Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2015 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
Nice that Justin only remembered the happy parts. I sure what happned later haunts Brian.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2015 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
I think you should never ever finish this fic. It should go on forever...
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2015 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
Oh my god, how amazing was this chapter?? It's a perfect recreation and remembrance. Everything that Justin said was exactly as it was in canon. I loved that they quoted "the song", and Justin's painting and the bloody scarf... I literally got chill when I read that. Also, the take on the canon lines:
"What kind of queer are you?"
"One that hates shopping!"
LOL! I loved that...
Bless you, my dear and a big hug to you. xo I'm glad there are three more installments. I can't begin to tell you how much I am enjoying your wonderful story, love, drama, pathos, despair, hilarity... It has it all! I hope you continue to write more stories.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2015 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
This brings them closure, but I wish they'd tell the kids.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2015 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
This was a perfect way for him to remember. Beautifully done
Reviewer: Qaf4life (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
Awesome
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2015 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 52: Outtake 9
What a great chapter! Justin's was really unforgetable and hadn't he remembered it would have been a real pity
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
fun chapter, loved the cake & cream preparation and hwat came along with it.
Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hilarious! 'when in reality.....he was making an honest woman of me.' Brian
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2015 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
I see Munchkin at 18 still likes to blackmail his daddy,and wouldn't you know Justin was out of town when Peanut needed a talk about becoming a woman! poor Brian
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
I didn't care for the idea of a gun to kill his sister, then kill JR for Gus. How in the world does a six year old child think of such violence? I can understand the manipulation some what and even some of the tantrums but not the anger in one so you.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2015 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
I love your story, but Munchkin is quiet a handful. They let him get by with everything. That's not good for him or for peanut to observe. He is so smart but he seems to use it for evil, he needs a long time out for the words he uses and his actions.
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2015 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
The chapter was so sweet
Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
Thanks for keeping your story going. I love reading it!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
Lol, these two never have enough alone time together. ;) It was lovely and hilarious, and I can just see them sitting on the couch together, and the chocolate everywhere in the kitchen. I hope there are a few more chapters left!
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2015 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
So funny when Brian was teasing Mel about the 'special ingredient' in the cream icing Very interesting way of piping icing, with your pants down! Certainly need some pressure and technique to get the best results.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 51: Outtake 8
Cooking with Cock? At least that's what Melanie seems to think.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 50: Outtake 7
What a great outtake, with Munchkin and Peanut learning about the Stud of Liberty Avenue and his hot stalker. :D
Oh, no. The end is nearing... Only acceptable if your fertile imagination produces another story. ;)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 50: Outtake 7
I adore this story and wish it would continue for a long time. Oh how funny how Brian's past comes back to haunt him. It's surprising that no one told the kids about their dads' start to their relationship, but it's better that they learn about it from their parents. Poor Patrick, but he will get over his broken heart eventually. I'm loving these outtakes too!! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2015 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 50: Outtake 7
sorry about Munchkin's breakup, but glad he has his family, even if his sister has blue hair, to back him up.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
I've been reading some heavier QAF stories, so I really appreciate the comic relief fom this "blanket hogs" update. ;)
I'm with you on not ending this story. :)
Reviewer: anym (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2015 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
will there be a honeymoon? i really hope so since their wedding quite bland.. so i hope justin get a long superb perfect surprise honeymoon.
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
LOL!!! That is a very creative explanation that Brian gave to the headboard banging... especially since they did end up fighting over the blanket! Munchkin is one funny kid. :D I'm curious about his drawing, though! Another hilarious chapter full of love.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
Great chapter a mixture of angst and fun. Serious pain with homophobia at school and Brian's fear of Patrick standing out at school. This was balanced with the fun at home with the boys 👏👍
Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
They must sound as if their fighting with a sumo wrestler and a cattle prod. Ha..uh! Thump!
Aah... landing out of bed! One of the charms of sharing a bed with a venerated sportsman of Japan. There is no sharing!
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2015 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
ha, ha Patrick is so funny! I loved this outtake. Yeah, next time the wedding night
Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
Patrick getting married
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 49: Outtake 6
I can understand Brian not wanting Patrick to be hurt by other people. What if the shoe were on the other foot and those homophobics children were on the receiving end of such bigotry? Shouldn't Brian have had their bedroom soundproofed by now?
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2015 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 48: outtake 5
I'm so in love with this story. Bad Justin!!!!!!!POor Brian. Go Ruby and Patrick putting the parents in place.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2015 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 48: outtake 5
What can I say...I like to read more!
thank you for sharing
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 48: outtake 5
Brian and Patrick are such drama queens, and with Patrick 18 years old, it's inevitable that they'll butt heads and fight. Plus, we know Brian's emotional maturity doesn't always match his chronological age. ;)
The trip to the Bahamas sounds like a good idea for the boys. They need time to themselves as well as time with Patrick and Ruby.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 48: outtake 5
So like a married couple. The poor kids. LOL.
