Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Love it
Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2018 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really liked this story , I just found you on the authors page and started reading all your stories. Hope to find more when I finish all of these lol. Thank you for all the good reads.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm working on others that will be us in the near future. Thanks again.
Jane
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2017 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
Gosh this mist have been so hard for them all to go through and I thought Gus handled it perfect and to call Justin that warmed my heart. Please write what happens next.
excellent story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review. I hadn't thought of anything else but you never know.
Jane
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2017 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow wee that was a brilliant chapter, very intense and dramatic, loving this story. I shall read more tom as I'm off to sleep.
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely reply. Hope you had a great sleep and dreamt about our boys.
Jane
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2017 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Way to go guys, and what a great eye Justin has. Oooooh I think the girls are in major trouble here. Loving this story again x
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it again. I do tend to re-read my own stories.
Jane
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2017 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Such a brilliant start to this, I have read this a few times and loved it more and more each time I did. I love they took control of their relationship, it's beautiful, sweet and hot.
excellent work thank you for writing it. X
Reviewer: Qaf4life (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2015 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love this short story this was not really a Anti-Mikey
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I fixed it. I changed it when I had Deb fly off the handle. Thanks for commenting.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2015 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 4
Love your ending. It worked out for everyone except Lindsey.
Author's Response: It was a good place to stop. Thanks for the lovely comment YumYumPM. Might work on another story with Lindsey later.
Jane
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2015 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 3
That was interesting. You ended with quite a cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you CFC for the great comment. I'm one for hating cliff hangers but I really wanted one in this story. I'm presently working on the next 2 chapters. Hoping I have them done by the 29.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see what Melanie has to say. I like your trial. Brian answered all questions truthfully.
Author's Response: Working on the next 2 chapters. Will need it with the length of the court trial. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2015 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
its been a while when will you up date
Author's Response: I just added a new chapter. Will have 2 more after this one.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2015 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
This new chapter was great. I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks girl. I'm working on the final chapter as we speak.
Jane
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2015 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, moving fast.
Can't wait to see what Joey does.
Author's Response: Thanks CFC. The final chapter is being worked on as we speak.
Jane
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this, great chapter.
* hugs *
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
Such fun so far! thoroughly enjoying this. waiting to see what everyone does in the gang once they fidn out B&J are "married", court wiht L&M, what Micheal does....so much to anticipate!! lol.
thanks for sharing!!
Elaine
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this Elaine. I have a few surprises in store for a few of the gang. Writing the final chapter as we speak.
Jane
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
So much happening in this story and so much left to tell. Love how much trouble Brian went to to take down Joey. Can't wait to read what happens when they bring him down. Lindz and Mel don't have a leg to stand on. Brian is going from lonely to being a family man all at once, but I have faith in him. Have we heard from Mikey yet? That should be fun.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I have a little in store for Mikey. Plus a few other things happening in the final chapter. Thanks again.
Jane
Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2015 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
I liked the story! Love that the boys are together and discovering how to make their relationship work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm putting together the final chapter so it's taking me a bit of time.
Jane
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2015 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
So beautiful! Wish it was true...and they stayed together...
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I wrote another chapter and working on the final. I'm not getting my reviews so I'm sorry this is late.
Jane
Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2015 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
beautiful story!
Author's Response: I'm not getting my reviews so I apologize for responding late. Thanks for the kind words. I've wrote another chapter and working on the final. Hope you like it.
Jane
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2015 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
While I would of loved Brian and Justin to be together at the end of the series, your version doesn't work either. I would love if Justin went to New York for a week and realizes that he lost the one thing that inspires him, Brian. He then goes back to Pittsburg and they make their relationship work but don't get married until they are both ready for that type of commitment.
Author's Response: Thank you for these words. I thought of sending Justin off but I wanted him to stand up for himself and think about his life without anyone telling him what to do. I wrote another chapter in this work and working on a final. Hope you like it.
Jane
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2015 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmmm.... yeb... I did take some guilty pleasure from this... But I would have liked it to be longer... a bit more. If you work this lovely ending into a longer story I would love love LOVE to read :)
Also, thank you so much for posting this lyric. Jimi was one of my favorites...
