Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2020 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 23

Loved this series and your take on B/J later in life! Wish the video was still available. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2016 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow, this was a very powerful sequel and once again I felt drawn into the lives of this diverse yet loving family - they have become oh so easy for me to care for and I will miss them, that is for sure.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sending feedback! 

Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 23

This series has definitely become one of my very very favorites. It's beautiful and I love it. Every word, every phrase, every sentence is utterly perfect and completely Unforgettable.

Author's Response:

Wow, such high praise.  Thank you!  I'm really glad you enjoyed this series.  It was fun to write.

Mickie

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

How will Mark take the news of Taylor? Shasa can make him give up his parental rights to Gus for the reunion to happen perhaps. I'm guessing again. :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 20

I knew Dane was history crusing on Gus first. I sense Gus will know his dads already know about this. He is too intune with them not to when it goes down.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 18

Glad to see Yury slammed down.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

Immigration; Brian can hang him or his relatives perhaps. Cool.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 13

How will Mark act seeng a painting of Taylor? humm....

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 11

Matchmaker indeed. How this works out will be amazing I'm sure.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

What a family cluster fu*k!!!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ok, Clare is the older mother but her boys were John and Peter. Did she have another son? Did Jack have another son with his daughter? Gotta to read and find out. This is intense stuff.  :)  I smell incest too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm thinking Sasha and a teacher who didn't want a kid and didn't want to go to jail too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ria's interest in them keeping the baby leds me more to Sasha still. Maybe a student friend or a teacher is the dad. Gotta read and see if I'm close to the plot.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

From the timeline I suspect the twins. Sonia would be in ballet, my guess is Shasa is the mother. How did she hide the tummy to term? I can't see a none relative doing this. The mother knows Gus very well. I'm dying to find out who the father is. After all this story is called Gene Pool.  :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wonderful series" any chance to have this one on a PDF file like the last two.

Author's Response: Thank you-it's already done and posted on my site at live journal.  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 23

I had a feeling it would be a double engagement. What a truly wonderful ending to a stunning story. I've loved every minute of it. Your writing is just effortless to read and your characters so real. And of course we love our Justin and Brian that you create. They are so incredible no matter what situation you put them in. Tonight the 4share website is not working but I'll try again tomorrow. I have a DVD collection of hundreds of B/J vids and I'm sure this will be another one to add. It will remind me of you and your amazing series. I'm so sad to see this end but hoping that there will be more stories from you about our favourite couple. Hugs.

Author's Response: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79jVOOOlFuo   Big J-here's a youtube link to the same vid.  Hopefully this works better for this site.  Thank you so much for being such a great source of support for me.  I've enjoyed our relationship from day one!  It's been a true pleasure getting to know you, as well as all my other readers here at MW.  I've just finished preparing an original story for submission to a publisher next week.  I'm crossing my fingers and toes that they want it!   I'll continue writing fanfic as long as my muse gives me ideas, but I'm going to concentrate on originals more.  All my best, Michele...

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 23

Just watched the vid made by qafmaniac! So BEAUTIFUL, love it, love it!!!!

Tears while watching it (dreaming that there is real Brian and Justin out there!!!) So much love for both of them..... 

Glad that Gale is now recovering and hope that Randy visited him.... 

Author's Response: Yes, the vid is amazing and so touching in light of what's been going on with Gale.  Here' s hoping for a full recovery.   xo, Michele

Reviewer: sunny (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 23

I loved your story and have followed it with excitement.  I do hope you write another one.  (I also read the story before this one.  You are an excellent writer and have provided many moments of reading pleasure.  Keep up the good work, and thank you.)

Author's Response: Thank you, Sunny.  I appreciate your kind words.  I continue to write, that's always a given...All my best, Michele

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 22

Great chapter for Sasha and Mark...

Sad it has to end but glad it will surely be a happy ending for the whole family....