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2015 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 48: outtake 5
Very nice chapter! Poor Brian and Justin, they're dealing with proper teenagers. But I love how they managed in the end
Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love reading your story. Thanks for writing more!
Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2015 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
More more more
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2015 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
Nothing like smiling and chuckling your way through a chapter. Very amusing, thank you :-D
Reviewer: Anym (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2015 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
Yay u still continue this story. Brian's childish fatherly concept is something new and fresh. Love it so much... i hope i still can read the cuddle between Brian and his toddler in next chapter since it always my favorite to imagine
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
Somehow it seems that Munchkin takes after Justin in the sex department. Perhaps Justin would have been better with Patrick since he could relate more easily. How nice that Daphne was around for Ruby.
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
This was hilarious! It's a necessary yet embarrassing time for teens and parents, which I remember well. :D LOL! I enjoyed your take on things, and the talks with each parent and godmother (Daphne). I hope you will continue writings these outtakes!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 47: Outtake 4
LOL. Sex ed, Brian style. Patrick's gay and socially awkward and Brian doesn't fathom how that can be. ;)
Brian and Justin together are as hot as ever. And Daphne, that wonderful fag hag, is pretty darned understanding.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
LOL. Patrick, the impossible combo of Brian and Jusin. He has his dads right where he wants them. ;)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
Oh my, Patrick is really acting out. I'm glad that Brian put his foot down or else their son would turn into a really unlikeable adult. I was shocked at the gun request. That's probably what made Brian and Justin take notice, though, so that was good at least. Maybe these two can take some parenting classes from Mel and Linds. :) The family trip will be good for them, I think.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2015 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
LOVE yur story. Did not like the gun & violence theme in this chapter Sorry.
Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 08, 2015 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
Looool! God! He is Brian's child! Next he'll be up before the Head for trying to pull a teacher. Clockwork daddies. Wind 'em up and away he goes. Mini Mike.Patrick's got Brian and Justin's temper, determination and charm and can beat his Uncle Mikey for whining, and that's saying something!
Absolutely hilarious!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2015 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
I hope that they manage to stop the blackmailing. Frankly I think they spend quite a bit of time with munchkin.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2015 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 46: Outtake 3
Ok, first I want to say that I am FINALLY glad you made one of the parents but their foot down to all of the BS Patrick was doing. Because it was getting way out of hand to the point I was getting upset lol
A child needs to be put in a child's place.
Reviewer: Marcia Malone lives here (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2015 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
Just as well Munchkin didn't come out dressed his daddy's Superman costume. Munchkin upset about his best top getting dirty. We all know his daddy has a thing about 'getting all dirty' in his super hero costume too.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2015 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
Omg Patrick is a drama queen he has the boys totally spinning and they are not even in the game with this boy
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2015 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
More laughs with the Taylor-Kinney family! Thank you.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2015 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
Great story. Patrick is the son Brian and Justin deserve.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2015 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
so funny - I love the outtakes - thank you
sort of wand...
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
Lol! Superhero, Patrick is clever coming to that conclusion, although hilarious!!! He knows just how to manipulate his daddies, that's for sure. ;) I'm loving these outtakes!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 45: Outtake 2
Munchkin seems to have it all his way. And I thought my kids were bad.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2015 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
I thought this out take was wonderful, Munchkin was a delight! Looking back to his babyhood was just great, his walking and talking. I loved his way of telling daddy what he wanted to wear a baby label queen, just like daddy. Thanks so much for sharing this story, every chapter from the very first one has been a joy.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
What a sweet outake of Munchkin walking! Thanks for continuing this story.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 03, 2015 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 43
I love your story, from Ruby's red shoe to drama queen Munchkin's clothing care. Brian is just as much a kid sometimes, but there is no doubt he loves his kids with all his heart even though there are moments he like to pretend he doesn't know them, thank you for a delightful story.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
More, more,MORE!
hehe
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2015 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
I love this story, and Brian interacting with the kids just makes me crack up! I really like the way you phrase things and keep everyone in character. I'm looking forward to more outtakes, and hopefully more stories from you! :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2015 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
Don't sweat the baby stuff. It's a fun story not a parenting guide. Really enjoyed this flasback.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2015 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 44: Outtake 1
Nice look at what we missed. Fits right in.
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 43
I really love this story, and the unofficial ending was perfect, with either version of how they met. ;) Munchkin and peanut are hilarious and wonderful also. I'm thrilled that you will add more outtakes also. :))))
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 43
This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! :) I truly enjoyed this story and hate to see it end...but atlas all good things must come to an end.
