Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2019 10:10 PM · On: Always

this sequel to Forever Young is totally fantastic. I wanted to shake and slap Brian so many times for not doing what it was plain to all his family, friends, and Justin that he end things with Collin. Love the ending.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2019 01:06 PM · On: Always

Love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2019 09:25 AM · On: Sweet Smiles

why did Brian get married in the first place?

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 01:03 PM · On: Always

I really liked this story. One of my favourites.<br />True love at first glance. It is full of unexpected events and full of emotions. I love it.<p>Of course, I like "Forever Young" and "Kinnetically Charged Spilt Personalities" stories too.<br /></p>

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 07:21 AM · On: Always

Very satisfying sequel. I just love a happy and hot Brian and Justin relationship:-)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2015 11:25 PM · On: Always

Wow, that was so cool of Vic to come back from the dead to attend the wedding AND bake a cake!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2014 03:27 PM · On: Always

I first read this story a while ago and I loved it then. I ve read every piece of B/J fanfiction out there worth reading and some of it is truly brilliant, but I will 'always' come back to this story because for me it's the best of the best. Thankyou.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Always

Fantastic story! I spent the past twenty hours in bed reading this series in one fell swoop. I couldn't stop till I finished. Loved it all - even the over-the-top angst. Thank you so much for writing! TAG

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Etched In Glass

Alicia,

Don't use Photo bucket. Upload your banner here and it will always be there. Go to the upper menu bar and select Account Info; then click on Manage Images, and Upload New Images.

Now back to the green tree image feature in the tinyMCE editors.

Where you placed the URL before, just below that is an image list pop down window and your loaded images will be there; then you can insert them to your story's panel - right margin or centered.

bob

Author's Response:
Yeah sorry but I never uploaded anything here, and I am no good at it. So I guess it will just have to stay the same. Plus I am not sure if I even have the photos anymore. Rory had made them and used photobucket and then they got deleted from there. So again no idea, sorry for the inconvenience. I wish I could fix it. I miss my banners, but they are no longer on lj either.......SATURN

Reviewer: nosleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:10 PM · On: Always

This story is terribly underappreciated.

Author's Response:
Thank you that is very nice of you to say. I particularly enjoyed this one. I think it's fantastic. Thank you for stopping to review.........SATURN

Reviewer: RayOfSunshine841 (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2011 05:49 AM · On: Graduation Day

I really hated you for a long time there, due to how much I cried, but thanks to the ending, the hate subsided :p Thanks for a great story!

Author's Response:
Well you unfortunately aren't the only to mention hating me for this one, and even others I've done. However I am glad I made it all better, or at the very least helped it subside. Thank you for your review it is much Loved........SATURN

Reviewer: Jill (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Forwards And Backwards Part 3

you just keep making it worse.... :'(

LOve
Jill <3

Author's Response:
I'm very sorry. Did you ever make it to the end? ..........SATURN

Reviewer: Jill (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Forwards And Backwards Part 2

You're mean you're a very Very cruel person.

5 YEARS!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jill (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Sunshine Pendant

*Grrrrr*
What have you done to my boys :O

LOve
Jill <3

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Always

I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:
I am happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to say so. Later........SATURN

Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Always

Thank you so much for the story. Actually I should say stories, as I must include here “Forever Young”.

The ending was truly amazing. There are at least two thoughts or situation that I just have to mention. The part where Jonathan says to Brian:

. “So how about you grow some fucking balls,” .

That was great, so much like QAF when Brian tells Justin almost the same thing.

Another wonderful moment in the story is when Brian asked Justin when he is returning to London to pack his stuff. Of course Justin tells Brian something like he is having his stuff packed and shipped to him as he is not leaving Brian. Not now, not ever. That wasterrific.

Now that I think about it, there are many of those such

instances that I truly enjoyed. Way too many to mention

here.

So what more can I say? That you so much for your

efforts and talents bring us such a terrific story.

DavidR

Author's Response:
Thank you for such an amazing review, it was very kind of you. And for including the first part Forever Young.

Grow some fucking balls... yeah I know it was a Brian line, and usually I would never use it for someone else, but it was just too fitting. Plus I figured it showed that Jonathan and him had become friends and maybe Jonathan had picked up a few things from Brian. It was fun.

As for Justin not going back to London well, I figured he'd never leave Brian side again. Not to mention his family and friends which he no doubt missed as well. So he let Keegan do it, he's good for a hundred and one different reasons in this story, hehe.

I'm really so happy that you found a mulitude of things you like about these two stories. I worked so hard to make sure that they were something that people could read and enjoy. I thank you so very much for stopping to tell me. It is so greatly apprecited. Later..........SATURN

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Always

Thanks you so much for taking the time and finish this story. And what a wonderful ending it was. The kind we all hoped for.