Thanks 

Author's Response: Thank you!  Appreciate the feedback so much.  More next week.xo,Michele

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 22

OMG, that was so cool, she really does deserve to be happy and make Mark spend the rest of therir lives making up for the shitty thing he did. Man this famliy is just full of drama queens huh?? LOL!

Author's Response: Yes, there's a little drama queen in every one of them, lol!  Thanks so much for the review!  I appreciate your support of this fic so much!   Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 22

What a dramatic chapter. So enjoyed her maternal instincts kicking in and I loved a supportive Brian with Mark. I can see Sorina telling Mark all about Taylor but I'm not sure how he'll react. I'm so sad it's ending. I'm sure you have something wonderful planned for us addicted readers?????? Roll on next week.

Author's Response: Thanks Big J.  It will be sad to see this series end, but it's time.  I've started another story which I'll start posting in a few days.  Thanks so much for your support throughout!  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh and the plot thickens! This story is so good! so intriging!  I'm dying to know how  Mark is going to respond to the news he's a dad!

Great update.

Author's Response: Thanks Gina.  Conclusion next week  I'll be sad to see this end.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 21

  What a great chapter!! Justin and Brian were so fuuny, I knew that Gus would know that they were keeping Sasha's secret...Gus really queens out good, I understand him being upset with them but it was Sasha's secret to reveal. I'm still hoping that all will be made right with a happy ending for everybody... I was diappointed that you didn't let the hot man pn man sex scen continue between Gus & Aedan... you know how I love the man/man explicit sex scenes!!LOL... I can't wait for the next chapter and Mark meeting Gus wow!!! I guess for now the countdown will continue...Last 2 chapters (sob)

Author's Response:

Thanks Jasmine!  You mean you want more sex????What a surprise, lol!  I guess we'll have to wait for another time, another story.  Your feedback is always so much fun and I enjoy every minute of it.  Thanks for being such a great reader!

Hugs,  Michele

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 21

Ah Brian, love that everyone has your number grandpa...... Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Looking fwd to more. How the meeting w/ Mark isn't awful or too eventful. (one can only hope)

Author's Response: Yes, he's such a sweet man and always tries to act like a cold-hearted bastard, lol!  We all have his number:)  Thanks so much for the comments!  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

Such drama! Love it! Mark seems like the type that's going to want his baby.. I sense trouble ahead!

Great chapter. I'll be so sad when this story ends.

 

Author's Response: Brian and Justin=drama queen, lol!  Add Gus who's a quite a DQ himself and it's a formula for disaster.  Thank God for Aedan who knows how to tame his beast.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 20

  wow!! this chapter was so good! te truth finally came out...i'm so glad that sasha finally told gus and aedan that she is tay's mom. that must be a relief for her, it was such a heavy burden for her. i'm glad that aedan and gus were so understanding to her, now if her other family members will be that way. also you got rid of that over-sexed airhead dane, i'm sorry that tay had to be hurt because of that irresponsible idiot , but at least he's gone..grrr i would have personally wouldn't have been as calm as gus! i would have to kick some dane ass for hurting tay...grrr!! ok, let me calm down! LOL!! i can't wait for the next chapter and the family reaction to this new developement...also i'm crossing for a mark & sasha reuinion! oh well, let me get back to my porn (lol) loved your reply!! the countdown will begin!

Author's Response:

It will be interesting to see how the other parents react, especially Daphne and Alex.  Aedan was sooo happy to see Dane go, lol!  Now all we have to worry about is Mark...the drama continues.  Start your countdown, lol!  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 20

oh my-  what a tangled web we weave when first we start to deceive-  I think I quoted that right-  but oh my -  this should be an interesting meeting and I can't wait for Mark to come into the picture.

Author's Response: The quote was perfect and so apt!  We'll see if Mark ever has an epihany and picks up the fricking phone, lol!  Then we're going to be in deep trouble.  Thanks so much for the feedback!  Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter.  I wonder what's going to happen when Mark finds out he has a son. He'll want part custody too, and he'll want Sasha too.