*sniff sniff* I'm gna miss this. :( :(
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 43
I'm going to cry this is so good
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2015 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 43
So glad this story will continue with outtakes! Thanks for all the smiles and heartwarming moments. :D Ive also enjoyed the way you've played with gender roles with Munchkin/Patrick and Peanut/Ruby. Brian certainly deserves to have a fashionista son. ;)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 43
I love that Patrick is just, if not more like Brian queening out about his precious designer clothes... ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 43
The sweetest chapter for sure. I loved this story so much, you did a great job
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 42
Hilarious and also true to life...B&J muddling along as parents.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 41
LOL...terrible parents taking their kids out of school. And resulting to child bribery, tsk tsk. ;) Great to watch B&J, with L&M's help, outwit the city hall morons.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 43
Calling a 14 year old boy 'Munchkin?!' As if parents at that age aren't embarassing enough! I think another one that teenagers apparently don't like is 'jolly.'' It makes them squirm or so I've read.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 43
Well...they certainly have had an interesting life together....but sometimes I wonder about munchkin lol.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 43
Calling a 14 year old boy 'Munchkin?!' As if parents at that age aren't embarassing enough!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 43
great story.
Reviewer: Dian Kilborn (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 43
That was, indeed, a good read!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2015 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 43
My how time flys. Brian has grown so much. Now if only Mikey and Ted could keep their mouths shut.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 25, 2015 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 42
This chapter made MLMAO , the little devil telling everyone his little sis lost her penis! only the child of Brian and Justin could come up that.Sometimes the demon child could be so sweet, he pulls on your heart string but give him a few minutes and he'll embaress you fully. I've love this story since chapter one, aside from health problems it has been a beautiful loving story.
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 42
This chapter was too cute and the children giving Brian and justin a run for there money
Reviewer: Noitish (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 42
Truly enjoying this story! The guys and the little girl are so f-ing adorable! The only thing that struck me as odd in this chapter was that a 12 year old wasn't allowed to use a knife. Anyway, looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 42
Ruby is so adorable! Nice update. :)
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2015 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 39
Yes, it's amazing what life throws at us.
I remember a discussion about the possibility of male pregnancy coming up one day and someone rather nastily saying if gays could get pregnant,that would certainly frighten them enough to give up 'what they do'. Huh! You could ask any of them and they would probably say 'As if!' ''Getting pregnant has never stopped straights so why them?'' A bit niaive for supposedly worldlywise people too.
I'm surprised at Justin being afraid of a wild rat when his son has two pet ones.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2015 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 42
I really like this story. It seems so real and some of it is hilarious.Ruby sure does have Brian wrapped around her finger.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 42
loved the sibling rivalry. I had a friend whose son was just as horrified as Patrick to discover his sister lacked a penis. Enjoying your story.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 42
Aww, that was so sweet.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 41
H ave you ever heard of a bride or groom who barfed or got the 'runs' while down the aisle? I know, so romantic! There must be a few.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2015 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 42
Very amusing chapter I loved how smart the kids are and how much trouble Brian and Justin are in lol
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 41
O--Hoooh! We love scorching hot! Hotter the better. Hot enough to shrivel the balls. Well not ours obviously.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
If you don't stop. Definitely no complaints here.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 38
Sounds like the Kinnetik staff would take more notice of Peanut and Munchkin. You bet!
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 37
I'll always remember that radio 'confession' program, where this woman called in to tell us about the time some friends had come round with their taciturn teenage son. The hostess had put a lot of work into the meal she had given them, and she was justifiably furious when the teenager stated 'I don't eat shit like that'. She'd phoned the radio sttion to confess that when it came to the dessert,she dumped a box of laxative in his serving. The family had to leave early because he'd suddenly become unwell.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 37
Just wait till Peanut's old enough to get her own back!
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 36
Munchkin is so feisty. Munchkin/Patrick, when he's a man will be a force to be reckoned with.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 37
Weird connection. Maybe it's the woman/hot guy thing? Just joking! I mean he is Brian Kinney.
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2015 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 36
Makes me wonder, if Brian was obviously breastfeeding Peanut in public- would that idiot have approached him? Think not. Can't get anything more intimate and maternal, or paternal in this case than that. Brilliant that the rest of the cafe leapt to the Kinney's defence and kicked the fucker out.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2015 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 41
That was sweet! I thought that maybe Mel was going to stir up trouble at City Hall, being the lawyer and all...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2015 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 41
I have a question from chapter 34 I was reading the story from the beginning for the third or fourth time, and I found a phrase I didn't understand from munchkin" I would be a rubbish brotha", rubbish is the word I didn't understand the the context the use the the word 'rubbish', By the way I have loved every chapter of this story I hope there are more chapters coming.
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2015 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 41
I absolutely loved this chapter, and it's exactly what I could see happening with these two. Mazel tov! ;)
Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2015 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 41
Thank you so much for your wonderful story, I look forward to reading and catching up every week, keep up the great work|
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2015 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 41
Omg a red suit me thinks Aunty Em may have a protege lol and of course Brian decides to get married and makes it happen
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2015 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 37
Yes... Munchkin is his parents all over the back. How funny!