If I remeber correctly there´s still one WIP of "Something or other". Will you finish this too?

Hugs, Sunny

Author's Response:
I am so glad that it lived up to expectations. I worked really hard on it and to hear that makes me happy.

SOO will be finished. I know it's taking forever but I'll get it done, I swear.

Thank you so much for reviewing it is so appreciated. Hugs you back..........SATURN

Reviewer: Lena (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Always

I can't wait to read again this fantastic story, wonderful job.

You forgot to put Yes on completed.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review, and for telling me about the yes thing. Which I fixed. . I so appreciate it. I wish you'll enjoy the story again. Later.........SATURN

Reviewer: Mediana (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

it's been so long since this story has been updated so I figure that this is it..God I don't know what to say. I feel so torn. I want to know that everything goes well. I so want a happy ending for them. I really hope you decide to finish this. It's a great, great story.

Author's Response:
Sorry for the long wait on my reply. I have finidhed this story now and the last chapter is up now. I wish you'll enjoy it if you're still reading fanfic and still interested in this story.Thank you so much for taking the time to reply and again I'm sorry for not getting back to you sooner. Later.........SATURN

Reviewer: sarahrei (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 02:40 AM · On: Graduation Day

Please put me out of my misery and post another chapter. The heartbreak in the last few is almost too much :)
Seriously, I reallly like this story. Although, I have to say that I am hoping that somehow Brian learns that Collin is the one who suggested Justin move. For the life of me I can't figure out why other people aren't "more involved" in the situation (ie. jonathan, trudy, debbie, or even mikey). I really like the sex flashbacks (cupcakes) and I was happy Jus told Col about how much of a bond B&J have. I think the only thing that has gotten me through this whole Brian/Collin thing is they haven't been together since Justin woke up. I have to say if that changes I don't think I will be able to read anymore. I'm a sap..
Anyway, I am loving your story and hope you update it soon.

Author's Response:
First I am very sorry about the long wait on my reply. I have switched e-mails for this site so it won't happen again.

I think you will be very happy in-deed when you read the last chapter of this story. Which will be very soon by the way and no joke about that either. I love the fact that commented on the cupcakes. Believe it or not, not many did? I didn't get that. Also the Jus and Col thing yeah I needed for Justin to really show him what he was asking of him, it was just so much. Col never seems to get that, and quite frankly doesn't care. There is more involvement with all the others to 'help' Brian along. I really think it's everything it needs to be for the ending of this story and I wish you'll enjoy it. Thank you for this wonderful review and again so sorry for the wait.............SATURN

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Graduation Day

Just to say how much I am enjoying this...getting very angry with Collin...if he loves Brian so much he should just let him go(mind you as others have said, who would be able to?well Justin , obviously 'cos that is real love!)...obviously he is gonna lose and hurt so bad!...anyway...you write good girl...never mind the grammar etc...it is always readable...

Author's Response:
Thank you for being so kind in your review, and especially for over looking the grammatic errors. Collin will definitely see the error of his ways in the next chapter. Because you're right he's not the one and Justin is the one who truly loves Brian and he will be rewarded for that in-deed. Also sorry for the long wait on the reply I have switched e-mails so it won't happen again. Later.............SATURN

Reviewer: e. (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Graduation Day

im longing for an update..
espeically one that finally doesnt bring tears.. OKAY i wouldnt mind if it's happy tears.
SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEASE?

Author's Response:
I am seriously wishing to bring you happy tears very, very soon. Thank you for this and sorry for the wait on my reply I have switched e-mails for this site so it won't happen again. So sorry.........SATURN

Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 05:29 AM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

Wow, I will never look at a cupcake the same way again, I love cupcakes and that rainbow chip icing sounded so nice and then as I kept reading what happened to the cupcake, wow, that was pure genius from you. I loved Justin wanting to beat Collins ass, in Collins defense who would give up a marriage to Brian easily cough-nobody-cough, but Collins going down eventually (and not in a good way lol) so I am happy. I wish Collin had mentioned in his little chat to Justin that Brian hadnt touched him since Justin woke up, yes that would have been great for Justin to know and smirk about lol and Brian well he just seems like his head is gonna explode soon (both heads if he doesnt get some justin relief soon)lol

