Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2014 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 21

Poor Brian...I had a feeling this would happen :( I don't think Aidan is coming back and with Justin coming back to the states, anything is bound to happen...I wonder if Mikey will tell Brian about Sunshine's return?

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!

Yes poor Brian... We will know what Aidan is planning in the next chapter, but yes, Justin coming back to the States will definitively change everyone's life. About Michael, we will know too real soon :)

Thank you again for your support my friend :)

*big hugs from France!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2014 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

Poor Brian.

But as nice written this chapter is, you revealed nothing...What's going on?

You're such a fantastic writer with wonderful ideas. You definetly know how to keep your readers at the story:) My usual plea...please post the next chapter soon.

Author's Response:

Hi Kathrin!

Yes, poor Brian. I love him and yet, I seem I like to make him suffer... I think (and hope) it will be my most ansgty story because I suffer with readers over it lol.

Thank you for your praise about my work. It's such a great compliment for me (I'm currently sporting a stupid smile on my face) And I'm not sure yet when all will be revealed... My brain is an evil friend right now ;).

I will post as soon as I can. thank you again Kathrin to be such a great supporter of this story, I truly appreciate it.

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2014 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh no .. Poor Brian, not again .. :( whatever the circumstances I just don't understand how these men can leave him. But I'm jumping the gun as usual .. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi Carol! Thank you for sharing your thoughts again, I love your comment ; D

* hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 20

What an interesting chapter.  You caught us up with everyone in Pittsburgh.  Now to find out what is going on with Aidan.  Ten days without contact, that's scary.  I'm thinking that his friend in New York has an idea.  Hurry with another chapter so we know what it is too.

Author's Response:

Hi my friend!

You're right, ten days without contact, it's weird, even if everybody deals with the death of a loved one differently.

Thank you for your eternal support, as I know you support a lot of writers here, it's really awesome :)

More as soon as I can ;)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2014 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ok, so I loved this chapter. I love that Aiden and Brian had a 'real' relationship and that Brian was able to love Aiden. It sounds like the years they spent together were happy. And that brings me joy.  But it breaks my heart that Aiden is now re-evaluating his life. Death will make you do that. Take stock in what you have.   Everything about Brian was rooted in his sister.   

Very sad...  You really did this story and these character's justice.  I'm a big Aiden/Brian fan, and I am so happy they had 5 great years together without Justin hanging over their heads.  "if" Brian and Justin reunite, it won't be easy, and it shouldn't be.  One can't turn their hearts on and off, but one can learn to love again.  I think Brian may have 3 great loves in his life, and 2 belong to Justin.

Great chapter

Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie,

Yes, Aidan and Brian had been happy during these five years. Aidan has his reasons to react the way he does here; as you say, death can decide any man to take action about his life...

And you're right, Brian and Justin, it won't be easy, it can't be. Life and love is so precious, still so complex.

Thank you again to take the time to share your thoughts with me :)

* hugs! *

~alois~

Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2014 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 20

Hello))) I could not not to comment on this one........... Wow!!! It is really intense..... And hard to predict....... It is like reading some detective story while guessing what is going to happen to your favorite characters next... I might as well have some suspicions of who was that man in the gallery or of the reasons he did this small talk with J... But I am sure I would never guess it right anyway, so I just better wait till the next chapter)))  I must admit, having an early start tomorrow,  yet I could not go to bed without writing you this short comment and thank again for a great plot. I also wanna thank you for even considering to have two endings for this story. I must say, it is very toughtful of you! I myself would LOVE you to do this! As I used to love B/J long ago, but I have fallen for B/A now as well, all thanks to you btw)) I would be thrilled to read B/J happy ending one day, when I know that I can read B/A happy ending another day))) There is nothing wrong to wanna have both.......... I guess))) Thanks for your great work and please keep posting! Cant wait)))

Author's Response:

Hi Alex!

thank you as always for your kind words :) I'm thrilled you're still enjoying this story *** smiling *** and that you enjoy the plot and its surprises ;)

i will post as soon as I can!!

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Author's Response:

Hi Alex!

thank you as always for your kind words :) I'm thrilled you're still enjoying this story *** smiling *** and that you enjoy the plot and its surprises ;)

i will post as soon as I can!!

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 20

Another amazing and deeply emotional chapter. Not that I would expect anything less from you. The first part of this chapter was delightful :)

But now, my heart is breaking for Brian, knowing that Aidan's going to leave him. I knew it was inevitable in the end, but that doesn't make it any easier since I've grown to love Aidan, and the B/A dynamic. Oh Brian. Poor guy can't catch a break with the men he gives his heart to. I wish I knew what Aidan was and is thinking, as he's obviously shaken from his sister's death.

As always, I will have to endure the torturous wait for the next installment. I don't think you have any idea just how excited I was first thing this morning to see that you updated. Clearly I am addicted.

