Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2021 12:15 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
great story
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2019 04:14 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling!
It's great to see you're back writing again, I've missed you!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2018 05:44 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
good one, pretty girls
Author's Response: Thanks Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: The SNO (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2016 09:20 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I loved this story; great mix of what's needed to make your heart beat faster and your smile appear wider.
Very interesting start (the punches) and smooth way to have Brian and Justin reconnected.
Being anti-Mickael and Ethan from D1, it was fun to see how you nailed them.
Author's Response: I really liked writing this one. There's nothing better than an anti-Michael fic, accept an anti-Michael and anti-Ethan fic all rolled into one... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2015 11:11 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
This was a great story and a perfect epilogue.
WOW five daughters....what a beautiful family they have.
What a patetic Michael become. At 45 leaving with his mother and dreaming of the imposible.
Thank you for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is so nice of you to say... Yes, Brian finds himself in a place he never expected, and he's never been happier... Michael's finds himself in a place he totally belongs, feeling sorry for himself... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2015 12:32 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Loved this story; but I always love your stories!
Have tried to review for days, but some of the security codes are a problem frequently; sorry. Please keep your stories coming~~~ sad when this was over. LOVED the pics, a real treat, especially the first chapter........omg!
Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks, it's always so great to hear that you're enjoying my fics... This story was really fun to write, and the pics as always really make the fic. Weren't the girls so cute and adorable, Daddy Brian... I always knew he'd be a great father once he stopped freaking out about family and responsibilities...
I sometimes have problems with the security code thing. It usually happens when I used a different browser, or download the updates to software. I think what's happens is your computer doesn't remember your passwords and you have to sign back in again? Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2015 04:12 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Like many others I always pull your stories up to read. I like the way you write. I don't understand A03 coming down on you as rude and conecending and readers should form their own opions. I hated Mikey on the show off the show Hal was rude about his fellow actors and acted like he was the star.You and all the other authors always list at the beginning that this anti Michael. If you don't like that then read another author or story no one forces them to read anything. People are warned about death fics, Mpreg, etc. pay attention and stop spoiling our fun.
Author's Response: Oh My God did you read that exchange in the comments? I couldn't really understand why they were so upset with me, and I didn't think I was mean or rude to them... At first I though, just stop replying and it will stop, but then they accused me of only wants praise, or something like that... I don't really read fics on AO3, and only post there because Kim ~ Predec2 mentioned it on twitter. But when all those crazy comments were being posted I wondered if they had a message board or something. It was hard to believe they all just happened to read it all at the same time... Scratches head? Thanks for your support, it really means a lot to know other enjoy my writing... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2015 09:28 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I don't think Mikey will ever grow up. Seems like he's stuck in high school. Brian being a father to 5 girls is something I would have never seen coming. But he loves them as he does Justin. Great fic.
Jane
Author's Response: "Seems like he's stuck in high school." Yeah, maybe even grade school, but that Mikey... It is a surprise, but Brian's seems to be loving his new found role as father and husband... Lucky Justin, although it may seem at times he's raising six children at times... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2015 07:53 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
What a fitting epilogue for this story! Wow, Brian and Justin with five girls and Brian's the particularly doting father. And the whiner is by himself (as he should be).
Author's Response: Thanks so much, it seemed like the perfect way to tied it all together, and Michael left all by his lonesome... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2015 04:20 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
II loved this story and the beautiful pictures you used for the girls, especially Angela and Roxanne. Hope you'll write sequal of the little ones growing up, this story was so delightful I'm sure others like further adventures.
Author's Response: Yes, the girls are real cuties, I can just imagine all the shenanigans they could get into... I'll put it on the back burner for now, thanks for the suggestion... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 06:03 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Just wanted to tell you I really enjoyed this. I can always count on one of your stories when I am n a total anti-Mikey mood! Thank you for this one it was a laugh I really needed this morning!! Thanks for sharing this!!
Well done!
