Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2016 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

I am relieved to read that Mel and Brian decided to respect each other's body. The meal fiasco was too funny. 😂

Author's Response:

Bonus review

****Happy Dance****

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 8

Lindsay really is in need of some help. She is a little cray cray.

Really must say that this is one of my fave QAF series!

Author's Response:

Lindsay is batshit crazy and Mel is now in her body.   Oh, these two so deserve this.  Yes, right there, I did do the evil laugh thing. LOL  

Thank you for saying this is one of your fave QAF series.  I really appericate that. :)))

Cheers :)))

 

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

Mel should just be mad at Lindsay. Not always the most rational one. 

Really wondering what the tattoo could be. Hmmmm.

Author's Response:

Mel always saw Brian as the problem when it came to Brian and Lindsay; still I agree with you, she should be mad at Lindsay.   I hope you don't guess the tattoo before it is revealed.:)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

Glad Mel followed Justin's orders and played it safe. Her inner dialogue was epic! Really enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for saying that about the inner dialogue, I have never had anyone say something I wrote was epic before.  Thank you so much for your kind words. :)))

Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

Mel pitching for Brian? I'm nervous for him. 

Author's Response:

Mel could go either way.  Let's hope she stays on script. :)))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 8

moral of this story is that Lindsay is crazy. Lol

another great series!!

Author's Response:

"moral of this story is that Lindsay is crazy" maybe she can blame her cycle; because, surely, by now hers and Mel's cycles have synchronized.  LOL 

I'm glad you are enjoying this series.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 6

cant wait to see what happens!!

Author's Response:

A surprise tattoo and a vibrator.  Where else but QAF would you find that combination? LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

lmao at Brian's dick going limp at the thought of Lindsay.

Author's Response:

The mere thought of Lindsay killed little Brian.  Yep, I think that is a reasonable outcome. LOL  

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2015 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

i died at Brian having to be shown how to use a tampon. Lol

Author's Response:

Brian + tampons = immeasurable yuckiness.  LOL 

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 8

The resist tattoo is clever.lol  Another great ending :)  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the clever comment on the tattoo. :)))

Also, I truly appreciate all your comments, especially so, the comments on the endings as it's good to know I got them right. :)))

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Getting off on Brian's voice and telling Mel to have fun in his body.  What a bitch.

Author's Response:

Poor Lindsay I made her a bitch.  What can I say, I didn't intentionally set out to do that, but what the hell, it was fun. LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thinking of Gale Harold that was never going to make little Brian go down. lol

Author's Response:

Gale Harold; male or female would have a hard time thinking undesirably thoughts about him.   HOT, HOT, HOT.  LOL 

Cheers :)

Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2014 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

Brian with Mels handbag. lol  I think Mel and Brian could have been friends.

Author's Response:

Brian with a handbag, now that is something I would really like to see, but only when he is in his own body. LOL 

I like Mel and Brian together too and I think their friendship would have changed and grown over the years in to something more companionable. :D

Cheers :)

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2013 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hello, Flossee!

As I had fun with it! Poor Brian! How experienced!

I loved the idea of the tattoo. This was very well thought out. Genial!

I like how you did Mel respect Brian's body and finish the fic with a more friendly relationship with him. I like Mel. I know many do not have great sympathy for her, but I always thought Lindsay largely responsible for the attitudes of Mel regarding Brian.

I agree with you and Bigdogz09 on the few comments. I have many stories to access and minimal comments. This is frustrating! Too bad when we commented and many authors do not respond.

Well, in short, his story is wonderful. Loved able to read it!

A big hug, sweetie! Fatima.

 

Author's Response: I like Mel too, but in all honesty, I was never fussed about Lindsay, either way. I couldn�t believe the tattoo hidden under a bandage would turn out to be so apt, as Gale went to the LA convention with his tattooed finger also bandaged. Nice one Gale. LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to review and I�m glad to see other authors feel the same about reviewing. I appreciate you letting me know that, and thanks also for the wonderful comment. Cheers

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

Well, regarding Mike and Debbie swap, I never really thought about the "trapped in yur mother's body" angle. I guess it could be ewww!! gross! but then again...wouldn't that make for a great story tell? Ewww!! Gross!! Im in here!!!! Help!! Etc Etc..  LOL    And...on the other hand, they already DID share an apartment for 9 months (wink) if you catch my meaning. Would one more day hurt? I'm sure Mike would survive....barely.

What went through my mind primarily was that they were unable (not enough time?) or unwilling to reveal they'd been switched so Michael would have to be Debbie-screechy and noisy and ballsy, kissing Diner queers with red lipstick smooches... and run off his feet all day at the Diner seeing what Debbie does EVERY day and Deb having to tone it down...and failing a lot...as Michael and living out her greatest dream....being a gay man! (little joke there)

As for the sexual stuff, well of course they d have to tone it down (that s a bit too incesty for my stomach) and the decision to reveal themselves to Carl and Ben would be up to you.