-Tiffany

Author's Response:

Hi Tiffany,

I'm glad you like it :) And you're right, the next chapters are not going to be easy, for anybody :(

We will know more about Aidan's thoughts at this particular time, at one point or another ;)

Also, thank you so much for your kind words Tiffany, you're one of the most fervent supporter of this story since the beginning, and it means a lot...I'm very happy you're addicted ;)

* big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

I knew it !!sad face 

So Aidan is gonna leave Brian too ? what's wrong with men in fanfictions ??Can't they see how amazing he is ?I wouldnt trade him for the world haha :D

It was a very good chapter as usual.Well-written of course but I'm used to it by now ;)

You've made me like your original characer too much so im not sure I'll like what's gonna come but I want to go on reading such great story.I love Justin so it  won't be a disappointing ending at all  :)

You mentioned the possibility of an aternate universe with Bri/A and I think it would be so great !! Hugs and thanks again for this wonderful story.

Author's Response:

Hi Vicky! yes, Aidan...sighs... We will know more in the next chapters, but all will be revealed in due time...

Glad you like my original character :) I love him too (lucky me lol) but I also love Justin, like you.

I might write an alternate ending in the future. I think I will finish this story and ask the readers at the very end if they want another end's possibility or not.

Thank you as always for your support on this story Vicky!

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: andrewtan (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 20

Hi. I really like where the story is going. When I was reading the latest chapter I instantly knew that this is the beginning of the end of Brian's and Aidan's relationship. I just hope you won't rush the story. And please update as soon as possible. PLEASE. I feel like dying waiting for a new chapter. Thanks!

Author's Response:

Hi andrewtan! You're right about Aidan and Brian, I'm afraid. Still, this story is far from being finished :)

I will post as soon as I possible. Thank you for your support!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2014 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol I'm just reading other peoples reviews I thought I was bad with Brian/other there are some angry b/j fans writing mean reviews Don't you just get sick of it. Another good chapter

Author's Response:

Hi Tash! Yeah, a review can be  hard to take sometimes, but I know that's part of the game when you publish you story for the public to see. That doesn't mean it's easy though.

Thank you for your kind words :) I'm glad you still enjoy this!

~alois~

 

Reviewer: VIcky (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2014 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm on my knees !!Please post the next chapter !! haha 

Author's Response:

Hi Vicky!

LOL. I love you aha;)

I will post the next chapter tomorrow :) 

thank you for your kind words as always. I really hope I won't disappoint you!

* hugs *

Alois

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2014 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

Wait so is this the end of the story for Brian and Aidan or will we get more about what happens after this moment? I actually love the two of them together and want to know more! You really know Brian so well it is impressive! And if Brian and Justin really did stay apart after the series ended then I would want both of them to be happy. Even if it means with other people. 

Author's Response:

Hi Shauna! It´s not the end, we will know more about Brian and Aidan in the next chapters ;) thank you again for commenting this story, it´s really because of you, reviewers, that I continue with this, as it wasn't always easy at times to keep going, knowing that some of the readers hated me for giving Brian a new love LOL. Your words mean a lot to me.

* big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2014 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ok, so I  know that man in the Gallery is probably Aiden. and for some reason, him and Brian are no longer together, and I have to be honest, that truly saddens me. And it saddens me more because in this chapter, I don't think Justin deserves Brian.   I think their time has past.  (haters, calm down lol)

Justin has not been pinning away for Brian. If it weren't for the man in the Gallery, he would probably never have thought about going back to Brian. There was very little thought of Brian in this chapter.   That line, "he knows one day he'll go back to his friends, and Brian, even just as friends"

One day?  Really?  Sounds like he's planning his retirement!

I was hoping Brian and Aiden had moved on, togehter, as well. But it seems like that was Aiden in the Gallery, trying to get Justin to go back to Brian.  

Ughhh.

I'm still very much enjoying this story, just sad over the inevitable outcome.  Hey, you always knew I was a big Aiden fan!  :-)

This chapter, for me, is emotionally charged.  Last chapter I was upset with Brian for moving too fast with Aiden. This chapter, I'm upset with Justin for not moving fast enough for Brian!  lol

Thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Hi Gina Marie! You are for sure my most fervent supporter for Aidan's character! Thank you for that. As for Brian and Aidan love story, all is not said yet. But I can't promise you a happy ending for Aidan... :( As for Justin... Well, I understand your point, again :) even if I don't necessarily agree ;) Also, it will not be easy for Justin to come back, meaning, Brian will not be welcoming him with open arms. Again, it will be more complicated (it seems I love complicated lol).

thank you again, for supporting this story and bearing with my ideas!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 19

You know what? I was really reluctant to read this story, considering it's content (Brian/other), but I am so glad I have given it a shot. It has turned out to be a fantastic story so far. I have never read any other like it. It's 'ballsey'. A risk. Not many people are brave enough to write Brian in love with a man after his time with Justin. Yet you have managed to pull it off completely. I really like that both Brian and Justin have seemed to carry on with their lives and lived happily, rather than sad, alone and hopeless (like several sad fics I've read). Incredible story, keep writing ;)

xoxo

Author's Response:

Hi! And thank you so much for this great review. I appreciate you saying this story is 'ballsey' as it was difficult at times to keep going. Let's just say that some readers weren't too happy with this storyline ;) I thought more than once that I was crazy to write this as a first story lol

more soon!

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

It's interesting to see how much time has past and what Justin managed to accomplish.  Now just who is our mystery man?  If it were Brian, it could have been, Justin would know no matter how long it's been.  Could it be Aiden?  If so why?  Please let us know who and what will happen.

Author's Response:

Hi my friend! 

You're right, Justin is now a man in every sense of the word. He is older, wiser, and had accomplished all he could have dreamed of in less than ten years... He can be proud of himself. 

