Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2020 11:56 AM · On: Epilogue
Ok I am crying so much I couldn’t read the last bit I had to pull myself together and then read it again. That was beautiful thank you
Author's Response: Thank you. Could they go any other way?
Thanks for reading my story. I am doing a light hearted Short story right now. Very different for me and then I will continue my Cabin story and the Hate story.
Reviewer: Raemani (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 05:36 PM · On: Epilogue
A fitting, yet sad end to their journey. I have loved this story since finding it near the 3rd or 4th story (and heading back to the beginning after discovering the one I was reading was not the start).
I have always looked forward to reading the next installment as they were posted. It was quite a ride. Many ups and downs, laughs and tears. Getting to know the family that Brian ans Justin built over the years.
I am sad knowing it is ending and that there will be no more stories in this particular universe, but I understand it has to end somewhere and it was an fitting end, whether you stopped at chapter 16 or the epilogue.
Thanks for an amazing series that has kept me entertained for years.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. I felt it was time for this universe to come to an end. I admit I will miss this family but I have to other universes started and I have a short story started that will come out next. Thank you for hanging in there with me.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 02:34 PM · On: Epilogue
Omg so many tears. You wrote this so perfectly. My heart was with them all the way. I don't normally read death stories but this one blew me away. Thank you for giving them a beautiful life and a beautiful passing. ❤️🌈🌈
Author's Response: Thanks, Vicki. I wanted them to live and die on their own terms and I consider this a happy ending because it is the way they would want to go.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 16
Such a beautiful chapter. Full of love and family. They are all so close it can bring a tear to my eye. They remind me of my own family, crazy, funny, not afraid to say I love you and full of hugs. Thank you so much for writing this incredible story x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:45 AM · On: Epilogue
It's early in the morning and I'm still in bed with a huge headache from crying. I had to stop reading a few times, because I could't see anything through my tears. What an amazing story about a beautiful familiy. Aggrr now 30 minutes later my tears are still running down my face. I knew this was coming, they are both old. But aggrr I want them to live forever, so this story will never ends. But this ending is what I wanted to see, going together, maybe with less pain for Justin. Jesus I'm a blubbering mess. It's a good thing my kids are still sleeping for a few hours.
Thanks for writing this amazing story.
And now I need a big hug.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I blubbered as I wrote it but I needed for there to be a conclusion. I have fallen in love with this family but it is time to move on. I am glad I was able to touch you some how. There will be more stories.
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:12 AM · On: Epilogue
The end is truly beautiful....their hearts truly cannot beat alone!
Author's Response: Thanks for helping me get it out in good shape.
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:12 AM · On: Epilogue
The end is truly beautiful....their hearts truly cannot beat alone!
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2020 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wonderful writing. I could just imagine their very full Thanksgiving. I have a very small family so am not used to can't even imagine a gathering like that, but I think it would be amazing. So sad to see this series end, but I hope you will continue to write and maybe start a new series.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have truly enjoyed writing it. I have a short one shot playing around in my head that will be fun and light hearted and then I plan to do a couple more for the Cabin story. I will also continue the Father's Hate series. That should keep me busy for a while. Again, thanks for hanging in there threw all of it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2020 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
That was so full of love and I loved that. Hearing them talk so openly made me go all kinds of feels in my heart. Seeing Daphne was amazing and I hope she gets to visit them she is like their little sister. Thank you for writing this it was amazing x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2020 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 14
It was so touching to see Gus and Trent together their bond leapt off the page. It's so amazing how souls attract each other and theirs certainly did. As it is with Brian and Justin. They are definitely forever young. I love how you brought them and Marcus and Adam to the secert garden that place is magic. I was moved so much listening to Brian and Justin talk. You really have a way of getting right to the heart. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2020 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Love this story so much. Hope it never ends.
Think I'm gonna re-read it from the beginning..
* hugs *
Author's Response: Well, it is coming to an end. This will be the last story in this series. I have a couple more chapters to complete and then I will move on to one of the other stories I have started.
I am so glad you have enjoyed my adventure with Brian and Justin and the family they created.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2020 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
Brian and Justin are so connected and seeing your loved one going through that is not easy. They are lucky to have such loving support around them. Nico sure knew how to handle a frustrated and angry Justin I loved that lol.
I'm so proud of Brian how he is handling the Trenton situation and getting him back is important on so many levels.