Anyway there are my thoughts and ideas for you to muck around in and play in and sculpt into something twisted and horrible! Have fun, hun!!

One criticism for the actual story. Flesh it out a bit and make the chapters longer. Not hidiously long or anything but maybe like 2000-3000 words or something. I read this entire thing in one sitting. That's no fun, unless yur reading a one shot.

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts; I like the Ewww factor and thought it was funny to run with it. That�s why my reply was so icky. LOL Michael would look funny as Debbie; however, he might look better than he normally does as he looked really good as a female for the Pride Parade. LOL I�m glad my comments gave you a little of the incest factor, as I would never go there, that�s just wrong on so many levels. I love your thoughts and I have almost finished my Brian and Justin swap so maybe I could write another fic, stating it was in one years� time and give everyone a chapter that has been missed out. I understand your criticism but unfortunately with the treatment I am going through I am trying to keep things very simple. My thoughts get fuzzy and if I didn�t have a beta this fic would be hilariously stupid. LOL Nonsensical. That�s also the reason it�s not a one off fic as I wouldn�t be able to keep it on track. I�m not even sure that this reply is making sense, but when I read it again once the chemo wears off, I will find out. LOL I have to laugh about it as the other option is to depressing. I think yours is the longest review I have ever had. Thank you. Cheers

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 8

I love how you played the ending so well! I can sense that was Mel in the body of Lindsay kissing Brian on the cheeks and thanking him.

Can't wait for the sequel {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying you sensed the ending, as that is the most important part to me. If people can see it coming I know I can�t use it again. Or can I? LOL. The sequel is partly written and the plot line is jotted down, but I need a short break to recover from treatment. Thanks for saying you are looking forward to a sequel, and remember I�m still waiting to read your next fic. Pretty please. Angie is awesome isn�t she, I can see she has helped you tidy up the 300 Pound Beauty. (Was it 200 Pounds before; I can�t remember?). Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

“I know the only thing that persuaded you to help me was the promise to make a sizable increase to Gus’ and JR’s trust funds."

Mel and Lindsay deserve each other.

Author's Response: I didn�t think Mel would help Brian for no reason, however, I liked that she put the children before any petty differences they had. Especially Gus; since they both wanted his parental rights and Brian gave them up for Gus' sake, so it�s nice that Mel is also making sacrifices for him. The real reason for getting Mel to help though was that I needed to get them away from the couch LOL I hope you enjoy how Mel evolves. Cheers.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 8

How about a Ted and Emmett swap? Ohhh....or a Debbie and Michael swap!!! But ....for some reason they MUST act (or try) like each other. Ex. Michael must act like Debbie

Author's Response: Ted and Emmett would be fun, but poor Emmett would have to tone things right down while Ted had all the fun. Emmett with Blake??? Weird. LOL OMG did you think through the Debbie and Michael swap? How would you like to be in your mother�s body? Ewww. Gross. Dry retching now. LOL Maybe it�s Debbie I should feel sorry for as she would have to whine all day and go to bed with Ben. Oh wait that last part would be nice for Debbie, right. LOL Carl and Michael. Okay I�m going to stop now. Thanks for the fun images. Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 8

Omg I didn't think Mel had it in her to be so altruistic. I'm glad she didn't go through with hooking up with the trick from the meeting.

I can't wait for the next sequel Flossee ;)

Author's Response: I am so pleased to see you review again. I thought my reply to your last one may have turned you away from the fic. LOL I really wouldn�t have written that into the story. Ewww. LOL I like to push the reader, but even I have my limits. LOL My altruistic Mel; I�m glad you like her, as I do too. Thanks for wanting a sequel. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

Darn, I guess all my anger at Mel wasn't needed...but I still don't like Lindsay. I can't wait for the next installment of the Evil Couch...I'll see if I can think of any ideas... Brian Kinney with a bubble butt is sure to lead to some good times.
Lori

Author's Response: I can�t wait for your ideas. Brian and Justin; fun time in each other�s bodies. I have already written the first few chapters and I can tell you they are having fun. LOL Did I just give away too much, Ms Peanut Butter? LOL. Thank you for reviewing, as always I love having a laugh with you. Now let�s just see how much fun it will be trying to teach me TWOO game. Oh no, you say. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 6

I think this will be the end of Lindsay. What a horrible creature she is. I hope Lindsay decides to take a nap on the magical demon couch with a mangy skunk recently bit by a rabid fox. That way we'll really be rid of Lindsay. Ok, going to click next so I can find out what the tattoo is...I have so many ideas but can't wait to see what you've come up with.
Lori