As for the stranger... You will know soon enough if his presence is really important or not at this point...:)

thank you,as always... :)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ah...I have to agree with some of your other reviewers opinions that the mystery man that Justin is talking is indeed Aidan, for who else would know Justin by name. At first I thought it might be one of Aidan's former lovers, but as I read on I slowly began to realize this was not the case. Also, I couldn't help but feel in a small that although Jennifer was only voicing what she thought was best for her son, she laid the guilt trip on pretty heavily. Sure we want the best for our children, but at the same time she should have recognized that he was reaching out as well. I really am looking forward to seeing how this plays out. ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Tamara!

first of all, thank you for giving this story a chance. I know it's not necessarily easy as the central point of this story, Justin leaving Brian to reach his goal through his art, is definitively not well perceived by some readers. I could imagine them doing it, but I totally get it that some readers hate it. So thank you for that!

About the man's identity, it's interesting for me that many readers think it's Aidan... Right now, I won't confirm, nor deny ;)

As for Jennifer, well, to me, she would have absolutely loved for her son to come back and be with Brian. I mean, It's one of the few characters (and there aren't many) I love at the end of season five. She was so supportive of Brian and Justin's relationship. Still, she knows her son, and try to help him as best as she can. I'm pretty sure it breaks her heart to help her son understanding that he might do a mistake by coming home. That's my perception anyway.

thank you Tamara :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

*big hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hi, Allois! 

 

I would like to apologize for not being posting comments to each chapter (which I think is very important), but due to health issues and being busy finishing my WIP, I really could not do it. <3 

 

Well, now with respect to chapter: My Justin, my beautiful Sunshine is back :) And I hope is a final form (says yes). However, he is not happy. And it saddens me. 

 

I can not rationalize love (forgive me, I am Brazilian and I think this is a cultural biased), for me, love is what matters and when it is true is greater than anything else. 

 

I can understand the need for Justin to win as an artist, but what good is winning the world if you lose your heart and your soul in the process? Justin is not happy, no matter how rich and famous he can be and  live far from what brings you happiness is a subsistence. And Justin does not deserve it. 

 

I know this is a utopian vision of life, but I'm ridiculously romantic, so I can not think different (forgive me, once again, because of this). 

 

Brian is now in a long relationship with Aidan (or maybe not, if the  strange of gallery, as I'm guessing and twisting that is the incredible Aidan - frankly, you made r03;r03;me really like  of the guy). and that worries me with the way of how he and Justin will reconnect. 

 

Eagerly await the next chapter and hope to be able to comment on each of them. 

 

A big hug from Brazil, my dear!

Fátima Klayn.

Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

I hope you're feeling better and that your health issues are a memory now! 

Thank you for your comment and please never apologize for your vision about love, as I think it's the most beautiful way to see love. I feel the same way, believe me. My family comes first, no matter what, and the choices I made along the way reflect that. But you're right, this story doesn't reflects it and I can't even say I agree with Brian and Justin's choices here, but I feel like they could have made this choice for Justin's sake. And after seeing Justin in LA, and him returning just because it didn't work and not because he really wanted too, I definitively could see it happen. also, it serves the plot too ;)

We will know more about Brian and Aidan's relationship in the next chapters!

*big hugs my friend!*

∼alois∼

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2014 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

OMG, I'm guessing by this timeline of this chapter that the guy is Aidan - fast forward to five years since Brian went to Paris and then asked Aidan to move in with him. Whatever happened must have been sad for Aidan. I already miss him. He was good for Brian and he was there for him. Sad but great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi! interesting idea about the man in the gallery ;) We will know more in the next chapters about Brian and Aidan, and how they have spent the last five years. I'm glad you like this chapter.

I won't post for a few days, as I'm still in vacation this week, but there will be more soon I promise :)

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.

*hugs*

∼alois∼

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2014 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just needed to review again I can feel drama coming along CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!! I still want my b/j happy ending I hate to say this being a justin fan I really Liking Aiden 

Author's Response:

Hi Tash! About the drama, you're absolutely...right LOL

Nevertheless, you might be surprised too...;)

Thank you so much to support this! I should be able to post in the next few days...

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2014 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 18

To Karen

 

This is NOT a Brian-Justin site. It is a QAF site, as well as many other genres.  There are may B/O, J/O stories out there. If this is one you do not like, skip it. But do not accuse the author of not posting an 'acceptable' story here when you obviously do not know what is and isn't accpetable.

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2014 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 18

Well for sure you stayed true and consequent to your "Consequences". Many might hate you for it but I'm sure enough are out there who admire your storyline for being "outside the normal".  I for sure am one of them. Enjoy your vacation!

Author's Response:

Thank you Elke! I hope you will enjoy the rest of this story, it is going to evolve a lot in the next chapters...

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2014 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 18

Please update soon-  I am anxious to read Justin's POV but I really do want them together-  I think Aidan is dealing with a lot and I'm not sure that he should trust Brian-  after all Brian has told him he loves Justin.

Author's Response:

Hi sfscarlet! I will post it as fast as I can, I promise!

