Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 04:18 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
The story just gets better and better...!! I felt my heart drop when I realised the chapter was ending...I loved this chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words. Also to everyone else who reviews, Thank you in advance if I don't get to responding to you.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 04:08 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
Ahhh....golden gardenias, I presume? Nice touch on that one! I particularly enjoyed this chapter with its imagery and creativity. Loved the idea of the garden with the stone statues and how Brian planned to join Justin if he had to.
Oh, and my favorite lines:
"if I don't understand what's going on, pretty soon the curiosity will drive me mad!"
"That'll be a short drive!" observed the Beast in a deep, slow drawl.
I thought that was a hoot for some reason! (But then again I have a weird sense of humor, too, as you know - ha!).
Very enjoyable read, Sweetie; I will be looking forward to their private dinner upstairs (wink, wink...). *Hugs* ~Kimberly
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! You know that was my favorite line too and when it popped up I laughed so hard! It just HAD to go in! I hope not to disappoint on their date.
Reviewer: Bridget (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2012 02:09 AM · On: JUSTIN'S APARTMENTS and the Courtyard
I really like your story so far. Justin is such a good person and I knew it wouldn't be hard for him to see past appearances. I can't wait to see another update for this story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely thoughts and review! It means great deal to me and keeps me writing!
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
LOVED IT! Hilarious, hot, epic :D
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Leaving Home...Coming Home
Ooh...I liked this chapter! I enjoy historical type fiction and this one reminds me a lot of those.:) It also had kind of a "Luke Skywalker/Darth Vader" type feel like the Beast was using 'the Force' to operate the carriage, turn on lights, close the doors, etc. - ha! I love the quirky details in your stories, Sweetie.:)
And I like the fact that even though Brian looks hideous he is still using his 'talents' to attract Justin to him and that he is not forcing himself on him but letting Justin choose to come to him. Looking forward to the next installment, my friend! Kudos! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Concerning Storms and a Rose
I've always loved fairy tales and this story is a favorite of mine. So far, I'm enjoying this.
Reviewer: RiCa20 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:10 AM · On: Concerning Storms and a Rose
Ah. I'm in love with this! Especially the way you write! Hope you update soon! Tremendously interesting.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 04:20 AM · On: Prologue A Fairy Story
Hi, Sweetie! Glad to see your story over here.:) I always was intrigued by the morality told in this tale and I'll be eagerly anticipating how you will use this story to reflect B and J.:)
Best line in the story so far in my opinion: "You're a trick repellent." LOVED it - ha! I'll be following along on the rest of the story - keep it up! (Why does that sound like Brian talking? LOL!). *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I am FLUMMOXED! I posted like 5 minutes ago! How did you review so fast!? AAnyway, that sounds like Brian because that WAS Brian! LOL However thet First chapterr has a time jump and in this strange Alternate world, Brian becomes a different person and so may slip further and further out of character so just a warning...I never was very good at writing them canon. ;)
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