Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2022 02:00 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Lol I'm just reading all my faves again
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for the love. Yay!
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2019 08:03 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
wow, what a surprise this was
Author's Response: Trust me when I wrote it it was not supposed to be like that, but somehow it ended like this. I love what the muse did though.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2019 10:42 AM · On: Attempted Murder
this is a new Michael I never seen before
Author's Response: Hey, I figure since is an AU world that I take advantage of it. Even though he's different I hope that you still liked it.
Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2016 06:13 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Realmente una historia impresionante!!
Felicitaciones.
Adriana.
Author's Response: Muchas gracias. Tus palabras me hacen sonreir. Hasta luego.
Reviewer: rukia12 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2016 09:15 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
fuck that is a story...
usually i'm not the kind of people easy to surprise but for sure you really did. that's the first story i read about you and i will make sure to read the other.
you writing even if it's not your first language like mine are really great, the enigma, the evolution, the complexity of the personnage and the story... really you did good
never douth about that
thank you so much for your effort
ciao
rukia
Author's Response: Thanks you so much. I'm really happy that I was able to surprise you. I will try to work on everything that is out there, sequels as well. Take care.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2015 06:47 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Loved how you ended this!! Totally different than other scary qaf fanfiction I've ever read. Great!
Author's Response: To tell you the truth it was kind of like a surprise to me too how things ended. Lol.
Reviewer: holly (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Brian Kinney's Boyfriend
I am not really liking Brian in this. If Justin is the killer, I am almost okay with him if he wants to off Brian. But I am sure it will not end that way. Interesting scenario though. I love murder.
Author's Response: Y dont u like B is it cause he is a total asshole? Because ummm...that's how we have always loved him. Not sure. Just here wondering. Let me know what u think when u r finished if u read it all. Later.
Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 12:48 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Such an interesting and unique premise, and the execution was flawless... you're such an amazing storyteller, the story just pulled me in from the very first line, kept me guessing till the very end, and needless to say I was rendered speechless by the twist in the the end... I especially love that the BJ love is strong and beautiful as ever
Thanks for this wonderful story, enjoyed it a lot
Author's Response: You know this whole story came out because I was reading something someone said that BJ love could happen through anything no matter what. And I totally agreed. And thus...this was born. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
You need a publisher because you are truly a talented writer. First, I thought it was Justin, then I thought it was Brian, then Michael.....I was so confused, at the edge of my seat and then you hit me with 2 serial killers in love. This is the best damn B & J story EVER!!!! You rule!
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much. Maybe one day it will b a dream come true. Thanks so much for the support. On to write more! Later, T
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:50 PM · On: Emmett To The Rescue
Oh oh,not good!! ~ yvonne xx
Author's Response: I know, shit happens. But you can blame it all on my muse. Lol. Later.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Finding The Guilty
Oh no!!! Justin didn't do this!! Right? ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: No comments. Lol.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 09:32 PM · On: The Body Of The Trick
Fuck!!! ~ Yvonne xx
Author's Response: Yeah, I know.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Cute Enough
I loved the first chapter alot!! ~ Yvonne xx
Author's Response: Hope you love the rest as much if not more. Hugs.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2012 12:35 AM · On: Cute Enough
great story
thank you for sharing
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: BritinForever29 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
This is brilliant. I can't believe it was Brian and Justin that were the killers. At the end with the last sentence that does mean that they still kill other people doesn't it? Britin.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know, right!!!! That is just so crazy. Umm, I don't know. I have to go and ask the muse. We'll see what happens then. Take care. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Hugs.
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
That was so great! I knew that Justin was a killer and I thought Brian was covering it. But I had no idea what a psychopath Brian was!!! It was insane!!! Great story unusual but really cool!!!!! I loved the cops they were so close!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah they were close but I could never let Brian and Justin go to prison. Yikes!!!! I would have ended things more drastically if that was my only option. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing. Later, T
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Holy shit. I had my suspicions about Justin the whole time but didn't think about Brian at all. Though I pretty much hyperventilated when Blake was killed. That was really good. So glad that I stumbled upon it and decided to read. <3
Author's Response: Me happy too, I love to hear that people like what I have written. To think that at one point when I was going to post the first story I almost didn't. Hope you enjoy all the other ones. Later, T
Reviewer: mightye (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2011 02:29 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
how sick of a Brian/justin fan am I if i thought that Brian killing all those people for Justin was incredibly sweet and romantic....
but other than that great work making everyone guess what the hell was happening and in the end being both of them....i for sure thought Michael had a part in Kip's murder....