Things are about to get interesting!

loving this story.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks Gina-wonder if Mark and Sasha will ever get together again, that's more the question.  She seems pretty adamant, but she did change her mind once before.  We'll see what happens next.  Thanks for the review!  Michele

 

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 20

wonderful chapter.

i knew eventually her mother's instinct would kick in. it's good to get all that out in the open. i can see her reasoning for not telling gus that brian and justin already know. gus would be furious at them for keeping it a secret.

i do see the thought of another child going through aedan's mind. he would be a father. just like justin.

Author's Response: I do think that Sasha has put a little bunny in their ear with the question of more kids and surrogates.  We'll see where that takes us.  Now comes the reveal to her parents.  Daphne and Alex will probably have a melt-down, lol!  Thanks so much for the feedback!  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 19

that was so well written and so hot!  very talented writer-  thanks

Author's Response: A huge compliment coming from a fellow writer-thank you so much!  xo, Michele

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 19

whew! hot chapter. but he can be a bossy bottom can't he.

it was sweet that justin wanted to relive their first meeting.

 

Author's Response: It was the most important night of his life so I guess he'd want to re-live it over and over.  Thanks for the review!  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 18

OMG, what a sensational, incredible chapter! Justin knows just what to do to improve their more than adequate sex life.  I def. need a cold shower or ten after that. Well written. Sent you an email.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm happy you got hot and bothered, lol!  Justin is quite the top when he wants to be...next week, he bottoms, much to Brian's delight:)  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 18

Hot, hot and sooooo much love between Brian and Justin... Thanks and update soon, please

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you could see that!  It was way more than scarfing-it was about trust and love.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 18

I almost felt sorry for Yuri falling down and probably being deported. He was funny the way he keeps going after Ryan and getting called a perv lol. Justin knew so much about being a dom and sub and for him to try the neck scarf he has obviously done the dom/sub thing before which felt out of place to me, I dont think he would ever feel safe and confident enough to trust someone to do that or even for him to want to do that with someone other than Brian even if they were split up so that part seemed very out of place to me, like if he was learning everything with Brian it would have been more believable than him having previously done it with someone who taught him how to do it

Author's Response: Yury's finally got what's coming to him, and about time too!  As mentioned in one of the chapters, Justin did explore this world briefly while he and Brian were apart.  What happened tonight is not something they would do with anyone else.  It was an act that could only be performed with someone you love and trust.  It was a gift  that Justin gave Brian because it's a kink of his, as we clearly saw in Season 1.  Thanks for the review!   

Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 17

I wonder is Sasha even loved Mark or if she simply was with him because she couldnt have Gus, and is she got Gus to raise Taylor because she thinks when or if she tells them the truth Gus will leave Aedan and be with her, ofcourse that wont happen but she might think it will

Author's Response: No.  She was attracted to Mark initially, because physically, he reminded her of Gus.  She fell in love with Mark the person because of who he is.  I think her gut reaction to having Gus and Aedan raise Taylor was simply made under duress.  It was the best scenario she could come up with at the time.  It was the wrong one and she's been realizing this for months now.  Thanks for reading and sending me a comment!  Michele

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 17

Thanks for clearing that up, I think I got confused because I think a trick is a one time thing, but it sounded like Kain and Justin saw each other on an ongoing basis and then with the painting it seemed like there was more between them as there was some form of relationship if it was ongoing and he meant enough to Justin that he would paint him, it would take along time if they were to list all their tricks lol but if its more than once and especially ongoing it doesnt seem like a trick, but whatever as long as hes not there to cause problems Im a happy camper lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you're feeling better about this.  Justin put Kain in the picture because he's the manager of the club and as such should have a place on the wall, lol!  It would take days and lots of paper to list down all the men they've collectively slept with, lol!  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 17

