Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2019 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

good one

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

That was so in character :). Good little epilogue-like chapter.

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:54 PM · On: Gone Playing

Ugh, Michael. Always in the way. But yay for getting rid of the fiddler! 

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:36 PM · On: Gus

Haha, Gus is the best :D. Brian so thought him well.

Eww.

I know right.

Bwahaha. 

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:22 PM · On: Here for My Stuff

You go Brian, show him who's boss :). I love that little voice, he knows what he's talking about. 

He's not wearing any underwear!

Yay!

My thoughts exactly! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Excellent story I really enjoyed thank you xx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

That is a great idea to finish with everyone POV ! Thank you I really like your short story !

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

You nailed everyone's POV on the head.  They were perfect!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2017 01:23 PM · On: Gone Playing

Oh yes ! Brian sees how Michael is Finally! And he accepts his love for Justin and share the mistakes Thank you for the update !

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and the review!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2017 12:51 PM · On: Gone Playing

Love the way this went.  Brian finally realizing that Michael is a pain that needs removing.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Well he's offically removed. Thanks!!!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2017 10:16 PM · On: Gone Playing

Great chapter, loved the vision of Michael cobered in vomit.  Would have been great if it happened like this on the show.  Your version is much more fun.  



Author's Response:

A vomit covered Michael would've been hilarious in the show. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2017 07:46 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Way to Gus, 'bug yuk' laughing so hard. Love the voices in their heads.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2017 11:33 AM · On: Gus

Getting back together yay

Author's Response:

Yay!!! Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2017 11:09 AM · On: Gus

I love your story ! Really ! And how Gus treated Ethan, and Justin says the truth to the girl ! Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much that means the world to me!!! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2017 03:10 AM · On: Gus

They are still so connected.  If Ethan wasn't so creepy I would almost feel sorry for him.  Really enjoying your story.  



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying. Thanks so much!!! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2017 02:58 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Very interesting start.  I always felt Justin was trying to make himself believe he loved Ethan but never was really convinced.



Author's Response:

I agree thanks for reading!!! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 10:39 PM · On: Gus

Aha.  See he finally admits it.  Of course having Justin suck him off helps.  Love how Gus treated Ethan.  Perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 11:30 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Lol that was amusing and ver very hot!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!! 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 07:02 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Love the voices in Justin's head...LOL - and they are giving him the right messages... Time to listen and get rid of Ethan (never liked him) Feels like Brian has plans to seduce his blond back home again. The gang (AKA Michael) will probably have a problem with that. Looking forward to finding out what you have 'up your sleeve'.



Author's Response:

Never liked Ethan either. Thanks so much!!!! 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2017 12:21 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

That was funny and gave me the vapors. Fun read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 11:27 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Hearing Justin's thoughts is truly original! I hope they will tell him what he really should do and leave Ethan !!

Justin will continue to see Brian in hiding it could be fun! Thank you for this start !

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2017 01:40 AM · On: Here for My Stuff

Have to admit Justin talking to himself is amusing.  At least he got something out of it and hopefully will continue to do so.



Author's Response:

It will continue more chapters will be posted soon. Thanks for reading

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