. He's trying to get over him but can't because of Nicky. He seems to like him but doesn't want to let himself fall for him.

Loved this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Cristina (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crying Your Heart Out

I really like your story...though the last chapter kind of made me want to strangle Daphne:-)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Don't worry, I want to strangle her too :)) But she's doing what she thinks is best for her friend, for him to have fun and not worry about anything. Her choice wasn't so anti-Brian but rather  pro-Justin, if you know what I mean. At least I think of her in that way.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Imaginative Story

“He’s not bothered by the big wave coming. You see his face? It’s full of many uncertainties."

That picture was interesting. I'm not sure if it represents Nicky or Justin.

Brian seems so certain that Justin will return to him. Maybe he's taking Justin for granted.

Loved this update!

Author's Response:

Thanks! You certainly take your time and read it carefully. :) The picture was Nicky, 'cause he inspired Justin with an image of a surfer, but now that I've read your review, I must admit, it could be Justin also!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Always Manage

Will Justin find his way back to Brian, now that he possibly has someone who's like Brian but better and kinder? better for him?

I love this! I had never seen this juxtapositon before. I'm anxious to see how it plays out.

Please update soon.

Great plot!!!

 

Author's Response:

:) I will

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2012 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Always Manage

 He broke the kiss and started to walk away but then his hand went for his…..

 

I can't believe you stopped right there. Cruel!

This Nicky is sounding more and more like Brian. Justin is smart to be a little cautious.

I look forward to the update!

 

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's supposed to be like Brian, but with a more obvious gentle feeling about him. It'a all about the temptation. Will Justin find his way back to Brian, now that he possibly has someone who's like Brian but better and kinder? better for him? Or he will find a way to accept Brian's faults? Or Brian will change? :)))

 

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: In Reverse

.. Brian should start his own business and steal Cohen's and Harper's accounts :)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: In Reverse

As usual, I should not be here. I should be getting some sleep, but I have a bad happen of checking this site for updates to read later. It was a big mistake. I started reading this and could not  stop. I like your spin on Brian leaving for New York and Justin's reaction, but it is not only that. This is well written, thouroughly enjoyable, and intriguing. I will definitely be following along!

 

Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words :) Never thought I'll be doing this, writing I mean, but I suppose after zilion times that I'd watched the series, stories started to develop in my head :D

Update coming soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: Day 3

Nicky seems to have a lot in common with a certain Brian Kinney.  Dark hair, sarcastic, from New York.  Will Brian's job in New York pan out or will it be a flop like in the show.  Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: Day 1

Ah hah!  I expect there is more to Nicky than meets the eye.  Deb seems a bit pissed off with Brian.  good for her.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Day 3

Oh this is very interesting is Nicky a vampire ??

Author's Response:

:D I won't lie, when I picture Nicky he looks a lot like Ian Somerhadler, but no :) I want to try and write a story as if someone of the producers asked me if I wanted to write a special episode or something, you know?

Reviewer: Dawn (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Day 3

Welcome! I've not started reading your story because of a lack of a summary on which characters the story will be about. Is this a B/J story? or Brian and Justin with other people. I'm a total B/J purist and would like to avoid getting caught up in a story only for boys to end up with other people. If it's not to much of a favor to ask would you please add on the characters and if it's totally AU or some what AU with elements of canon. thanks in advance!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your info. This is officially and non-officially my first fanfic ever so naturally I'm bound to take advice. I added the summary but trying not to say much because I know most people prefer it that way. But for your eyes only: it is B/J all the way. As I said in summary, I'm expanding the story that leads to the prom night. Wanted to portray Justin as a little stronger character but with the same main attributes. The same with every character as well. In my story Brian never says "baby" to Justin. I really want to keep it "clean" and sharp. But I did develop this new character who will become an obstacle for both B&J 'cause he is in many ways very similar to Brian, but deals with them differently. Some might say he's a better man than Brian, but that was my goal. To try and portray Justin's decision to stay with Brian despite his many faults and possible offers to a easier life without him.

You decide if you wanna read it or not. I'm just enoying the ride myself :)

 

Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2012 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Day 2

i like the engergy in the story keep it up  update soon  kim

Author's Response:

Thanks Kim!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 1: Day 0

:)
Welcome to Whispers

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad to be here!