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Terrilyn (Anonymous) · Date: August 20, 2014 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 18

Awwwww im crying lol but anywho I love to hate this chapter im just glad brian is happy cant wait for Justin POV See you when you come back

Author's Response:

Thank you Terrilyn! Justin will be a more permanent character in the next chapters,so... ;-)

*big hugs to you!*

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2014 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

Brian showing up at Mikey's is so typical and you write it well.  Aidan needs to take his own advice and not blame himself. He's falling for Brian and truth be known Brian feels something for Aidan.  So many ways this can go and it's your call.  Looking forward to reading where you take them and how.

Author's Response:

As always, thank you for your kind review. You're right Brian acting this way just show us he feels something, yet, it's hard for him to akdnoledge it. More soon :)

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2014 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

it looks like an either or situation. I hooe that you let Brian lower his walls for once and let himself giving over to someone else for once.

But either way, it's your story and I am happy with wharever you continue. Especially knlwing it is written already * bigsmile*

Author's Response:

Hi reiselust161!

so happy to see that you're still here with me :)

Brian, opening up, I'm so happy that you'd love for it to happen... I'd love it too... Wait and see...;D

I'm currently working on chapter 13 so more soon I promise :)

*big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2014 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ooooooh that was good. In all fairness I can't not want this for Brian and Aiden, I really like Aiden and I hate that Justin made the choice he made. And yet still the strength of their connection is unsettling and the possibility that Brian may grow to love Aiden more than Justin ... well I'm not sure I'll ever be there. Conversely I honestly believe that for Brian to be truely happy again with someone else the connection would have to be extraordinary and Aiden certainly deserves to be more than second best. So it's an emotional roller coaster and you are doing an excellent job. 

Author's Response:

***smiling stupidly***

I don't know what to say but thank you!

*Big hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: ALEX (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hi. It is my first comment ever since reading stories on Midnightwhispers. But it is really a wonderful  story. Thank you so much. I never thought I could enjoy seeing Brian with another man .... But here I do))) I will even be upset to see Aidan get hurt if it does not work out.... Please try to make everyone happy, unlike the movie. Good luck with your work!

Author's Response:

Oh my God...

You have no idea how much this review means to me... It's my first story ever, and I had so many doubts along the way. Your review is just wonderful... (I'm currently sporting a stupid smile on my face :)

I can't promise anything at the moment about the end without revealing the plot, I can only say that the fate of all the characters is already written in my head. To what movie are you refering? I'd love to know ;)

Thank you so much again!

*Big hugs from France*

~alois~

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter. I love Brian/Other, if it's believable written. I love this Brian/Aidan story. Hm... what comes next - maybe hot action? Can't wait. :) Nice banner!

Author's Response:

Hi! I'm so happy that you love this story :) You're the second one to tell me you like Brian and Aidan together today but only the third one telling me that you don't mind reading Brian/other since I began writing this fic! So, I'm doing a happy dance right now in front of my computer lol

Thank you for the compliment for the banner, even if I'm not responsible for its greatness, I have Marny to thank for that. People are great really :)

That's a thought about the hot action... Okay, so wait and see :):) I will post next chapter probably on Tuesday.

Thank you so much again!

*hugs*

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 10

I really really like this story. And I'm sorry but I don't mind Brian being with Aidan. He is a very likable character and I think they really chave chemistry. Maybe you should have two endings :)

Author's Response:

Hi! And thank you so much. I love to see that some people reading this story like to see Brian and Aidan together. I might take your ideas about the ending. Seriously, if many people tell me that they want Brian and Aidan together, I could write a sequel in the same universe with Aidan and Brian together. or I could just warn you when to stop reading to have the happy ending... Okay, I'm divaging right now but I'm so happy to see that you like them together, as you're only the second person to tell me so...

So thank you!

*Hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2014 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I guess I did not make myself clear either :)
Sorry, english is not my native language.
I was talking not about my right to dislike a story after reading it.
I just wish to not waste my time reading it at all, that's why I'll appreciate some fair warning.
About being the first to say your Brain is OOC - I'm not saying it's impossible for people to fall in love more than once, God knows it happened to me ;) I'm just saying that for me is totally unbelievable for CANON Brain to do so.
Have a good day!

Author's Response:

Ok! I get it now. I put a warning Brian/other on this story and said in the summary about another man but maybe you didn't see it! And I totally understand your point, as you're not the only one for who it's unbelievable for Brain to love someone else, even if I personnaly don't agree. It's the magic of this show, everybody feel strongly about it and I really love all the diifferent points of vue we all have.

 Thank you sincerely for your response :)

*Big hugs from France!*

Alois

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2014 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have to admit you've got good writing skills.
Anyway "Could be Canon" is misleading, you should put a warning OOC.