Author's Response: LOL...i don't know. But a lot of people enjoyed it and I wrote it, soooo you're not alone in tis world. Whatever that makes us. I'm glad I could surprise you. Take care.
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: August 01, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Well there was enough death to go around this story to right at least one season of Criminal Minds that's for sure.
It was a treat to read a story where our boys are -what can I call them?- righteous? killers? hmmmm
I enjoyed the story a lot.
Marla
Author's Response: He, he, he, he. I love that show. I'm happy to hear that. A lot of people didn't see that coming. Cool, huh?
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Cute Enough
I read this awhile ago and it was such a treat to read it again. Love your work. I've been browsing through some of your pieces and re-reading my favorites.
This fic was so wickedly good! Wonderful imagination, twists, turns, and true jaw dropping moments. You really "caught" the reader many times. Right when you time something is so - well, you find out its not. Just fabulous writing.
I must say, this has got to be one of my favorite B/J fics or all time.
Author's Response: wow, thank you so much for those words. i've been reading some of my stories again to be able to write them sequels and what not.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
Fabulous chapter! I had to read the story again because I forgot exactly how the story ended, but clearly remembered that it was completely satisfying. This whole story, but especially this concluding chapter, is an amazing work of fiction.
You should be very proud. I read a lot and am very impressed with how you tied this story up in such a perfect bow. Each paragraph and switch of POV redescribing each scene with the important parts added for the first time - are perfect vignettes. Just enough new information to make your conclusion believeable, to create a picture in my mind, to repeat without becoming overly detailed and long winded. (a whole lot unlike my rambling review! lol).
The whole story is chilling not only because the murders were so horrendous but we, as witnesses, are put in the unusual circumstace of sympathizing with the killer(s). Such beloved characters as Brian and Justin HAVE to succeed as lovers NO MATTER WHAT!
Author's Response: I know right. I was very happy that everything tied up together. Thanks for rieviewing.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
OH YOU!
If it wasn't oh so marvellously, romantically, insanely for the love they have for each other, this would be a terrible terrible terrible end to a murder mystery.
Yet, you really pulled it off by letting Justin be the "innocent" I have always adored and allowed Brian to do everything he does if only because he could NOT protect those he loves.
They retain a love of mythic proportions, so how could I not forgive them (AND YOU!) for doing all they can to protect it?
BRAVO!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for those words. I try my best and I'm so happy that so many people liked it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Leaving It All Behind
Oh Justin. What terrible dreams/memories?
Author's Response: yes, indeed. poor kid, or poor other people. lol.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Terror At Debbie's House
Okay, Kennedy, that makes him the killer of Blake and is the guy in the mask who stabbed Justin once before. What about the rest of the tricks, Ben and Ethan and Daphne? (I got the impression Daph recognized her attacker and wanted to know how he got in the apt - so no mask and Kennedy doesn't make sense as someone she knows)
Chas Kennedy was the guy gunning for Brian's top spot at the ad agency, but drowned at his cabin. Is he a relation to Derek Earl Kennedy, the murderer?
That also leaves the trick in the elevator (penn) an Justin's parents' murder a mystery - if they are even remotely related.
There are also the mysterious circumstanses of Justin's hit and run, Hobbs, Brian's dad, and the guys who jumped Brian when he was tricking in the beginning of the story. Though, of course these may all just be red herrings.....
Bah, its all still such a mystery!
Author's Response: don't worry soon enough everything will make sense. glad ur so into it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Strange Effect
/ I LOVE YOU TOO BRIAN!! <3
ahem, I mean, isnt Brian adorable when he is jealous?
You have a cast of thousands here, so I have no idea who the other two killers are. Reikert killed Jason Kempt same as cannon. Justin was stabbed by a lefty, his parents by a righty, but all the tricks and Ben dont indicate a lefty or a righty killer. Hmmmm
Author's Response: are you sure about all that? we'll see.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:27 PM · On: The Body Count Goes Up
On no, not Daphne! I think there is some fanfic law that says you cant do that to such a favorite character! If not then I propose we make it a law, :o(
Author's Response: i really didn't want to do it. the muse made me. i swear. sorry.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Another Life Taken
Im totally stumped as to who the killer(s) is/are. Justin and his blackouts look so guilty at this point. But really, I just can't believe it is him. Brian, no, too. Daphne- but why. Michael- well he is certainly different than in cannon so I guess its possible. Duncan- it would be easiest to blame him since he is so new, Ben - he is also so different from canon and not in a good way, maybe he did it and committed suicide? I can't see the girls attacking anyone but Brian to get his parental rights to Gus. Nobody in the gang seems likely. I think it must be someone from Justin's past, someone who knew his parents, so his family seems most likely.