Even though Sasha is young she still made her decisions and if she decides she wants Taylor back Gus and Aedan wont forgive her for lying to them and having them raise Taylor and fall in love with him and then taking him away, big family rift happening there. Justin painting a picture of Kain a guy he has a past with and yet he never mentioned it to Brian, he obviously still has feelings for him if hes painting him so I can smell big trouble for Brian and Justin

Author's Response: Sasha did make her decisiona and right or wrong she's going to have to live with them.  It will be interesting to see what will actually happen in the end.  As I've said to my other readers who have voiced concerns.  Kain was a 'trick'.  He was someone Justin met during the years that he and Brian were apart.  They never were monogamous at that time and they never talked about their past hook-ups.  It would have been too much to expect them to compare notes when they were both clearly having many different encounters.  Kain will not rock the boat, you can rest assured of that.   Thanks for reading!  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 17

Such a great chapter with the contrast of the scene at the club along with Sasha moving in to be closer to Taylor. Loved this "“Does that include human beings?”  Trust Brian. He hid his concern about Justin and Kain well, I think. Looking forward to seeing what happens with Sasha so close to her baby. And of course the hot sex between our fave boys that is coming ? up in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you Big J, for everything you've done for me tonight!  Glad you liked this chapter! Michele

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2008 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 17

thanks for the update and more please. interesting...

Author's Response: Your welcome thess...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Selina (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2008 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 16

I dont mind the bdsm part, but I do have some resevations. I have read other bdsm stories where they are committed and only with each other and they were beautiful to read but I dont read bdsm (or any stories) where they are committed and then trick. I remember in this story (or I think it was the story before this) where they went to a club and I think Justin gave a dancer or someone a blow job and I almost stopped reading after that I just dont feel Brian would ever risk them doing it raw and then either of them still trick (no matter how minor the tricking was) so the bdsm doesnt bother me at all but from your replies to other I am starting to get the vibe that once again they might invite someone in and I have to say that I really dont think that fits in with the story, I know you have mentioned its a marital aid but I dont see how they need to invite someone else in to spice things up, there are lots of ways to do that just between 2 people. All the parts of bdsm Brian mentioned were things that they could do at home together and after everything they have been through if they need to either be with other or even look at others to be with each other just doesnt fit this story. I have read from the beginning but feel that if you wanted to go into that territory perhaps it might have been a good story on its own but not in this universe of story, thats just my feelings anyway. I noticed you havent actually given other reviewers an answer as to whether they will be with others or not even if just afew times so I dont know if to continue or not but other than that issue I love your story and plot etc

Author's Response: As I said to one of my other readers, this is not a BDSM story.  They are at the club to play, and I don't mean with other people.  Let's just leave it at that.  After 30+ years of marriage, there is no question at all about their commitment.  I'm glad your enjoying the rest of it.  Appreciate your frankness...it's important to me to hear my readers opinions.  Thank you!  Michele

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16

great chapter as always-  I hope Mark calls-  As much as a reunion would be akward, it would be great for the two lovers.  the club sound interesting.  I read a story in another fandom, a long time ago that explored that world. done will, it is a good read.  I'm sure you will live up to the challenge.  I'm always in awe how you have continued this universe into a compelling read with unique problems and solutions.  Well done.

Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint...it's really just a short journey for them, and only used as a marital aid.  It's not a BDSM story, per se.  Thanks so much for your very generous compliments.  I appreciate them very much!  Michele

Reviewer: Maria (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2008 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

I was happy for the early update but it seems like this is moving into group sex territory with the club and innuendos so I might wait until the story is finished so I can skip those chapters I really dislike reading stories where they are committed but then trick, its dissapointing for me I feel once they are commited it should stay that way, it seems to me like they arent enough for each other if they be commited and then go back to the group stuf, sorry if my english is bad I think it makes sense lol