Author's Response:

Hi! And thank you for your kind words:) I'm not so sure about the OOC thing though. :) don't hesitate to tell me why you think so if you have a little time

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: July 24, 2014 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 9

Even though I hate myself for it, I really like Aiden with Brian. I've read my fair share of stories where Justin was with someone else, so it's nice to have a story like yours that feels like it could really happen. I will be happy as can be with the B/J reunion, but I'm enjoying the time until then :)

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Hi Tiffany!

so happy that you join me for this emotional ride! I know how deeply readers feel about Justin, so I'm happy to see that you enjoy it :)

and thank you so much for your kind words

*Big hugs from France!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 9

I don't know what to say ... I love this story so much .. * giggles * I can only say MORE please. But if I love a story (without a banner) that much I want to make a banner. But agggrr I need help with this one. So no surprise * sigh *. I will sent you a pm.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

:):):):)*smiling with all my teeth* :):):)

Marny, you really know how to make my day! Thank you so much for this beautiful review... I will wait for your pm :)

*hugs*

~alois~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2014 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 9

Brian really likes Aidan, but with everyone telling him he does he goes in the opposite direction.  Love the dialogue with Deb and Emmett and Debs trying to talk sense into Brian.  Not going to work.  Brian will help Aidan and perhaps in exchange those two will 'hook up' for appearances sake.  Aidan doesn't need complications anymore than Brian does.  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

You could almost do my summaries for each chapter lol

*Hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 8

OMG, I don't usually read other peoples reviews and I should stick to that policy.  I just read IcedCupcake (Jessie) review and my heart is now being ripped in two.  I want Brian with Justin and I don't want Justin hurt, but I like Aidan and he doesn't deserve to be hurt either.  Now I don't know whether to be happy Michael kept them apart or sad.

You did a great job on your first sex scene my friend; kudos to you. 

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

I can only promise one thing. If I write another story after this one, I will NOT be the evil writer again LOL

Thanks for your support my dear friend :)

~alois~

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2014 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hmm...well, let me start by saying I get what you're doing and totally respect it. And I also think you're doing a great job! That being said... It physically hurts me to read this because I can't imagine Brian loving anyone else like he loved Justin. And if he does, I feel it cheapens the love they had for eachother...I operate under the thought that they're soulmates. For me,  there is no one else for either of them. So I think I'm going to have to sit the rest of this out. You did say there would be a reunification. So I'll stop by again when it's over.  I hope you understand that this is nothing to do with your writing, ideas, or anything. In fact, it's because you're doing such a good job that I'm getting upset, you've made it so believable and I prefer to live in denial. So, I wish you luck and I'll see you again at the end! <3

Author's Response:

Hi Icedcupcake!

I trully appreciate your review. And I really love you saying you prefer to live in denial, because you think all of it is believable. it means a lot to me even if I'm sorry if this upsets you :)

You may not believe me but it's kind of hard to write this story sometimes lol I think I am crazy ;D I also think all of Justin's fans must hate me right now LOL (Just kidding!) Just so you know, I will try all I can not to cheapen Brian and Justin's love for each other, and I really hope readers will feel it, even considering that Brian lives something with someone else

Thank you so much for giving in a try :)

*hugs!*

~alois~

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

I don't know what your original language is but I really like the turn of the phrase " you have to turn your tongue seven times in your mouth to stop the words from spilling from it". The differences in phrasing make the story charming.

Author's Response:

Hi Jean!

I'm French and this is an expression we use when someone tell something and should have refrained himself. I didn't even know it wasn't used in English, so thank you for the information!

And thank you for giving a try to this story :)

*Hugs from france*

~alois~

Reviewer: Kathrin (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2014 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 8

Chère Alois,

J'aimais beaucoup le chapitre nouveau.

C'est exactement somme il doit être. Brian a se transformer avec Justin. Mais c'est toujours le même Brian. Trés bien écrit.

Aidan est un homme trés adorable est sympathique. Il est une bonne ideé de lui être en beaucoup de peine. Ainsi ce deux ont le temps pour developer une amitié avant le sex:)

Considerais ce compte-rendu en francais comme un hommage à ta conte merveilleux.

Meilleurs salutations d'Allmagne.

Kathrin

Author's Response:

Chère Kathrin,

 

Merci beaucoup pour cette merveilleuse prose, vous n'avez pas idée à quel point cela me touche...

Et en français, c'est encore plus merveilleux!

A très bientôt :)

~alois~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hi, Alois. Did not mean to step on anyone's toes.  I was sure Brian spelled the company "Kinnetik," but since I can't find evidence of that I apologize.  I would have to go through and ck all my DVDs to make sure.  Anyway, my apologies. As part of my job, I have to look at the stories of newer authors as they post chapters in the validation queue before they are posted, and thought I was helping by correcting the name. I will not do any other changes going forward. I do not want to disrupt your beta relationship with her.  I will also go ahead and validate you as an author, so you will not have to wait for the following chapters to be validated before you can post them.  I will be looking forward to reading (only!) your story.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

Thank you Kim and you're right, I also think it will be easier for everyone. Flossee is a great beta who helps me more than I can say with this fic and I really want to keep it that way, as the relationship we established over this story is very precious to me. I can't thank you enough for your help when I first registered on this site though and for your help and advices on the firsts chapters. You have no idea how helpful it was for me, as I don't know if I would have keep posting at the time if not for that. And I'm also so grateful for the unvaluable help that Flossee gives me, and really want to continue working with her...well, you get my point!

Thank you for offering to validate me as an author (I think it's already the case anyway but maybe I'm wrong)

And you were right by the way, I checked on my DVD this morning LOL and it's Kinnetik which is written on the door. It's in the episode 4 of season 4 (how did I remembered that, I really don't have a clue! ;D). So, your intervention was accurate!