Author's Response: Yeah cupcakes are good, hehehe. That part came about as a request from Rory. She was eating cupckaes and I was writing a sex and well you can see just how easily we came to the desicion. It came out really well and she really liked having her baking/cupcake obsession put into a Bri/Jus sex scene. As for Justin I do kinda wish that I could've put a nice ass kicking for Collin in there without ruining the story, but alas. But I love your suttle way of catching the part that no one would ever easily give up Brian. It's very true. And no Collin is not going to enjoy being brought to his knees in the next chapter, and I'm so happy about that, hehehe. I think though that if Collin was foolish enough to have mentioned that Brian hasn't been able to touch him since Jus had woken up then Justin wouldn't have bothered bringing up leaving I think that would've told Justin a whole new story instead of Jus just thinking that Brian felt guilty and what not. And you are so right about Brian's heads exploding, he's not getting any relief from all of his troubles it seems as though he is tortured more each day he goes without Justin and it's heart breaking. Thank you so very much for this wonderful review, you really got the story as well and I just love that. Plus you are my second mention for the cupcake part, hehehe. So much fun!.................SATURN

Reviewer: Julia (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2008 02:42 PM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

What an emotional chapter, I feel bad for Brian trying to stay with Collin because he feels like he has to stand by his vows but I also think if you dont love your spouse then the marriage is over, there isnt much point trying if your not in love with them so its a sticky situation. I loved Mikey being there for Brian even though it was early hours of the morning lol. The cupcake flashback was so hot, Collin is abit of a meany asking Justin to leave but hes trying to keep his husband so thats understandable, and Justin I wish he didnt have to be hurt so much, he loves Brian so much and has to put up with Brian being married oh the heartbreak, please put me out of my misery and tell me you will update soon? and is the lovefest in the next chapter? or the one after?

Author's Response: Okay first off I just want to say....YES! yes, yes, yes, yes yes, YES! (and just imagine Kevin in home alone as I do it, hehehe) You got it! You got the whole thing! I am sooooo happy right now. Okay, okay I am done doing the happy dance, you know dork ville here. Anyways can you believe you're the only one that has commented on the cupcake flashback? It's hard to fathom because I thought for sure people would be happy for a sex scene for a change in this story, but oh well I got one and that's all that matters. The sticky situation between Bri and Col is hard but even with out the love Bri made the commitment and now he is trying his damndest to stick by it, and it hurts everyone involved but with marriage I think you have to give it a try. Even if it is hopeless like it is in their case, but that'll all be over in the next chapter yeah! Yes we're almost there. I gotsta say that I love my Mikey in this story although he should've smacked some sense into Brian before he made such a stupid move of marrying Col. Yes I know it's stupid to say that when I wrote it but there is always that feeling of looking at it in different ways even for me. Col is very much a meany for asking Jus to leave but thank you for seeing it as he does, that means a lot. I also hate that I am hurting Jus so much and I loved the way you put that he has to put up with Brian being married it's very fitting. But no worries as I said all the heart ache will be over in the next chapter and I will make sure that the ending is fitting to the love of Bri and Jus. I will be taking some time tfor my other stories though so the update won't be for a little while but I will get it I swear. Thank you again for such a wonderful review it's amazing me that you managed to see all that was there, I appreciate it so very much................SATURN

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2008 03:55 AM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

i knew there was a reason i stopped reading this brfore. i couldn't syand brian being with collin before and now collin making justin leave so brian can be happy is killing me. aagh!!

Author's Response: You poor thing, yeah there was a reason and maybe I should've put the this is the heart wrenching one on the authors notes to warn people off. So sorry. But you made it through and now there is only one chapter till your happy Jus and Bri ending. I am so proud that you kept reading even with the content being so hard, because I am in love with this chapter, but I know it couldn't have been easy for you. I promise to make it better though so just like imagine all the way Bri and Jus get back together until next time. That will hopefully help with the heart ache. Again thank you sooooo much for reading it and replying you know how much I love your feedback..............SATURN

Reviewer: Rach (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2008 03:49 AM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

Ok so Brian doesnt love Collin so why doesnt he leave him, I assume its that he doesnt want to hurt him but then why is it ok for him to hurt Justin by staying with Collin, hes shattering poor Justin's heart aswell as his own, I think Collin is abit selfish I know he loves Brian but he must see that Justin and Brian are so in love with each other so why keep making them miserable, Justin loves Brian enough to leave the country because he thinks that will help Brian but Collin doesnt love Brian enough to let him go and be with Justin the love of his life, I need the next chapter like yesterday lol