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. I wrote another chapter and working on the final. When I read you words back in January, I thought it wasn't complete either. Sorry on not responding to your review. I also love this song.
Jane
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2015 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
If only Brian and Justin did talk about things . . . Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks Tag for the review. Sorry I didn't respond but another reviewer said it didn't feel finished so I wrote two more chapters. I'm presently working on the final. Hope you like this.
Jane
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2015 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
sequel please!!!!!!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2015 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was an idea you don't often see. But, you are right, there needs to be some bridge from the show to the post show stories.
Thank you for posting.
Author's Response: Thanks CFC. I wrote another chapter and working on the final. It felt not complete.
Jane
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2015 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
ilike this ending better than the dvd great going kim
Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2015 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this story very much great Job
Jane: FYI - deleted 9 duplicate reviews from this user due to system glitch (all said the same thing). ~Kim, Admin
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2015 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hello Hon. :) I really enjoyed this; especially Brian proving to Justin that he has grown and is no longer the forever 29 club boy. I am all for character growth and these two sharing a ridiculously romantic moment from time to time. Fun Fact: I listened to this song while I read your words, it was a very enjoyable experience. Thank you for sharing. *Hugs* -Mandi
Author's Response: Thanks Mandy for your wonderful words. Sometimes I listen to the songs I write about and it makes more sense. This story didn't feel complete so I wrote another chapter. I'm presently working on the final as I write this. Sorry for getting back to you so late. I'm not receiving my reviews.
Jane
Reviewer: Vanessa (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2015 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this story! I wish this was how they ended the show. Awesome writing job:)
Author's Response: Vanessa: thanks for the lovely words. I wrote another chapter and am working on the final chapter. Sorry about responding so late. Not getting my reviews.
Jane
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2015 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very nice! This is how the series should end. I really hated this idea of sacrificing one important thing in life (love) for another one (career) when Justin was really able to have both at that time. And no bullshit about "it's only time" will convince me that NY was not a sacrifice, because life is short and we should cherish every moment of it, not postpone the most important relationship "for when it's the right time", because it may not come. So I really like your version of the ending!
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. I agree wholeheartedly that what the writers did was wrong. I haven't been receiving any reviews to my email so I apologize for this being late. I wrote another chapter and working on the final as I write this.
Jane
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2015 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was beautiful, and very hot.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful words. I haven't been getting my reviews on my email so I"m sorry I didn't get to respond. I have another chapter up and working on the final one. This story felt not complete.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2015 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Enjoyed this a whole lot. Much better than the way the series went.
Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful words. I hated how they ended the series.
Jane
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2015 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
That is one of my favorite songs!
Author's Response: I couldn't help myself when I heard this song. I a BIG sucker for romance and their night together just made sense.
Jane
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2015 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very nicely done my friend :) This fic makes me feel so vendictive about how much I hated the shows ending as well as my thoughts on how much of a hypocrite Justin was toward the end. The entire series he tried to get Brian to change and offer him a solid commitment, and when he does it's too much and now he wants old Brian back...and what's even more interesting is that most fans tend to agree with this analogy...not me though. My belief is that Justin was just afraid, he's finally gotten what he wants and is scared shitless and Lindsay interfering the way she does is a very low blow...especially since she is taking his son to another country. I like the way you tied up the loose ends here, again good job.
Author's Response: Thank you my friend for your wonderful words. I totally agree with you one every point you said. Some people should butt out of other people's lives and let them live their own. Justin was scared because he was young but so what. We all get scared when we do things that will be new. Thanks again.
Jane
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2015 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Written with a lot of feeling.
Sweet but not overly and a nice choice of words.
Very well written.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thanks for you lovely words. I try to be romantic in my stories because I'm a sucker for it. I wrote another chapter and working on the final. Not getting my reviews and must have missed this one. Sorry again.
Jane
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2015 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it! Perfect song choice too.
Author's Response: Thanks Becky. The words in the song made me think of Justin and Brian. This was a way of Brian showing Justin how he felt. Thanks for you kind words.
Jane
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