*Big Hugs from France!*

:):):)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hey Alois

I noticed you changed Kinnetic to Kinnetik and then I saw Kim's review.  Either way of writing it is just preference.  Kinetic and Kinney are the words that were joined and correctly speaking you would take "Kin" from "Kinney" and "netic" from "Kinetic" to make "Kinnetic"; it isn't normal practice to then change the end letter.  However, most of us find it more pleasing to the eye if we put a "K'.  The genius in the word is the double "n" which is the only part mentioned in the series.  It's your choice, but if you change it in this chapter make sure to change it in the previous ones or any additional ones you have already written.  If Kim now has time to edit your fic I will step back as I don't see any point in two people betaing one fic.  I will return the chapter we are working on, although I think we have finished it now.  BTW I really enjoyed betaing for you.

Well, this review isn't going where I wanted it to, so now for the important stuff. LOL 

I love that Aidan and Brian once again meet.  Aidan's back-story is different to any other stories I have read before, which makes me just love it.  I really like where you have taken this and what you are doing with the characters. 

Haha Poor Ted is like the invisible man. LOL 

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hi Flossee,

 I'm sooo happy for the great compliment about Aidan's back-story and about the evolution of Brian and Aidan.

Ted is just so good, and invisible once again...Poor Ted LOL.

Thank you again, this story wouldn't be so good if not for you, my dear friend

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

an interesting story that called my attention!  Lovely and different storyarch. Please keep on with the good stuff!

Author's Response:

Hi reiselust16! I will try, I promise! I'm really glad you enjoy it so far!

and thank you to take the time to let a review :)

*hugs from France*

~alois~

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 7

See I am going to be swinging back and forth with Aiden, he is not Justin but he is going to make Brian happy sooooo but oh dear lol😔

Author's Response:

Yeah, I know, I'm the devil as it seems to be the consensual thought for many of this story's readers lol

Thank you so much for your comment, and for giving it a try, as I know it's not easy (even for me sometimes, I have to say I think I'm a little crazy, but what can I do? aha

*Hugs from France!*

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hi, my dear! This continues to be a very entertaining story! You are doing such a good job of developing Aiden's character that I'm actually torn now between wanting him with Brian or Justin with Brian! Ack!  Good job on that.;)  BTW, hope you don't mind - I corrected "Kinnetic" to "Kinnetik." Can't help it - it's the teacher in me.;)  I think that is how Brian spelled the company name.  Double check me, though.;) Thanks again for the story! Will be looking foward to the next part.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

Thank you so much for your review...again..:) It means a lot to me that you review each chapter, as I know your time is well used! And I love the fact that you give this story a chance and to Aidan.. I'm so happy!

Feel free to correct anything you see, I really don't know how Kinnetik is spelled, and I trust you completely!

**happy face**

Big Hugs from france!

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well, Emmett took that rather well.  I love that he put 20 down on when Brian and Aidan would fuck.  lol.  I think Brian and Aidan will be great friends with benefits.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Emmett is a queen, but he has a big heart and I'm sure he would be happy for Brian and Aidan if it came to it

Yeah, the bet... I should have ask the readers about that one LOL

Thank you my friend

:)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hey Alois

"Cute?" LOL  What have you done to Brian Kinney? Haha

I love how Aidan's charm deflected Debbie from her mission to prying. 

When I first read "Choices" I wasn't going to read on, but you have me hooked now and I like Aidan.  I hope they end on goods terms and Aidan doesn't meet an untimely demise.  Oh on, you have me caring about Justin's replacement. :D

I would say I can't wait to read the next chapter, but you know I already have. LOL 

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Cute and Brian Kinney, yeah, there is definitely a problem in that sentence lol

I'm so happy that you seem to enjoy this story, even if Justin is not here right now. It means more than I can say that people who don't like Brian with an other character at all tell me that they love this and that they like Aidan.

Thank you so much again for your help

:):):):)

~alois~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a shame.  I'm not in favor of Olivia's doctor.  All he was doing was medicating which masked the symtoms, not getting at the root of it.  Of course with Alzheimers there is not much you can do, but they might have been better prepared for the diagnosis.  I'm feeling much better about Brian and Adian.  They are both in pain and can eventually become a great comfort to each other.  It's not the same kind of love that Brian had for Justin.  More like taking care of each other.   Brian's friends might not understand, except for maybe Emmett, once he gets over being hurt. 

Author's Response:

Yeah, unfortunately, when Alzheimer occur with young people, it's often taken as a depression, because this disease doesn't usually concern young people. That's why when the diagnosis is etablished, a lot of time has already passed since the beginning of the symptoms.

Brian and Aidan are a lot alike when dealing with their pain. So it´s kind of normal that they connect in some way.

as for Brian's friends, wait and see...lol

thank you for reading and for all your reviews, it' really awesome

:)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hello Alois! 

Very glad you have my dear friend Flossee helping you and  still have help from Kim (Predec2) also, this is wonderful! 

I know how important the work of a Beta for us who are not English speakers, if not for Kim (Predec2), my Beta and my dear friend, I could not post my stories, so I'm so happy for you to be receiving much needed help. 

Well, as I told you, I like Aidan and  is hard not to imagine Brian being happy alongside someone like him, but I really love Justin and by the what is already posted, my beloved Sunshine still really misses of Brian and not so well with the separation (at least, that's what was implied in "Choices"). 

I am following your story with great interest and curiosity to see where you're taking this plot. 

Congratulations once again and a big hug from Brazil. 