:)
Author's Response: So glad I could brighten your day. There's nothing better than a good anti-Michael story and I seem to have perfected them... Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 05:40 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I really enjoyed reading the epilogue and how everyone's lives were going in the last 12 years. Wow, five daughters! Lol, that swear jar can probably be a car fund for when the girls start driving! :D I actually felt sorry for Michael at the end. Maybe now he can start moving on and stop obsessing about what will never be with Brian.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes everyone has moved forward in their lives, well everyone except Michael, who seems to be still be stuck perpetual reruns in his mind... Yes, that swear jar is overflowing, a car funds sounds about right, except that Brian will probably buy them one for their sixteenth birthday... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2015 01:50 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
wonderfull story
thank you for writing and sharing
Author's Response: You're so welcome, I'm so happy you enjoyed it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 08:50 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Wow great fic I really
I,ed it and then we had the epilogue that had my amused ingredient of Michael being told and actually listening. You did however actually end it making me feel sorry for Michael lol but I will get over it lol
Author's Response: Imagine that Michael, actually hearing what's been said to him, although it took some time... So glad you enjoyed this one... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 08:38 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Wonderful epilogue. The pictures of the girls are beautiful. It's good to see Brian and Justin so happy as well as successful. Five future teenage girls - poor Brian........LOL. As for Michael - yeah well - he's an idiot..........
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I so appreciate that! The girls are so adorable, and yes Brian's going to be one overprotective father when they start dating... Michael, he deserves so much worse, but I'll leave him to his own demise... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 03:31 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
**just wanted to say I just re read it again for the SECOND time cuz I LOVED THIS*** hehehe
p.s its the start of the w-end soooooo yeah a see a THIRD time in my future hehehe
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much, again... I do that sometimes, read and re-read fics that pull on my heartstrings... Have a great weekend... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2015 02:41 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I loved this story. Mikey is a tool, but whats new. The epilogue was wonderful and the pictures you used were beautiful the blonde hair and those big blue eyes. That Angela looked like a sweetie with Brian's mischief clearly there. Thank you for a lovely story.
Author's Response: I know their daughters were so beautiful, and I can so see Brian as the doting father. Just imagine who he'll be once they start dating, can you say overprotective... So glad you enjoyed this one... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2015 12:45 AM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
OMG! I Loved this! I Love the girls!!!
Anytime to bash Michael is a win win in my book!!
Now finish Devil in a Blue Dress!!!!
(amoung others) hehe
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you loved it! That makes me so happy knowing I got it right, yes anytime I can show Michael's true colors is a good day for me... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2015 10:51 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
This was fucking BRILLIANT! I couldn't have imagined a better accounting of how things might have played out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes everyone's lives developed into who they truly were, including Michael's... I know, my bad... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2015 10:02 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
Loved this story- always a pleasure to see Brian and Justin happy and surrounded by their family, not to mention Michael reflected as the true clueless and selfish child that he acts like. It rang very true that Ben would leave Michael and will just assume he went on to find deep mutual love with someone great:-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I can totally see them moving on with their lives and raising children together. Ben put up with a lot Michael's shit, while Michael always putting Brian first. You're right Ben deserves some who can really love him, and Michael deserves exactly what he got, living at home in his childhood bedroom at 44, all alone and emotionally stunted... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2015 09:07 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
I love this. It's so right that Justin and Brian are still together, that Emmett and Ted have accomplished a lot and Mikey is still in a rut. He and Brian didn't have much in common even when Justin came into the picture. The surprise was seeing that Justin fathered five girls!!! Couldn't Brian have fathered a child or two? Great job.
Author's Response: You know me, I'll always keep our boys together... It was great that Fabulous, was going so fabulously! I'd like to keep Michael in more than just a rut, but leaving him a whining, immature idiot seemed to work so well... I guess when I found all those beautiful pics of blond little girls, it just seemed to work perfectly as Justin being the father... Maybe in Christmas Presents, Brian will have another round at being the birth parent... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2015 08:46 PM · On: Part 4 ~ Epilogue ~ Life Goes On�
This was great, enjoyed the part about the girls. Laughed at Justin asking Brian if he was raising a Clan Of Blond Ninja's.I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing it... So glad you enjoyed it... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2015 08:05 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Love this fic, as you probable know I'm a big fan of anti- Mikey fics. Brilliant how all three injuries brought about different memory loss, but Justin was still a major part of Brian's memory. Hated to see it end so quietly in regards to Mikey and Debbie.
