Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2016 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
This has been a wonderful story, its hard to belive it is your first. Please keep writing on this site. I truly enjoyed each word. Of course Brian and Justin are my favorites but Gus was such a cutie in the series you coun't help but love him.
Author's Response: thank you for reading and reviewing... so sorry I missed your review when you made it. So glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2016 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
I love how Gus goes to Justin with his question, sometime Brian scares Gus. Gus thinks his dad may be disapointed in him not realizing Gus is his life
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2016 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
ienjoyed this chapter, Gus is so conflicted but Btian and Justin can guide him. Gus knows his father and Justin will always tell him the truth weather its pretty or not
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2016 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
the dreaded prom, no one wants to talk about it. Justin can handle it because he loves Gus and wants him to experience the joy of a prom
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2016 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
Beautiful, well written.Love howw all 4 parents give advice, but can't help but love Justin and Gus together.
Thanks for sharing/
Author's Response: thank you for reading my story. I am glad you enjoyed it. I always figured Justin and Gus would be well bonded and Gus would feel comfortable talking to Justin about anything. :)
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2016 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
You did an amazing job on your first fic. I hope we see a lot more. I loved the 4 parent conversation. They were a big help in getting Gus to realize what it was he really wanted. This was very well written, I really enjoyed it.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: thank you Dee Dee. I have more story ideas in my head, but want to know where they are going before I start writing them :)
Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2016 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great job, my friend! I know this is a Gus fic, but…
But when you wrote this…
"Brian puts his hands on Justin's face bringing him back to the moment. Brian lowers himself until he has all of Justin inside him."
I just SQUEE'D and melted. *faints*
Author's Response: thank you so much. It was fun, but much tougher than I thought to write. I have other ideas, but want to have more of the stories worked out in my head before I start writing them. :)
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2016 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
poor gus but sweet
Author's Response: thank you for reading the story :)
Reviewer: Dian Kilborn (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2016 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Brian gave Justin a sweet treat at the end indeed...a loving gesture. I'm so glad for the two of them. I only wish that Justin could remember all of good things about his prom - the arrival of Brian...the incredible dancing...how it felt to be in Brian's arms.
Good story.
Author's Response: I didn't want him overwhelmed with memories, just a peaceful feeling and knowing that Brian realized he loved him way back then... in my mind, the specific memories will probably come now that it has started.
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2016 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. A happy ending for all of them. Congrats, I hope to see more stories from you soon.
Author's Response: thank you... I have many ideas in my head, just need to sort through them to figure out what is next :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
Bravo my friend and Toppy! Justin was a bonus.
Author's Response: thank you... and Toppy! Justin came to me at the last minute and seemed to fit for me :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wonderful ending. Love how Justin got the feeling of the prom back. And the happy ending for both Gus and Brian.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2016 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awww, well done on completing your first story :)
I'm so happy that both Brian and Justin finally connected some happy memories with prom night.
And way to go, Gus. It makes me happy to think that all his classmates see him with Steven and think nothing of it. That's how it should be :)
Author's Response: Thank you... you were such a help. I appreciate it so much!
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2016 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 4
Nice.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter with Justin remembering good feelings from his prom. Hope to read mores stories from you!!! Bill
Author's Response: Thank you. I have some more ideas floating in my head, just need to get them a little straight :)
~Kathy
Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
Kathy, I couldn't wait I had to start reading it. This is a GREAT first story, Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks Lauren, it is complete and all posted now! :)
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2016 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
good job
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love that Gus comes to Justin with his questions, who better to ask about bottoming...
That was HOT!
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
Next chapter soon please!
Author's Response: should be up on Monday! :)
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2016 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm happy for Gus and his friends. Day NYC was very sweet and hot. Looking forward to the next chapter, the promp night.
Author's Response: thank you! glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 3
great day in NYC for all the boys. Still really enjoying your story.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it... since this is my first story, I'm still figuring it all out. Writing is MUCH tougher than I expected! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2016 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad that both Steven and Ashley are happy with Gus. It's a win-win. Now he's all set with a new tux and advice from Justin.
Author's Response: thank you. I hope I'm keeping everyone interested.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2016 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well the cat's out of the bag, so to speak...
Thank God Brian's self-image has improved to the point he can admit, he likes to bottom...
Maybe Gus will grow up a little faster, more secure in his sexuality than his father did...
I can't wait to read more about Gus and Steven... Young Love...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2016 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
wow lol i like this i could never talk like gus does lol
Author's Response: thank you :) I couldn't talk like that either lol
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loving this one. The way the 4 parents try to gently push Gus into making the best desicion is wonderful. Gus is so lucky to have four such caring parents.
Going to add this one to my favourites.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Glad you are enjoying it :)
xo
Kathy
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2016 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow ... what a great chapter, I'm a bit speechless. Really so beautiful the interaction of both parents and Gus. Looking forward to the next. Happy weekend!
Author's Response: thank you so much.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
I really love where this is going. So proud of you!
Author's Response: awww, thanks my love :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh my...this is really getting good 👍
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
really interesting chapter went in a direction I wasn't really expecting. Still really enjoying your story and looking forward to more. Bill
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2016 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
Gotta say, this came out very good. Now how does he let Ashley down? There's so many ways this could play out and I can't wait to find out which way you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks. glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2016 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great beginning. Loved B&J office action. Looking forward to move of this story. Bill
Author's Response: thanks. chapter 2 should be up either tonight or tomorrow.. just finishing the edit. :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2016 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
Two people who know each other and work so hard not to hurt each other xx
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job with the first chapter of your first story! You know I enjoy talking with you and I know you've been talking about gaining the confidence to write for a while. This is a such a big step and you are already showing a lot of promise, Just with this first chapter. Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: awww, Thanks... you've been a great help. I appreciate the encouragement you give... thanks lots!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting start.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW!! This first chapter leaves me wanting more, more, more and even more.
I can't believe it is your first try at writing. You are really awesome at it.
And to start of a story with hot sex left me speachless and once again wanting more.
Welcome to the world of writing.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thank you for such kind words.
Ch. 2 should be up soon as I just need to finish the editing.
Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2016 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Congrats on posting the first chapter of your story.
The title "Happy Ending" sounds good. :) I love the storyline Brian & Justin and Gus, nice start, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you. ch. 2 should be up soon. just need to finalize the editing.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Welcome to the world of writing fanfics, you'll get hooked :D
This was great, I told you people would love this. Your idea is unique and I have never read anything like it before.
I cannot wait for you to keep posting, so people get to read the whole story.
Love it x
Author's Response: thank you My dear.
ch. 2 coming soon!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
nice start - welcome to the world of fanfic writers - happy writing
Charle
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very well done and certainly leaves one wanting more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will be able to post ch 2 soon, just need to finish the editing.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was great! You jumped right in with all the hot sex, which of course I love!
I like the premise too, I can see how this would be upsetting for Brian especially because he's never really dealt with the prom after all this time...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope I keep the momentum going.
So glad you like it, I enjoy your writing so much, great compliment coming from you!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2016 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, Kathy! Welcome to the world of writers! Congrats on posting the first chapter to your new story! Unique story line, and a good start. I'll be looking forward to reading more. ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm excited to start the writing journey.
I've had this story in my head for quite a while, just needed the courage to start!
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