You did a fantastic job with this x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2020 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12
Way to make me cry that really got to me. The fear in Justin's voice shook me. I can feel it jump out at me. Brian sure held it together so well for him. I pray that everything will go well for them. Adam is really getting on well with Marcus and I'm so happy to see that a family bond is a wonderful thing. So much happened I could write for ever but I'd give away to much lol. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2020 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Justin really has a choice to make doesn't he. I do hope he picks the one that will give him the better quality of life. Brian is his power house keeping him going and that is true love for you. Nico and Kevin are funny and I can picture them sneaking around like naughty school boys lol. Marcus the poor guy is gonna find it hard but he can do this and Adam might give him strength. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2020 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow talk about a cliffhanger 😱. That's so not fair leaving us waiting like that. There was was much emotion I was spinning my head. I feel for Shelby having to share her husband isn't good and I understand why she does but it doesn't make it easier. Marcus is dealing with the news of Adam so good and his interaction with Brian moved me. As for Nico and Kevin hotness.
brilliant work c
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2020 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
Yet another incredible chapter. I'm so glad that Justin's show went to well and Brian felt the fresh love wash over him again just like the first time. I do hope everyone gets to know Adam, his upbringing I can tell is why he put off knowing Dan and that is horrible. Now though he can get to know more of his brother through his family and friends.
Bren and Jed are so sweet together, I truly hope they are forever even though they are young I do hope so.
and a new boy Nico he seems so sweet and perfect to join this gang.
Poor Trent he is really hurting and I hope he gets emotional therapy as I great he needs it more than getting it from Gus.
you have left me hungry for more.
Fantastic work as always x
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2020 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 8
Gus will take care of Pen. Shelby is awesome that she is welcoming him into their home. Cliff hanger- who is the mysterious man?
Author's Response: The next chapter is up so you can find out who he is now.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
That was so emotional, I have a major lump in my throat reading this. Poor Pen that was so sad and I could feel the fear in Gus's voice and his shaking in his body. I hope he can recover well.
Omg who was that who actually walked in and made Brian pass out.
Wow wow wow
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2020 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 7
That was brilliant, my heart shattered for Jed. How on earth could his mother do that to him no matter what you never leave a child behind. I'm so glad Bren and the others were there for him. Bren and Jed I think are made for each other and their growing love is beautiful to see. Marcus I think will shine taking him in and looking after him it's definitely just what he needs. I have to give Jed a high five to have gotten Brian to go to Justin and how he surprised him was perfect and may have helped Kevin get his dream career. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2020 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh Justin I don't think you should have went that far with Marcus. I understand the emotions going around but it was a mistake. Brian loves you and is hurting just as much. Getting together and healing together Would be the best thing to do. Bren and Jed are so sweet , I really hope it goes somewhere. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2020 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow poor Brian and Justin and Marcus all grieving and trying to keep breathing. Brian’s deep seated pain management ways of dealing when he cannot deal is front and centre again.
Let’s hope Justin enjoys his work and regains his strength. Plus let’s hope Brian gets his arse in gear and goes to his sunshine
Author's Response: I like the way you think. If you have read this whole series, by now you know how I think. LOL
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2020 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
My heart is breaking Brian is taking this so hard and trying to push everyone away. Marcus is hurting Brian just can't see it properly over his own grief. I feel for Justin as he is doing all he can snd I can see how much it's hurting him to see his husband in so much pain. Gosh I hope things get better for them. As for Gus he is so lucky to have such a wonderful wife who can see the love between him and Pen and know it's not threatening her relationship with him. There is a lot of love in the whole family.
Fantastic work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2020 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
Omg I'm broken after this chapter. Crying here first thing in the morning. I could feel the pain leap off the page and seep right into me. The love they had for Dan and for each other came across so well. My heart goes out to Marcus, he will need the support from all and with it they will see him through it.
Powerful work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2020 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh wow so emotional, my heart was in a clench reading this. I love how the boys look after their friends. It's so cute how jealous Brian still gets over Justin it shows how much he loves him. I hope Marcus gets back in time. Fantastic work x
Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2020 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
I have been reading these first four chapters for the last 2 hours. I was crying 2 minutes into chapter one. I have loved each and every word written of this entire series. I am sad this is the last installment; but what a wonderful journey you have taken me on. Thank-you for causing all the emotions to bubble over and for allowing me to entire your magical world.
Author's Response: I am so glad. When I started this series I had never really written anything. I think knowing I have tugged on heart strings makes me the most happy because it means I have touched something in someone. I try to make them human and yet keep the personalities of the characters we love so much. Thank you for the compliment. I am not nearly done writing.
Author's Response: I am so glad. When I started this series I had never really written anything. I think knowing I have tugged on heart strings makes me the most happy because it means I have touched something in someone. I try to make them human and yet keep the personalities of the characters we love so much. Thank you for the compliment. I am not nearly done writing.
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