Thanks for sharing, always looking for new and updates on your wips.
Always,
JoAnn
Author's Response: It just goes to show that no matter what Justin will always be on Brian's mind, and in his heart... It seems I've been coaxed into writing an epilogue, as you can see it didn't take much arm twisting... Thanks for the wonderful comments, they made my day... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 09:17 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I really like the plot twist of Brian waking up remembering their future. Very intriguing. Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks Tag, I was having fun with a little bit of supernatural in this one, now it's seems that I'll have to catapult them into that future and see what happens... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 04:18 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I'm happy to see that Brian remembers everything. But could you deal more firmly with Mikey. The fact the he still seems entilted to a part in Brian's life is just so wrong.
Author's Response: Yes, Michael's smack down is coming, and yes it's really going to hurt... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 04:05 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
I'm beginning to see a pattern here. How many times does Brian lose his memory before he tosses Mikey and keeps Justin?
Author's Response: Yes, a pattern is developing and thankfully Brian and Justin's relationship will grow stronger... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 03:38 AM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
I've been out of internet range and can't believe I missed this. I alway felt that someone should deal with what happened during that episode and know that you will do a good job of it. Hopefully any misunderstandings about Brian will be brought to Justin's attention.
Author's Response: "I've been out of internet range." I was away on vacation a few weeks ago, and I felt like I was stuck in the stone age, or I had a huge addiction I couldn't shake... He, he, he... Yes like so many arc's in QAF they just seemed to slide right over Michael's extremely rude comment about Justin. Although I may have taken this a little far... I hope you enjoy it... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 08:07 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Great story! Great ideas there with the 3 different memories. Naturally I love the anti-Michael aspects. Always a fan of that.
thrilled with the happy ending and Brian coming to terms with it all. Loved how all 3 sets of "memories or lack thereof, were really different aspects of teh real Brian.
would've loved to see a bit more of what happened with Michael. He and Deb were so adamant. Would like to see, perhaps another chapter??? showing Brian putting hsi foot down. Allowing everything he felt adn experienced during his lapses to come forward. (perhaps an epilogue or a ssequal?) I'm a bit of a fic whore for your anti-Mikeys. LOL
Really well done. Always enjoy your stories!
Author's Response: "I'm a bit of a fic whore for your anti-Mikeys." Thank you for that, I really needed that! I just got called on the carpet over on AO3 for being rude and condescending towards Michael, I was told I should let the reader form there own opinions... What part of Alternative Universe don't they understand? Of course it was on 'The Offer Still Stands' not this fic, but still... Okay I feel so much better now, I needed to vent! So yes an epilogue,will have to be written with a down smack down for Michael if for no other reason than to just piss off all those Mikey lovers... Really, I'm letting it go now... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2015 11:54 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
That was a cute story.....may there be a sequel?
That would be cool. Seeing how Brians visions or in that matter memories are coming true..... with the children and all... :)
Hope you keep going.
Best wishes,
Diana
Author's Response: Oh, I like that idea of Brian's visions of a happily married man and father, I bet Justin would be pretty thrilled too... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2015 07:11 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Wow, I'm not sure what I think, but it's nice to see B&J happy in the end.
Author's Response: I'm all about the love, and happy endings... Thanks for reading ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 02:21 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
What a heartwarming conclusion. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm always about a happy ending... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 11:28 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
This was excellent. Loved the anti-Michael in this one. Brian sure went through hell. Great fic.
Jane
Author's Response: Thanks Jane, I'm so happy you enjoyed this one, now who doesn't love a good anti-Michael fic... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 05:50 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I feel a great need to see Michael punished for his actions and attitude. If you truly love someone you don't act like a complete prick - unless of course you are Michael Novotny. Glad to see the boys reunited in spite of Michael's interference. Would like to see an epilogue..........