Great story so far and the tension is building nicely.
Author's Response: wow, i wonder what you'll say when you find out who it is. lol.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Jason Kemp
Ooh, nice stirring of the plot with the blackout thingys!
Author's Response: *wink* hoped you enjoyed every bit of it.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Jussy
Aww. I surely do feel the love growing, and the co-dependance, lol.
Author's Response: hey, that's a good thing. he,he,he.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Brian Kinney's Boyfriend
Why is Brian so violent with Justin? I hope that Justin is doing more than tolerating it, but enjoying it - otherwise its just squicky.
Author's Response: justin wouldn't stay there if the brunet was abusing him.
Author's Response: justin wouldn't stay there if the brunet was abusing him.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Finding The Guilty
Brian looked at him and shook his head. There was just no way in hell that anyone could believe that Justin was capable of killing someone. He pulled Justin, who looked like his world was falling apart all around him, close to him.
Protective Brian! YAY!
Author's Response: i know right. i like brian like that too.
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:04 PM · On: The Body Of The Trick
Brian then slid the door closed. Justin started crying and ran down the stairs. He needed to get home. He had never felt so bad in his life. He just wanted to close his eyes and die.
Whenever Justin cried on the show it just broke my heart, especially when Brian was to blame.
Intrequing start...
Author's Response: thank you very much for thinking so.
Reviewer: Maddiecat (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
ok.... that was intense! THIS STORY WAS AWESOME! all through the chapters i was saying 'It's Emmett!" "no, now its the detective' 'it's ted!' etc.
but i never really thought that the real killer(s) were who you made them. i dont want to say it in case someone is reading the story and checks the reviews!
but still, really good work! this was an 'on-the-edge-of-your-seat' type of mystery and i thank you for allowing us to be able to read it!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you enjoyed it. A lot of people were just like you trying to guess who it was.
Reviewer: loverandy (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Cute Enough
only thee words: OH MY GOSH!
Well, I can tell more than thee words.
It is fantastic!!! The best criminal story ever. Of course it's kinda uncomfortable to know that Justin and Brian are murderers, but the plot is awesome: sex, dialogues, murders and etc. You are an awesome writer.
I just couldn't stop reading. first I though Daphny was the murderer, then Michael, but I never thought it was B and J, maybe apart, but not together. I am happy that they are together though.
sorry for mistakes, english is foreign to me.
Author's Response: I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I had a great time writing it.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
This was the best detective story I have ever read. Never would have figured out that it was Brian and Justin killing all those people. Nice going.
Author's Response: He, he, he. I know everyone was trying to figure it out. They don't know who it was and they kept changing their minds. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks. Later, Tay
Reviewer: [email protected] (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
This story was freakin' brilliant!!!
Author's Response: I am happy that you think so. Yay! It was so much fun writing it and hearing what people thought. Some guessed it was Brian and some Justin and then they would get throw off by certain events. I like reading it sometimes myself. Thanks for reading. You take care, Tay
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
God this story was just great!!!! at the beggining I thought it was Justin, then when Daphne died I thought "Ok it's Brian" ahahah and at the end were them both!!! it's fucking great! I loved this story!!!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy to hear you say that. I'm glad you did. I don't know what go into my head when I wrote this. I think it might be the fact that my muse is twisted. Lol. Thanks for reading and letting me know that you enjoyed it. It makes my day. Hugs, Tay
Reviewer: gickynicky (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
I already finished reading this story five hours ago and I'm still stunned now... In the middle of the story I had the vibe that one of them was the killer, but never crossed my mind that it was BOTH of them!! You are amazing!!! You made them as a killer couple but you still make me love them. Pity Brian had to kill Daphne, but it was for the greater good (Justin). I can't blame him for doing that. Hehehe. This one really got me hooked. Wonder where did you got the muse..?? Had you ever watched Natural Born Killer? Your's much better. P.S: English is not my daily language, so pardon me if my writing is wrong. :D
Author's Response: I am so happy to read this review. You tell me that you are still stunned after a few hours after having read the story. That happens to me too when I read something so good that you can't stop thinking about it. So it makes me smile that my writing had that effect on you. I don't know what was happening to my muse when I was writing this. No, I have never watched that movie and wow thank you for saying that you like my stuff better than a movie. It makes me smile yet again. I understood everything you said here so don't sweat it. English is not my original language either so I understand how it is. Thanks for the words. Hugs, Tay
Reviewer: Anonymous Girl (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:32 AM · On: Cute Enough
I meant in the previus review 'someone who didn't have a key had to kill Daphne and thought Bri and Jus had a key so for this reason I ruled them both out although other than for that reason I thought it was Brian.