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2015 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 41
Very nice and sweet chapter! But I don't like Patrick tantrums, he is such a drama prince
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2015 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 41
For some reason that courthouse scene seemed very familiar....the great state of Kentucky comes to mind ;) this was quite the entertaining chapter my friend.
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2015 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 41
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love munchkin's queen outs about his red suit and that little demon wanted cuff links, he's so cute. Peanut isn't as flaming as munchkin but I have no doubt she'll be as bad as Brian she will choose her moments. please more chapters.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2015 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 41
Well you know how it is. Once kids come along smut goes out the window. So they finally made it legal, being married. Unfortunatly there are some who claim it's against their religion for perform marriages. What a bunch of crock!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 40
Outtake away! This is such a funny, feel-good story. Thanks for the entertainment.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 39
I'm amazed Brian would deal with a rat, even a small one, so cheerfully. Chicken pox is evidently another matter... ;)
So, is Justin going to try and take care of 3 kids with pox at the same time? That's far worse than a small rat, especially the big kid. :D
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 38
LOL...Peanut's new words. Yikes!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2015 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 37
Ah the full-blown tantrum, a la Taylor. Of course, Brian has his adult version (and so do the rest of us). ;)
Reviewer: Jennie (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2015 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 40
I so love this story. Daphne and Brian,s banter is soo funny
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 40
Awww, poor guys, it really does itch, but I don't remember any pain. Maybe it's been too long since I had chicken pox. I sat in a chair, gripping the seat of the chair so I wouldn't scratch, with Calamine lotion everywhere. Not a pretty sight! Lol I think there was only one small scar. Poor Justin playing nurse to three! :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 39
Ruh roh, chicken pox! I had that as a kid and still remember how itchy it was. I hope everyone else doesn't get it! :) How funny that Brian had to answer those uncomfortable questions yet again about how the kids came to be. Cute chapter!
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2015 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 40
As if it wasn't enough with domesticity, the three "kids" have chicken pox. I feel pity for Justin who is trying his best to take care of them, he deserves a good and lovely reward.
Sad to read that the story is coming to an end. I hope you can come up with another just as excellent as this one
Reviewer: anym (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2015 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 40
Dont stopp.... ^^ your story always make my day
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 40
I'm not sure who I should feel more sorry for Brian and the kids, or Justin... Three babies is right...
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 40
Lol good chapter!!!! I had a smile on my face the whole chapter!
Noooooo!!! I dnt want this to end!!!!! :(
please dnt go!
Reviewer: bctush (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2015 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 40
I never thought anyone could out queen Brian, but it looks like munchkin has done just that. Love munchkin and peanut and I bet munchkin not being able to take the medicine is really in pain. If they don't get over this soon Justin will need a stay at the boobie hatch. Love your story so much.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 40
Nice update....wish I could trade places with Daphne ;)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 40
Now you have me itching. The Peanut seems to be fairing the best, but then she is a girl.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 40
Lol Brian has met his match with his son in the drama stakes. I am glad Daphne is there to help Justin
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2015 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 40
Oh poor Brian and kids
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2015 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 39
I thought this capter was really good, but those two at the school were awful. How could someone ask if munchkin was not wanted by his mother, in front of said child. these two trolls should be called on the carpet for acting so irresponsible. And to top everything Justin three babies with chicken pox! I had chicken pox when I was five in kindergarden, then at 40 I had shingles--NO FUN. I had to take six weeks sick leave. I hope for many more chapters.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 39
Omg you gave Brian chicken pox lol he is going to be an unbelievable bitch to live with. I see big BIG rows coming up as Justin tries to manage him and Ruby and Patrick
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 39
Chicken pox is not just the red dots, these are small blisters all over the body, even at the private parts, and with the hair on his head, high fever and terrible itching. If scratching hurt the envelope, leave scars.For all this really falls immunity, so if you can not keep, you can get pneumonia, then.
Now I feel like a public service information.
I like your way of illustrating B / J family life with children. So sweet interaction.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2015 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 39
OMG!! lol this should be really good! Cant wait for next update!
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 39
I HATED having the chcken pox so I sympathize with Brian. Cute chapter.
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 39
Yes More please
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 39
Brian is such a drama queen and a great father at the same time I love it. Luckily he has Justin to bring him down to Earth.
Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2015 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 39
my mom did about 3 weeks of chicken pox when I brought it home from Kindergarden my sisters were 3 and about 9 months all of us got it the youngest got it the worst the only bright side as far as my mom was concerned was it was over. I feel for Justin a whiny sick Brian equals nightmare.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 39
Damn....this really is turning into the let's make Brian suffer show...smh
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