Author's Response: Justin and Brian are firmly commited to each other, make no mistake about that.  What ever occurs at the club is mutual and really only another way of enhancing their sex life.  Don't worry-it's not going to turn into a big drama with other people involved.  Thanks so much for the review!  Michele 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 14

   Another good chapter!! You've got me worried about Sasha now, I'm glad that she's getting close to Tay but I feel no good will come for her moving in the (lower) apartment with Gus and Aedan. The truth is bound to come out because Gus and Aedan are very intelligent. I hope that Sorina needs to use some of that Taylor/Kinney initative and get Yury to stop hitting on her man..Harpoon that idiot and stuff him on the mantel!LOL....And another heart sex scene..my heart can't take it!! I love a jealous Aedan, I kept wondering if you were going to pursue the obvious attraction that Dean has for Gus and boy did you ever! I'm glad that Gus told Aedan that he was only attracted to one man, and I think he showed him passionately why Aedan is his one and only!! WHEW!! That scene was so hot that I had to tun up my airconditioning!! I can't wait for the next chapter...the countdown begins!!!!

 

 

Author's Response: Ahh, my dear Jasmine-I'm always happy when I can get a rise out of you, lol!  So glad you enjoyed the little scene between Aedan and Gus.  They are one hot couple and Dane was crazy to even think he'd get anywhere!  Sasha's plan to move in will be interesting, if nothing else.  She needs to be closer to Taylor and this is the only way without setting off more alarms than necessary.  We'll see how all the parent's react.  Thanks so much for you great reveiw, as usual!  Michele

Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2008 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 14

I don't think I have ever commented in the past, but I just wanted you to know that I am enjoying the continuing saga of the Kinney-Taylor clan and reading the latest update is always the highlight of my Saturday morning. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I love hearing back from readers, any time!  Michele

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

comee on gus, you're a smart man, look at what's in front of you.  "She looked like a Madonna, holding her child..."

jealous!aedan almost as hot as jealous!brian.

i was wrong, brian shouldn't get involved with the yury problem, justin should. that will certainly put a damper on yury's ardor. if brian talks to ryan, will he tell him about yury's stalking of him. open ryan's eyes to what could happen. if not then send in the calvary.

i feel bad for sasha, but live like that until either gus fines out she's taylor's mother or mark shows up. which ever comes first. either she's going to hurt. 

Author's Response: I'm afraid that if Justin learns about Yury he may go nuts and finally kill the guy, lol!  This is probably why Brian is choosing not to mention him.  J has his hands full with Sasha and Mark...Thanks so much for your feedback tonight!  Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

Love this chapter.  Gus and Aedan are getting close to the truth.

 Brian just might have to get involved with Yury, or maybe, Sorina and Ryan will turn the tables on him.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Gina...the plot does thicken with this new request of Sasha's... Yury continues his stalking...Appreciate your feedback so much!  Michele

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

I thought I'd left a review for this chapter but I must have been so flustered by the sizzling B/J sex that it was lost somewhere.  LOL!!! Love that Brian beat Mark on the court.  Age is just a number after all - just ask me.  Enjoyed the family tree - how complicated, and the parallels between Mark/Sasha and Brian/Justin.  "Tick, tick, tick…time’s up-what’ll it be?” Now that sounds familiar.

Author's Response: Glad the sex left you distracted and flustered-that means it was good, lol!  Age is definitely a number, for BK and anyone else who's still young at heart.  Thank you so much for the feedback, Big J.  I'm glad you are still loving this.  Michele

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

wow-  I feel sorry for Ryan-  Yuri is a beast-  Sasha needs to come clean to everyone-  it will be hard but better in the end-  can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

I guess there's a lot of things she should do, but will she?  More next week...thanks so much for reading and commenting!  Hugs, Michele

 

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 13

  What a good chapter!! I feel so bad for Sasha, how can a girl so intelligent have such a low self-esteem? I wish that something good would happen for both her and Mark because they both still love each other.It's good that she wants to be close to Tay, I wish that she had the strength to tell at least Gus that she is Tay's mom. I keep crossing for maybe a happy ending to all this heartbreak...I still think that Ryan and Sorina are much too young to be engaged....also someone needs to give that Russian fool Yury a good ass kickin back to Russia. Please let this idiot get what he deserves soon!! What can I say about protective Justin, I know that he's seems angry toward Mark, but I think he will start to give him a break once he see Mark still has feeling for Sasha and hated what he did!! At least that's what I hope. I just get so involved in this story I feel like I'm reading a good novel...LOL!! Oh well, the countdown begins!!