Fatima Klayn.

Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

yeah, thank god for Flossee and Kim, I'm so grateful for their help. As you say, it's not easy for us but Internet is really magical and I love the fact of being able to share with people all over the world and to have such wonderful people to help us.

I know you are all for brian/Justin so I' m really thrilled to see that you give a try to this story, knowing that Brian and Justin will not see each other for quite a long time...

So, thank you so much my dear friend.. :)

*hugs from France*

~alois~

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hello, my friend. I continue to be intrigued by your story. Very interesting.  I am a dyed-in-the-wool B/J shipper, but don't mind some angst along the way. And I can see how both men could be attracted to each other.  I loved this line in the story, by the way:

"He had wanted to forget. When all she wanted was to remember." 

Great line!  And very telling.  I will be looking forward to the next installment.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

I'm really happy that you seem to enjoy it, even if the pairing isn't your beloved one.

yeah, that line summurize it all... 

thank you for your support!

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

I really enjoyed this chapter.  I like Aidan and I like how Brian and he seem so similar, which will give them an understanding of each other. 

"You want to talk about it?" When I read that line I thought I had joined both Aidan and Brian in the Twilight zone. LOL  That line was priceless.  Great chapter my friend.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Thank you my friend, yeah Brian and Aidan have a lot in commun...

I think I was laughing all by myself when I wrote that line. Brian Kinney, who propose to talk...aha now he is really losing it...lol

I can't thank you enough for your support

:) :):):)

*hugs*

~alois~

 

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hello Alois! 

I love Aidan! Oh God, now what? 

I blame you for leaving me in a great dilemma. 

The luck of Justin's  I the love more and I can not conceive of a universe where Brian and Justin are not together. 

So I would ask you two things, if you allow me. 

The first thing is please do not make Aidan a psychopath or an idiot who comes abuses of Justin and irritates Brian  because of it. The vast majority of authors do it and I do not see consistency in this outcome. Sometimes Brian is someone very good for him, Gus and all other then Justin appears and the guy instantly turns into a psychopath, serial killer or just a big idiot. Please do not do this with Aidan. 

The second thing is, please do not kill Aidan. Let the man have a chance to be happy with someone else (this is where I start my campaign for my beloved Emmet). Such an amazing guy like him does not deserve to die (I did it with a boyfriend  of Justin in one of my stories and  today I'm sorry because for the poor guy, but his death fit the plot, poor guy), so let Aidan live and be happy (with Emmet, please ...) 

My dear, I keep hoping that you get a beta and can continue this great story. 

Hugs from Brazil! 

Fatima.

Author's Response:

Hi Fatima!

aha I love Aidan too lol

and all I can say is that he is a real good guy, so don't worry, he will not turned into a bad guy or a dumbass..;D

interesting idea about him and Emmett, I hadn't thought about it... But unfortunately, it´s not going to happen...:(

as for his fate (alive or dead, happy or not) I can't tell you without revealing some part of the plot, so... Please don't hate me! 

Thank you so much Fatima

*hugs from France*

:):):)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

My dear friend, Flossee's statement about wanting to make you feel welcome is a very accurate one. I strive to encourage and help as much as I can, paying it forward for all the help and support I have gotten from fellow authors. With that being said, I will be heading out on military duty for the next two weeks but when I return I'll try my best to offer any help that I can ;)

Author's Response:

Jazzepoet,

 

Thank you so much for your kind words....

*happy face*

If I can do anything in return, just let me know  (I know, I live in dreamland, being french and all lol)

Thank you again, your support means a lot to me

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: toniu (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2014 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

So far this is a great story.  I hope to read more soon. Please, please don't disappoint. You have answered my prayers. I have been searching for a story where Brian finds someone. Sadly fans feel that only Justin deserves to find happiness with someone else only returning to Brian when either they a) die. b) abuse him. c) can't measure up to Brian. Poor Brian is relegated to always accepting Justin back, or trying to steal him back. I admired Brian for surviving his childhood and helping his disfunctional family. A family that I also find abusive to poor Brian.  So thank you. Keep writing.

Author's Response:

Hi toniu!

It's good to see that some people want to actually read this story! As I said before, it's not easy to submit a story like that as a first story and I understand what you say about Brian. I like the character very much too.

So thank you for taking some time to write a review, it helps me going. It's kind of frustrating  to see that your story is read but that people don't tell you what they think about it. Even if I know it's a part of the game ;D

I will be more than happy to try and answer your prayers ;) and I really hope I don't disappoint you

Thank you!

:)

*hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

I am struggling to stay with this fic.  I know Brian and Aidan hook up and are with each other for a while and it also looks like Justin will find someone, hence Justin/other; yet Aidan and Emmett, that is just too much like Brian and Ben.  Now when Brian bottoms he knows Emmett has been there first.   To me that is almost incestuous (I know it's not but it certainly feels that way).

I do have a request please; if you are going to kill Aidan off don't let it be an automobile accident as that has been so overdo. 

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hi Flossee!

aha, so Aidan and Emmett, I didn't think about it that way really! To me, it was just a way to add a little fun to the plot but now that I think about it, I can understand the feeling  :) 

and no, I can assure you Aidan will not die in a car accident.

Thank you for the review!