Author's Response: At the beginning did you ever thought it was both of them? Lol. A lot of people thought it was just one person. But each incident was kind of separate even if they looked like it was one killer. He, he. It was so fun writing this. You have no idea. Thanks for taking the time to read it. Later, Tay
Reviewer: Anonymous Girl (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:21 AM · On: Cute Enough
I originally thought Justin or Brian murdered Daphne. Why? She knew the person who was in her apartment and seem quite comfortable having him there until it dawned on her 'How did you get in here?' That moment I ruled Justin out instantly (among other reasons). Then I immedately starting thinking Brian but then I ruled him out for the same reason (the question about 'how did you get in here?'). I thought earlier in the story you said that Daphne gave Brian a key when she didn't want him waking her up in the middle of the night when he visits Justin. So it seemed to me why would she ask this question after she was aware that Brian's has a key. Was I mistaken? Did Daphne give Brian a key? Or did she intend to but never did? Or at some point did she request the key back? This is the only reason I ruled Brian out other than that I was almost sure it was him. However, after I came to the conclusion it couldn't be Bri or Jus because of the key thing... the only other person I could narrow down to was Michael (although I wan't comfortable with the answer... it just seem like w/Bri and Jus out of the equation the only other person made sense was Michael). Then I came to the conclusion that there were three killers (Justin, Brian and Michael) at first I was just thinking it was Justin and Brian but my thinking that both men were given keys to Daphne's apartment that the man who killed Daphne had to be someone with a key (that made me think Michael... and then I figured if Michael killed Daphne he had to kill other people too, so that's the only reason I felt he killed Ben, because before that I thought Justin killed Ben because he was the one who was with Ben before Michael showed up). Daphne's key question threw me completely off.
Author's Response: Oh yes, I can see that you have given it some thought. Lol. Yes, Brian did have a key that's how he got into the apartment. And that's why she was relaxed at first and then it was strange WHY...because Brian was there when Justin wasn't. So it dawn on her that something wasn't quite right. I like the way you were trying to find who it was. He, he. I hope you enjoyed reading this. Later, Tay
Reviewer: Anonymous Girl (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:53 AM · On: Brian Kinney's Boyfriend
You are more talented and gifted writer. Not one boring moment. And that's coming from a person with a very short attention span. I can't stop reading this story. The sex, love, plot, suspense, the pace of the story. It's all genius. It's like watching a movie whether than read a story. FABULOUS.
Author's Response: thanks a lot for saying that. i always like to hear what the readers think and words like this even better.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:36 AM · On: Emmett To The Rescue
Are you a man or a woman? YOU'VE DEFINITELY THE MASTER/MISTRESS OF SEX... Can't put this stop reading this stuff. The foursome w/Brian,Justin,Duncan,and Michael was out of this world!
Author's Response: You know you're not the first person to ask me that. I don't know if that is good or bad. Lol. But I like the part where you call me a Mistress of sex. Lol. Sounds good to me. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Later, Tay
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2008 10:54 PM · On: Life Sucks And Then You Get Killed
I find this story really bizarre and great at the same time. You kept it twisting and turning for the whole plot. I was always changing my mind about who I thought was the killer. On the bizarre side the ending is like, ahhh thats really sweet they are meant to be together cause they are so alike and Brian is trying to protect Justin. But then it's like hold up physcos!!!!
Author's Response: He, he, he. I'm happy to hear that. I didn't want anyone guessing so fast. Lol. I'm glad I could pull so many emotions out of you. Yeah, it was a crazy ending but I think everyone liked that. Later, Tay
Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2008 05:25 PM · On: Cute Enough
OMG this is one of my favorite stories EVER. I'm so glad to see it posted here!
Author's Response: I'm glad that it is. This is one of the stories that I loved writing the most. He, he. It was so super fun. Hugs, Tay
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