Author's Response: It is a novel-just stretched out for weeks and weeks, lol!    It's hard to understand the human psyche-some of the most beautiful people in the world are the most insecure...We'll see if Sasha won't find some relief soon.  Yury is a piece of slime and will need to be removed for good.  Who does it or how it happens remains to be seen. Thanks, Jasmine, for the feedback tonight!  Always grateful for the input!  Michele

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2008 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hope B or J figure out Sasha is depressed.  Cute how Brian was trying to get Justin to back off on Mark at the end of this chapter. Hope Yury gets caught.

Author's Response: Yes, hopefully someone figures out that Sasha is in such angst.  Justin's protective mode is understandable...Mark hurt his daughter and Justin can't forgive so easily.  Thank you for reading! Michele

Reviewer: sarahrei (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

Oh...

I don't like Yury...but I love how you brought him back!

Also, I have a bad feeling about the tour of Jus' studio. I wonder if there will be a portrait of Sasha in there? Hmm.

I love Jus in this chapter. I think I would have been even more rude to Mark if I were in Jus' place. Brian is too forgiving. But, Sasha never had the same hold on him as Sorina, so it makes sense that Brian is more willing to openly accept Mark.

Please post another chapter soon!

Author's Response: Justin is in fierce protective mode right now.  He won't relax his attitude to Mark until he deems him worthy.  We'll see if that ever happens, lol!  Thank you for your feedback!  Michele

Reviewer: Liberty (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 13

I so love pit bull Justin. Wonderful chapter hun.

Author's Response: Thanks, K-I love writing pit bull Justin, lol!  Glad you continue to enjoy this! xo, Michele

Reviewer: Liberty (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hey,

I just spent the last three days re reading, Krama and Gene Pool. Yes, I read them when they were on the old MW but I never finished the ending of Gene Pool so I wanted to reaquinte myself with this amazing series. I must say it just keeps getting better and better no matter how old Brian and Jusitn are. The love that they have for eachother and their family in this series is aboustly moving to the point of tears. 

Wonderful Job and I can't wait for a new updated. :) 

 Hugs, 

Keighley

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Keighley.  I'm very flattered that you took the time to read it all again...that is a lovely thing hear!  Having readers like you is what keeps me going in this universe.  Big hugs,  Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2008 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 12

What a great chapter!! You have made me grow to like Mark, he has so many layers to him. He is struggling with the abuse he suffered from his piece of crap step-brother, no wonder he couldn't fully commit to Sasha. I think both Sash and Mark deserve a second chance there is love still there. I want them back together but I still want Gus and Aedan to keep Tay! You have me so confused that I'm rooting for everyone!LOL. I hope that Sorina and Ryan don't get engaged...Sorina is too immature and Ryan seems to be struggling with his sexuality. Now, lets get to the best part of this chapter which was the scorching hot sex scen between Brian and Justin. That scene was so hot that my smoke detector went off!! You have done it again and I won't even complain again (try not) if you should ever slip in a heto sex scene.WHEW!! I think 60 is the new 40! LOL. Can't wait for the next update, the countdown begins!!