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That seems to be the consensus, I'll have to work on a new ending... That is once I update my other fics of course... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 03:04 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Great ending. Glad I stayed with the story through the angsty parts. Always enjoy your stories. Bill
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with this one even with all the angst, I'm so glad you enjoyed it... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2015 02:23 AM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I would like to see an epilogue of Michael's reaction of Brian kicking him to the curb and of finding out Ben left and moved. (of course its Brian's fault according to Deb)
I'm just evil like that.
Sandy
Author's Response: Now what's that saying??? Evil minds think alike... Or something like that, he, he, he... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 11:24 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Everybody wants an epilogue about Brian and Justin's happy future, but I'm such a bad person that I want an epilogue where Brian tells Michael where to shove it. Hee Hee Hee.
Author's Response: There's always room for a little Michael bashing, I'll see what I can do... Thanks for commenting ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 10:10 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Lovely story. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: You're so welcome... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 09:50 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I'm in love with is story
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Squeeze! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 09:40 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Perfect ending.:-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much... ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 09:16 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
Very fitting ending my friend ;) thank you for sharing
Author's Response: Thanks Darling, I'm so glad you enjoyed it... ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 07:49 PM · On: Part Three ~ I Remember You�
I'm glad that Brian regained his memories and that he still believes in their future life like he dreamed. Would you consider an epilogue? I enjoyed this story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I can see an epilogue taking a look years into the future and seeing how they've grown together over time... Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 02:32 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Oh nooo, and I was already so happy for them! What a cliffhanger. Otherwise I really loved the second chapter though, especially the new Brian. Not that I don't like his usual attituded - I love it - but still, I also love seeing a happy Justin who has more open partner.
Author's Response: I know, I did it again... Have no fear the new Brian is still with us, only he's even more new and improved... Yes a happy Justin makes for a happy Brian.. Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 12:39 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
This is so full of angst - awesome! You have portrayed Mikey so in character, never was there someone more selfish, needy and traitorous towards his "best friend". As they saying goes " with friends like that who needs enemies". Eagerly awaiting next instalment.
Author's Response: Never was there someone more selfish, needy and traitorous towards his "best friend, " isn't that the truth! Last chapter just posted... I hope you enjoy it ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 10:54 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Oh no! Not again. :( Will Brian change again? Hopefully not.
Author's Response: I know! How could I? Yes another change, but one is for the better... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2015 06:44 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Oh, no, please, poor Brian. He has to be OK, he has just said "love you" to Justin. Why Michael is always getting in the way?? What an annoying tw*t
Author's Response: I know poor Brian, especially now that he's admitted that he loves Justin... To bad Michael didn't end up with a head injury, he is so annoying... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 05:28 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Well written as always but not sure if I like this story or not. It will depend on how poor Brian winds up after all his head injuries. So much angst! Wasn't going to read chapter 2 but I couldn't help myself, you had me hooked.
Author's Response: I know what you mean about 'not going to read this,' it's kind of like train wreck, and you can't look away... I hope you enjoy the ending, you know me I always end with our boys back together, head over heals in love... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 12:34 AM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
So will the third fall bring back all his memories? This AU Brian is a bit of a klutz, Lol.
Author's Response: I like to think he's a victim of his circumstances... Memories are a funny thing, but you might be on to something... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 10:50 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Bit of role reversal in a very sweet way. Farewell once more to the chin-rat.
Now if dimwitted, jealous Michael hasn't caused too much damage, there will be a blending of the old and new Brians, so that a lovely future lies ahead for BJ.
Author's Response: Just like in the series, Ian's cheating leads to him losing Justin. Thankfully Brian's fall isn't as serious as it could have been and Justin's right there by his side, he's in it for the long haul... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 09:02 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
OHHHH NOOOOO!! If this is only 3 chapters I hope this is the straw that brings all the memories back
But honestly, this is a great amnesia fic and I encourage and urge you to do a little re write and....KEEP IT GOING!! This is like buying a chocolate bar and realizing there was only half a bar in the package.... Keep it going....pleeeeeeeeeeese??????
Author's Response: I don't know how I missed some of these comments, sorry... Yes it has now been confirmed that my fic needs an epilogue, I'll get started on that right away... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:19 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Forgot to mention but that was a hell of a cliff hanger hope you update soon before all my finger nails are bitten off.
