Reviewer: Blackwell (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2008 04:59 AM · On: Mi Casa es Su Casa

Your story is really amazing.

I've been reading it for some time now and can honestly say I'm intrigued about what's going to happen next, so, please, keep going! :)

Brian's worry for Justin is really adorable and heartbreaking.

Keep up the good work!

- B.

Author's Response: Wow, you've really made my day hun!  Thank you so much for the lovely review.  :)

Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2008 03:25 AM · On: Mi Casa es Su Casa

This is an excellent chpter Thank You

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Shelly.  I'm happy that the story is entertaining you! ;)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Mi Casa es Su Casa

You gave me everything I wanted in this chapter! I knew Brian would take care of Justin and that he would somehow figure out something had happened to Justin. Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter =)

Author's Response: Yay, I'm so happy that you're happy!  Although they are on the right track, the duo have some issues to deal with first.  Thanks for the lovely words of praise, Kat!

Reviewer: siren (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2008 06:47 AM · On: Mi Casa es Su Casa

brian and his "complications" issues...oh well, at least they are getting closer in some ways...though justin hyperventilating is sure to arise some interesting questions and conversation

Author's Response: Brian is concerned about Justin.  Just the fact that he is letting him stay at the loft, and in his bed, proves that he has "feelings" for the young man.  But Brian is also smart, and he is determined to find out what's going on with Justin.  Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Busted

  Ok, obviously I need my vision tested, I meant warm at night! LOL

Author's Response:

I make silly mistakes all the time.  No problem. LOL

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2008 06:59 AM · On: Busted

Busted for sure! Now that Brian knows the truth about Justin's lack of housing arrangements, I'm sure he's going to make sure he's taken care of now. I hope Justin finally tells Brian about what happened to him before he left NY. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Protective Brian is stepping up to the plate.  You can rest assured that Justin will no longer be sleeping on the streets!  As for telling Brian about what happened in NY, I wouldn't count on it right now.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Busted

thank god brian found justin. :-)) rose

Author's Response: It's about time!  LOL  Justin had him fooled for a while, but now Brian is furious.  :(

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Busted

time to face the music, and it may not be pretty. where to go from here? back to the loft of course.

yay, protective brian is kickin' in.

Author's Response: Yep, time to face the music, with both Brian and Daphne!  Protective Brian to the rescue. ;)

Reviewer: Sleep (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2008 07:22 PM · On: Busted

I like the story so far.Justin really has a rough life to face and this chapter was quite sad.Imagining the poor boy sleeping on the streets and cleaning himself up at the homeless shelter;still he was able to appear neatly at work and hide his rather sad situation.I'm glad,that Justin met Brian,who surly will help him.And Brian doesn't seem his typical asshole way.Like how you potray him.Hopefully the next chapter will appear soon. :))))

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely review.  My intent is to draw attention to the plight of the homeless in this story.  Sadly, it is a harsh reality, and it can happen to any of us.  Sometimes I get tired of Brian always being portrayed as an asshole.  Glad you like my Brian.  I'll try to work on getting the next chapter done quickly. :)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2008 03:52 AM · On: Office Meet and Greet

  Great chapter!! The heat is on between these two! I hope that Justin will follow thru on his attraction to Brian...update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks Jasmine.  Yep, there is some hot chemistry between them.  Next chapter will be interesting, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2008 08:42 PM · On: Office Meet and Greet

no miss communication there that's for sure. mutual attraction. wonder how it will go when brian shows him  "the cool places to go in the Pitts, since I never had the chance to find out for myself." i can't wait. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Sherry.  Yep, these boys have amazing chemistry, that cannot be denied! 

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2008 02:58 PM · On: Office Meet and Greet

I hope justin finds a safe place to live soon, its great the job is going well

Author's Response: Yes, Justin has found a job that he can be happy with.  (working with Brian every day...what could be better?)  Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Taking a Chance

 Such a great chapter! So gald that Justin had the courage to go to the Pitts, now if only he told the truth about what happen to him in NYC and also let Brian help him with a place to stay.. Aan needs to know when to ask for help are words that Sunshine needs to heed!! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Justin's ordeal prompted him to go to the Pitts into the comfort of Brian's arms.  He is being very stubborn about accepting help...perhaps Brian can change that!  ;)

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Taking a Chance

Oh that was so sweet when Brian was holding Justin in his office, it was fucking heartbreaking.

And that he hocked his watch to get to Pittsburgh to see Brian.

Where is he going to stay?? I sure hope his parents don't find him!!

Can't wait for more hon, Emma x

Author's Response: Poor Justin was so traumatized by his ordeal,but I think having Brian's arms around him helped.  I know it would have helped me! LOL  Thanks so much for reading and commenting Emma!  *hugs*

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2008 12:51 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

Poor Justin. I really do hope now Justin will go to Brian now. Great chapter, looking forward for more.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks Lynn.  Brian is just what Justin needs right now.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2008 12:40 AM · On: A Dreadful Turn of Events

 I just found your new story and boy do you have us on a rollercoaster! This is really powerful and so heartbreaking! I hope that Justin will find the courage to call Brian and tells him that he accepts his offer. I also hope nothing else happens to him. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi Jasmine!  This is a hopefully realistic portrayal of the plight of the homeless.  This is will probably be the worst thing that happens to Justin in this story.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Perchance to Dream

fPoor Justin. I have a bad feeling that something bad is going to happen to Justin. I really do hope Brian sees Justin again before it is too late. Great chapter.

 

 

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment hun.  Poor Justin will be very deserving of your sympathy, sorry to say.  Next chapter coming up soon!

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2008 08:12 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

OH no that last line has me a bit upset, I am looking forward to the next one but I am also a bit scared for Justin, please put me out of my misery fast.

Author's Response:

You're right to be concerned for Justin.  Something will happen in the next chapter, and it's not going to be good.  Hopefully, I'll be able to write it quickly, so I can post soon, and put you out of your misery. LOL

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2008 01:28 AM · On: Perchance to Dream

oh god... what will happen to sunshine?? please update soon. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Next chapter will reveal what will become of Sunshine.  I'll try to update soon!  Thanks for reading rose. 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2008 10:49 PM · On: Serendipity

It seems that Brian can't get Justin out of his mind. :) Great chapter, looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Brian's smitten with Justin already.  Now he just has to admit it to himself.  Thanks for the review, as always Lynn!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Serendipity

Excellant. Beautiful finding Justin again in the park as an artist. Hopefully Justin is doing well (not tricking).

Author's Response: Must be fate!  Justin only tricks when he's absolutely desperate, but things seem to be going fine right now.  Thanks for the review alys!

Reviewer: pfltea46 (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Reality Bites

Thanks for sharing.  I like your concept for the first time B & J meet.  Well written first chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words.  I'll strive to match the quality of all the ensuing chapters with the first.  I'm glad my story caught your interest.  :)

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Reality Bites

it sounds like pretty woman.... but I like it. :-)) rose

Author's Response: LOL  It does sound that way from the summary.  But trust me, it will be very different! ;)

Reviewer: Alana (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Reality Bites

I love this first chapter looking forward to your next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks Alana.  So nice to hear from a new reviewer.  I'll try to keep it interesting for you!

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:09 PM · On: Reality Bites

Interesting.  Brian is so sweet and caring.  Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Lorie.  Brian has that sweet, caring side that he rarely shows to anyone.  Hopefully I'll be updating soon.