Author's Response: LOL, you are too funny!  So glad that I've redeemed myself in your eyes with the M/M scene, lol!   Our boys certainly know how to pass the time,eh?  Mark does seem to be a likable guy as Brian is beginning to realize but whether that's enough to get him back into Sasha's life remains to be seen.  I know that Sorina seems as shallow as a thimble right now but she'll be growing up pretty quickly over the next few weeks...be patient with her:)  Thanks so much for your lovely comments which always make my day.  Hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

Whewww..... I need a cold shower! Great sex scene! Great chapter. Love the talk  between brian and mark.

 You're doing an excellent job with this story!  I know how difficult it is to write a sequel, yet you make it seem effortless!  This story stands on it's own, it's amazing. 

I eargerly await each new chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you Gina-what a huge compliment that is coming from you!  I appreciate it very much.  Sequels can be really challenging, especially following on the heels of a really well loved story like Gene Pool , so I'm very gratified to hear that this is working for you as well.  More next week.  Big hugs, Michele

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2008 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 11

  What a great chapter!! I hope that I might be wrong abot mark and that he's really a good guy who loved sasha but, like another kinney was affraid to admit it...I also hope that sasha gets better mentally! I hate that Russian twinkle toes yury with a passion...ryan needs to get a backbone and tell that balding over-sexed jerk off and i hope sorina tell that idiot where to go...Boy Justin and Brian are as sexy as ever, even without having sex!! Can't wait for the next chapter...the countdown begins! 

Author's Response:

Thank you Jasmine!  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter...lthere's a lot's going on with everyone and hopefully B/J can hold it all together while  keeping their relationship as strong as ever.  You know how much I appreciate your feedback! 

 Hugs,  Michele

Reviewer: Allison (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2008 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 11

There is so much drama happening but that is what happens with teenagers, one thing that I love about this story is the strength of Brian and Justins relalationship and their love for each other so I must admit the idea of them perhaps bringing others into their relationship or even tricking starting up at the club would make me sad, Justin said he wasnt bored with Brian but if he wants to be with others after they have been monogamous then he is abit bored with Brian really, so I do hope he doesnt want to be with others, but if he wants to go to a club he must want to involve others otherwise they could just do it at home, however if they are simply exploring bdsm together without others then I say bring it on :) Brian was right not to step in with Yury, Sorina is almost an adult and has to be in charge of her own career and love life, and Mark didnt seem to care much about Sasha but maybe he was just nervous

Author's Response: He never said he wanted to be with others...he's just curious about what goes on at the club.  Sorina is definitely going to have to set Yury straight.  We'll just see if she can!  Thanks so much for your comments which are very much appreciated.  Michele 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

turning an argument into sex is one of the things they do best, even after thirty-something years.

i am so glad that brian decided to let sorina handle the yury problem on her own for now although i have to wonder what justin will think of the whole thing. i think it's time to switch daughters. brian helping sasha and justin helping sorina.

justin and brian getting invloved in a bdsm club? this i got to see.

thirty-something years and brian is still insecure about justin's love for him? “Are you finally getting bored with me?” Brian asked, waiting to hear the words he’d been dreading for years. He knew he’d get an honest answer. He just didn’t know if he was prepared to hear it.
i can't believe it. maybe he's the one that should receive a good spanking.

Author's Response:

Sex has always been Brian's guiding force and the thought that Justin might be even remotely bored sexually is not something Brian ever wants to deal with.  I don't think he was questioning his love, just his lust, lol!   Anything that keeps the endorphins flowing will be utilized enthusiastically... Brrian is wise to leave the Yury problem to the young ones.  Yury is a part of Sorina's world and she and Ryan need to deal with this on their own.  Thanks so much for sending feedback on this chapter.  You know how I love hearing from you!  Hugs, Michele

 

 

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2008 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 10

Imagine that a child of Justin's being stuborn. I feel for her, it is funny how people see wht they want to see.

Author's Response: Yeah, lol!  Imagine that!   People can be so blind sometimes, and of course, after its all said and done you kick yourself in the ass and say, Why?  Thank you so much for reading and sending me feedback!  Very much appreciated.  Michele