Author's Response: This fic does leave on the edge, but part three will be posted tomorrow. I hope you like the ending... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
As usual Mikey is an ass wipe, in his life he is so clueless. I love almost all anti-Mikey stories, he is so mentally unbalanced I don't understand why other characters pay any attentation to him.
Author's Response: He likes to play like he's so innocent, but he's conniving, and manipulative, always taking advantage of others... Yep, no love loss here... He, he, he... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 07:59 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
I am really liking this story. Honestly, I wonder if they shouldn't have made him an amnesiac in the show at least for a little while....anything for a break from the constant snarkiness....and thanks for the pic, tha was a nice touch...wish my comp would co operate...I d do that all the time.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you're enjoying it... I know what you mean about his snarkyness, I guess that why I almost always write in AU. That way I can write he how, I think he might have evolved, or how i believe he really felt underneath all his bravado... The pics really do ad to the feel of the story, but they're a little tricky sometimes. I've learned to make a list the exact spelling of the pic title before downloading them into midnight whispers, then I copy and paste an existing link into my fic and change the pic title, remembering to add underline dashes between words... Good luck... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 06:25 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Oh no....not again I hope his memory isn't affected even more.
Author's Response: I know, how could I do that to Brian again... The brain is a funny thing, you never know what memories it might dredge up... But nothing to worry about this time, I'm a firm believer in happy endings... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:16 PM · On: Part Two ~ Clean Slate�
Can you do something EVIL to Michael, PLEASE???
Please let Brian be alright and Micheal not be a complete ass to Justin like he has been.
Sandy
Author's Response: Yes, Michael so deserves to get his ass kicked... Things aren't as bad as they seem, although Michael still continues to be a pain in the ass. Hang in there, Brian and Justin's future looks bright... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: August 14, 2015 03:03 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Interesting start of a story. I like it. :)
Keep going, i so wanna see how this turns out.
Diana
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you're liking it... Part Two just posted... Enjoy ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 02:07 AM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Wow. That's quite a beginning. I really liked the first part of the chapter and could see many possibilities, with Brian's dream of a future life with Justin. Not sure what to think about his second accident and why that was necessary, but I'll keep reading to see what happens. It seems very bleak right now. I really enjoy your writing style, and the way you phrase things; you're very talented. :)
Author's Response: Yes, it's a big change from my normal writing but I got this idea and just had to go with it. So hang in there I promise you won't be disappointed as you read the next two chapters... Because I'm all about the love between Brian and Justin... Thanks so much for such a wonderful comment, that is so sweet of you to say... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 01:29 AM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Wow! This is tragic! Wake up Justin and catch the clue train before Brian ends up dead, I can't decide who I dislike more, Michael or Ethan!
Author's Response: It's hard to know which one to loath more at this point, they're both reprehensible at the moment... Yes, it does seem tragic, but no need to worry my fics always end on a happy note... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 10:32 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Ummm...I can't even find the words....I mean, this is starting out on a very depressing note. I trust you though because I know how your stories end.
Author's Response: I can see why you feel depressed, but I rarely ever write angst. So trust me as painful as it seems right now, Brian is going through some changes that will alter how he sees his life... More coming very,very soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: The Lantern keeps shining (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:37 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Seem to be hearing rather a lot about horrible manipulative people this week. These people have a bad habit of trying to stick around.
Author's Response: Fortunately they won't be able to prevent whats meant to be... Love will always find a way... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2015 06:27 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Poor Brian and Justin! It should have been Mikey and Ethan in the accident. What a horrible manipulative pair in this.
Author's Response: Give them time, and they'll find their way back into each others heart... Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 05:46 PM · On: Part One ~ Confused and Heartbroken�
Poor Brian! And this time Justin needs to grow up and learn to avoid all chin-rats. But, we know BJ love will win. <3
Well done with Brian's memories of the future! Looking forward to the next two chapters.
Author's Response: I know, he's helpless in love with his Sunshine, and at a loss for how to fix what he can't even remember... Next chapter coming right up... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
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