Author's Response: I so wanted to make the tattoo like the man in the Hangover, but I refrained. We couldn�t have the face of a God inked. Even though it would be NY ink and that apparently is better than any other ink. Go figure; I don�t know why. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 4

Dead Kittens? You think that a pile of sweet little balls of fluff now dead as a door nail would make Brian's manly lead filled wooden stick sink into a droop? I think Brian would actually need to feel a connection to a tiny purr ball to make it have an effect on his willy. Mel should have thought of Justin having an allergic reaction to the pile of dead kittens. That might have triggered a reaction. I hope Mel decided to stay in her/his room for the afternoon and not venture out into the street, who knows what sort of mischief she can get into. I think Brian needs to take Mel's body out for a good time. Perhaps a trip to a hair salon for a cut and color, I think green hair would look smashing on Mel, it would go good with the warts.
Lori

Author's Response: Dead Kittens/Bunnies. Disclaimer. No kittens were harmed in the writing of this fic, however, some were thought of in a dead like state. LOL Mel having a cut and a color; are we talking about the previous hair implants you recommended. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2013 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

This was great!!!!
I would have wanted Brian to get a taste of his own medicine. But.... Since they don't fuck around anymore it's pointless.

How about Brian runs into Ethan while in Justin's body or Justin runs into Ethan in Brian's...

Ethan can try to get justin back (while bri is in justin's body)
&
Ethan can bad mouth Justin to Brian (while Justin is in Brian's body). Oh I can't wait to see what you do with this next one.
-Marina

Author's Response: I�m so pleased to see a review from you as I owe you an apology. I mistakenly used your name instead of Kellydeer when talking about a corrected mistake. Forgiveness please. Begging here. LOL No; seriously, I am begging. I like your ideas. I was thinking, maybe Ethan, Michael and Craig could all make an appearance, but then that may be too much. On a happier note Emmett and Daphne might happen along. I have only written the first three chapters thus far so I can change the plot easily. I think Ethan is an standout choice, thanks. Hopefully fun will ensue. Cheers

Reviewer: ink (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2013 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 8

I may be the only one but that's o.k,This is why I always like Mel better than Lindsay. this was a very good story. (here's a swap for you  Lindsay and deb or a dog hahaha)

Author's Response: I always liked Mel too. Lindsay and Deb; you crack me up. I can so picture that. The touching conversations Deb had with Brian (which involved a casserole and a little substance) would go so very differently; don�t you think? LOL A dog; would that need to be a female dog, also known as a bitch. LOL I�m glad you liked the story and took the time to let me know. Thanks for the laugh. Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am so enjoying your wicked sense of humor lol

More soon please~JP

Author's Response: Wicked sense of humor, thank you so much. Now, where will that sense of humor lead? Am I brave enough to write a whole chapter on a man and his toilet experience with a tampon, or not. Eww, or maybe. Eww, or maybe. We will see. LOL I see a bonus review. Excuse me while I skip over there and then do a little happy dance. Yes, I mean literally. LOL Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

Now why in the world would Brian also have to provide for Michael's child...Oh wait, that right Michael can't even support himself, let alone provide for the future of the child he sired. Melanie deserves to have her heart ripped out once she is returned to her correct body. Darn, finding a heart in her body might be impossible. I guess we'll have to go for guts and hope that puts an end to her and her evil ways. I have another fear brewing in my mind...what happens if tonight the sweet adorable dog that belongs to Gus happens to jump up on the nasty couch and takes a nap with JR's twitchy lizard will they also switch bodies? These are the thoughts that keep me awake nights.
Lori

Author's Response: What a lovely start to my day a review from you, however, I must still be asleep and dreaming. I�m not sure, but did you write something about a sweet adorable dog, Gus, JR and a lizard, I can�t tell as my eyes are bleeding. Really you must have me mixed up with someone else as adorable is a word I would never use. LOL I think Brian secretly loves Mel, that's why he is providing for JR. Okay it�s official, I'm definitely asleep and dreaming. LOL Thanks for making my day a fun start. Cheers

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

Just when you thought it couldn't get any more interesting. Brian having to deal with P.M.S, Melanie wanting to make Brian a bottom boy, but both having to compromise and work together in an endavor that will benefit all.

 

I can't wait to see how Mel handles the pitch meeting~JP

Author's Response: I tried not to overdo Brian dealing with PMS, however, I couldn�t help but rub it in by giving him a handbag. LOL Sometimes I�m so bad. LOL Will Mel still take Brian�s body out for a spin? Maybe she will, and maybe she will like it and won�t give it back. Oh no. Mel handling the pitch is up next. Thank you, it�s always nice waking up your reviews. Cheers