*Cheers back*

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

*sigh* I really want to enjoy this story...I really do, because your writing is beautiful. The thing is, there have been quite a few heavily angsty stories posted recently and I just don't have the emotional fortitude to get through another one right now. Please don't take any offense as that is not my intention, but I must be honest in telling you that I will probably have to wait until this on is completed before I can truly enjoy it. Maybe by then I will have recovered from my angst overload ;)

Author's Response:

Hi Jazzepoet!

no offenses taken, as I can totally understand what you feel, having been here myself. Sometimes, Angst is not what I want either, and this story is full of it, so, you are right about not wanting to read it !

so, thank you for your review, it means a lot to me that even if you don't read it, you take the time to tell me what you think.

I promise I will do the same as soon as I have a little time to read!

:)

~alois~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

I have to say I've never read a story where I wanted someone other then Justin to hook up with Brian, until now.  You put so much into Aidan and all of it likeable.  I think he and Brian would be good for each other.  When do we learn more?

Author's Response:

Oh my god, I'm doing an happy dance right now :D

Well, there will be some time before they see each other again, and it won't be pretty is all I can say (but it will be in the next chapter)

I'm currently (like right this instant) finishing chapter 5 and things are slowly but surely beginning to evolve as you will learn more about Aidan. but it's going to take some time, as I don't think that Brian is ready for anything at the moment...

Thank you again for your review!

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 2

So they meet again ! Sad for B/J but curious about the new relationship thats going to bloom . Your rendition is perfect , loving the story. next chater soon please :)

 

Author's Response:

Thank you again rainloverdreamz!!

Next chapter today (I had a few days off and I manage to write nearly 3 chapters *happy face*) I just have to read it again and again to try and see for mistakes arrrggg :D

I truly appreciate your reviews, it helps me going

:)

*Hugs*

~alois~

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi everyone!

I wanted to thank you all for your reviews and for reading this story.

I have a real dilemma here. I've written about 5 chapters of this fic but it is really difficult as I don't have a beta. As you know, I'm french, not bilingual (just trying to keep my english level by watching TV shows in English and reading your beautiful stories in English too).

And between my job and my busy life, let's just say it's not easy

So, my first question is, is there anyone here who could help me?

And two, as this story is not about Brian and Justin (even if, as I said in the story note, there will be together in the end), do you really want to read it?

As it is my first fic ever, I must admit I'm not really sure about doing it right.

If you could tell me what you think, I would be very grateful.

Thank you!

~alois~

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2014 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey Alois

Apparently I was confused when I read your first fic and I don't think I was the only one.  I thought you were only going to write Brian/other, but is seems like you will have a Brian/Justin conclusion.  I will now join in this adventure knowing it will be a B/J ending, although I am feeling sorry for Aidan already knowing he doesn't end up with Brian.  I hope you don't make him a psycho or a baddie as sometimes love just needs to win out and hopeful Aidan will walk away happy too.  Okay, yes I live in a dreamland. Haha

I love the train connection and the CPR as I haven't read that before and I love original ideas.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

Hi Flossee!

Well, I have to admit I hesitated for a while about the ending of this story, but not too long :D. So your confusion may be justified!

About Aidan, he is a real good guy, so don't worry, he will not turn out to be a psycho or a bad guy.

He will live something with Brian that will change all of the characters forever. As I said before, he will be with Brian for a while, and Brian and Justin will find their way back to each other in the end, but it's not going to be the usual, like they see each other after a long time and end up together again or something like that. it will be more complicated. I don't want to say too much about it, just that it will unfortunately not be a happy ending for all of them... (sorry sorry!!)

I can only say that it's not a story which have been already written, or I haven't seen it, and real life issue will surge at some point. So, be prepared for some tears along the way...

But there will be fun too, I promise!! 

(Why Am I feeling like I'm going to make you all run away lol and just so know, your comment about  living in a dreamland,  make me laugh out loud in front of my computer aha)

Thank you for your review, I truly appreciate it.

:)

~alois~

Reviewer: rainloverdreamz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2014 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Was waiting for more chapters after reading "Choices" , really looking forward to see how this Brian Aidan relation grows and how everything turns up, they seemed to share a good chemistry already . The fact that Brian could have romantic for someone else other than Justin is intriguing . And knowing that theres going to be Brian justin reunification in the end is quite relieving ( always want them together) :D keep posting , good luck :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your beautiful review

It's going to be a long time before Brian and Aidan become involved. Justin's departure is going to hit Brian hard but who says that life is a quiet path?

I'm really happy that you seem to enjoy this story. I try hard to stay close to the characters in the show, and I really hope I will do them justice. If not, feel free to tell me to stop! ;)

Next chapter soon, I promise

Thank you again

~alois~

 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2014 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Alois - I made a few changes to your story, and some punctuation corrections before I validated it. I hope you don't mind.  Hopefully, too, one of our writers/readers will step up to help you as beta. You are doing quite well for someone who is not a native English speaker, though.  Intriguing story so far!  I am looking forward to hearing more about this.  *hugs*  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Than you Kim! and Thank you for your corrections again. It's quite hard for me to write in english, but it's a good way to improve my level lol and I thought that it would be easier to share than to write it in French.

And this review means a lot to me, coming from you. I've read many of your fics (I review some but not under this name) and you're really talented. I admire your writing and your imagination!

*Hugs*

alois