Author's Response: Okay so you got it Collin doesn't love Brian enough to let him go. He wants to keep him for himself, I mean wouldn't you? Collin knows just how much they love each other, he's known it from the beginning but as he said to Justin it never detered him from trying to get Brain as a permanent fixture in his life and it won't deter him from trying to keep him in just that way. But Collin does think that with Justin awake and moved off that they will all move on. He thinks Justin will find a new love and then Brian will finally love him and everything will be perfect in the world of Collin. It's delusional and ridiculous but he wants the chance. But for Brian he's not staying with Collin just because he doesn't want to hurt him, he's staying with Collin because he's married to him and he's taking responsibility for his actions in life. Yes it is hurting Justin but he never thought that it was okay to do it and with him letting Justin go he thinks he's rectifying that in some way. I hope this helps on your view of the story. I'm so happy to get such a great review for this chapter Thank you so much, it was really thought out and detailed I love that...............SATURN

Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2008 02:44 AM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

nooooooooooooooo justin cant go to london, collin has some nerve telling justin to leave, if collin cant fix his marriage its his own fault he shouldnt be going to justin about it, justin shouldnt have to leave hes been through enough crap already, and brian needs to grow some balls and divorce his husband, I cant believe hes just going to let justin go so he can be with collin when he doesnt even love collin, cant believe he would hurt justin like that and just let him leave the country, I hope he comes to his senses real soon, update soon

Author's Response: Um, well let's start off with Brian's balls, he's got some and the fact that he is sticking to the vows he made shows just that if you think about it. He's being a man and owning up to his choices in life and not just running away. I mean if I just dropped off and had Brian break his vows and just leave without truly trying to work things out it wouldn't be a story worth reading. I would be coping out and Brian would be taking the easy way out. Plus I truly think that if Brian took vows that he would stick with them because he is just that type of man. So in staying with that I have to see this through and if I didn't I don't think the readers including you would appreciate it. I really think you'd feel ripped off at the end. As for Collin he is turning into a bit of an ass and no he shouldn't of but he's looking at losing his husband and I think he thinks asking Justin to leave is truly the only thing he can do to keep Brian. I mean if you were Collin wouldn't you do anything and everything to keep him? Now Justin leaving well Brian has no idea Collin went to see Jus so in turn he's thinking this is just what Justin wants. However if Bri did know about Collin's little speech it would be a whole different story. Because he's not letting Jus go just so he can be with Collin he's doing it for Jus and only Jus. I hope this answers some of fears and questions if you have any more just let me know...................SATURN

Reviewer: CP (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 11:42 PM · On: Graduation Day

Glad to see that you updated. This chapter was painstakenly wonderful. Everyone is suffering in their own way.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Stay Well
CP

Author's Response: Some how you got lost when I was doing replies. I mean your reply was literally not on the page but I knew you were here some where so I wnet in search of you. Thank you so much for stopping and reading and replying you're always so good to me. This line you wrote...."This chapter was painstakenly wonderful." was the thing I was looking for, you have no idea just how exstatic I was to read that. I knew this chapter was hard, and harder than most, but I really took the time make sure that it was a chapter that worked your emotions and took the story where it needed to go and I was just hoping that the readers would see that through the heart ache, and of course you did. I am just so happy to know that. Plus your comment about EVERYONE suffering in their own way you caught that too. You always manage to see what each piece means and what is really there you never miss a beat, and I am so grateful for that you'll just never know. Thank you again sweety this one just made my day...............SATURN

Reviewer: conni_h (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

Ups,
I just want you to know I wrote the review on the wrong chapter.
This rewiew belongs to the chapter "Different Kind Of Pain".
Conni

Author's Response: I got it and I left a reply on it thank you..............SATURN

Reviewer: conni_h (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 08:09 PM · On: Graduation Day

I really love this story. You write true to the character of Brian and Justin. But right now my heart is broken for them and the only thing helps me to wait for the next chapter is your promise for an happy Brian and Justin ending. Conni

Author's Response: Wow thank you so very much. I am so glad that feel I have kept the characters real in this story, I have really tried hard to do just that. As for the happy ending I guarantee it! I could never do anything less. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review it made me very happy............SATURN

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2008 01:53 PM · On: Different Kind Of Pain

I so love this sotry. I really hope that you'll finish it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it................SATURN

Reviewer: e. (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2008 09:09 PM · On: Regardless Of Pain

i actually started sobbing with this chapter..
i've never cried reading a fic before
arr... this is just too sad.

Author's Response: Ah I'm so sorry for making you cry, but I have to say that I'm exstatic that it hit a real emotional nerve. It's something I strive for when I write so thank you for letting me know that I had accomplished that. I really hope you weren't at work when you read it. That's happened quite a lot for this one. I hope you're enjoying the rest and that in the end it is all worth it for you. I am almost done writing the next chapter so hopefully the wait won't be too much longer for you. Again thank you and I'm sorry it made you cry...............SATURN

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